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Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 11

Dean is free, yes!!! Hope the Doctor will be of help, because our favorite patient sure isn't out of the woods yet. Amazingrescue scene - looking forward to more.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 11

This was a very thrilling chapter.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 11

Y'know I have often wondered how they'd plan a whole hospital escape especially when you consider how much time they spend in them...and this was absolutely fantastic.

You captured the ingenuity of the hunters and their determination to make it work...and I love the fact that you made Dr Bowman a good guy...hope he stays that way.

Great update!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 11

Ooohhh, nice update.  They did it!  They did it!  Nice acting job, Dean.

 

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 14/02/08 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 10

Wow, Mal what a great update, and you had me on the verge of tears at the end there. Just glad the doctor's on his side and that Sam and the others are waiting in the wings...can't wait till the next one!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 14/02/08 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 10

Oh dear, that doesn't look good for Dean. You are doing a great job showing the rollercoaster of his emotions, first seeing Jo again, then the pure desperation when the cops arrest him. How will he get out of this mess? Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 14/02/08 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 10

I love this story, coz I just love hurt Dean, more please, keep up the good work, anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Silvertayl

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 10

man, the poor guy can't catch a break.

Author's Response: --yeah--but I warned ya.......

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 10

Okay--totally DID NOT see that twist coming!  Wow--poor, poor Dean.  He's at the end of his rope.  And now kinda has nowhere to turn.  Looks like somehow they'll have to get on the run again.

Author's Response: I always thought they were unreasonably lucky regarding the threat of being picked up by the police...

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 9

Great update. I really like the way Ellen considers the boys to be family. Poor Dean, he never seems to get a break. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks.  Yeah--they need an Ellen.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 9

I was really impressed with your medical knowledge in this chapter.  You have a good feel for Ellen.  Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks!--but i can't take any real credit for the medical info--the net is a wonderful research tool---just wanted it to ring reasonably true.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 9

Ooohh, great chapter.  Why do I like it so much when Dean is groggy, confused, and in pain?

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 9

Oh, man, poor Dean...but at least they found the Impala, and I may have been more upset if he'd wrecked the car as well as hurt Dean this much...lol

Great chapter and I couldn't agree with Sam more, I wish Gordon had survived so he could kill him all over again too...



Author's Response: Yeah--the car's growing on me.  "Course--I like tractors too.....

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 09/02/08 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 8

this story is awesome. The whole "gordon" issue never seems to get old and i love your take on this. Thank god he's dead!!! And i'm glad Sam doesn't feel guilty for once, cuz he totally shouldn't. And OMG CAN I JUST SAY ELLEN IS AWESOME!!! JEEZ SHE'S LIKE A SURROGATE MOTHER I LOVE IT!! She's so sweet to them, i love that she loves our boys!!! and she keeps tellin Dean she can't wait till he gets back home to heal...O.M.G SO HEARTWARMING...and it's EXACTLY things i could see her sayin in the show if things were to go down like that where Dean and Sam would need help. So i think you really nailed her character down! That's kinda one thing i wanted more in show, like Ellen being around for at least like 2 or 3 epis where she really shows how much she cares for the boys. And you've done an amazing job with that!!!! Can't wait for the rest!!!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 8

Ahhhh, I just love it when Dean is sick and miserable.  I feel so bad for him but wanna put my arms around him and hug him.  Will he be getting sicker in the next chapter?  (Yeah, I'm twisted. hehe)  I'm such a fan of the hurt/comfort.

Nice chapter.

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 8

Great update! I love the humor in it - Waylon Jensen??? Cool! Poor Dean, he really seems to be bad off. But even at his worst, his first questions are always about Sam's well-being. This was a very well written chapter and I am looking forward to more!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 8

Hmmm, Sammy cake, nice analogy - liked this chapter a lot, always good to see a little TLC after the storm. Hope Dean isn't as bad as he looks though...or maybe...? hehe

Good update, enjoyed this a lot.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 07/02/08 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 8

I liked the humor in this chapter.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 07/02/08 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 7

I liked this chapter.  It was action packed and well written. 

Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 07/02/08 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 8

Aw I loved this chapter, the brothers were reunited. Sweetness and fluff and sick Dean, everything I love in a chapter. Amazing story!

Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 07/02/08 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! This has been a thrilling ride so far. Update soon.

First time? Pish posh!

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 3

"his brother, always the lion, --laid out and weak like a wet kitten in a hospital bed. It was unnerving—like the universe was off-kilter, somehow. "      wonderful description:)

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, kick-**s start!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great update! Poor Dean, I can picture him in that cast... he must be miserable. So glad Gordon has been taken care of - I hope for good! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great chapter and I hope Gordon is well and trully gone but that climbing out of hell line did get me thinking...lol

About time that the boys get a bit of TLC now and I have a feeling Dean's going to be taking it out on just about everyone...hehe Great idea putting him in a cast, that made me smile.

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