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Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 17

OMG - so much to love in this chapter (and as it has no Dean and I am Deangirl extrordinaire - that is no mean feat!)
Ellen smiled to herself. –
---For 45 minutes straight.
- who doesn't remember that feeling!!! and now it's reviews that do it for us....
I love what you do with Ash - having him be the cook at the roadhouse - that just makes sooo much sense... his misleading the cops.... rescuing the Impala..... AND you had him say okey dokey!!!LMAO!
You've also done a wonderful job creating your own character in David....
Can't wait to see what's coming up...

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 16

Really good chapter! I liked the "moment" between Ellen and David - so cute. I'm glad David also told Sam and Dean his story. However I'm a little worried about him wanting to go on such a hunt. We will see... looking forward to more!
P.S.: Thanks for your mail.... and you're welcome :)

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 02/03/08 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 16

Nice chapter! I'm really liking David a lot! And I think it's cute that he likes Ellen.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 02/03/08 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 16

Was getting on with writing but saw this posted and had to drop in and review.
And you've given Ellen a romantic interest Awe...all I can say is it's about time! Love this David, and I'm so pleased he turned out to be a genuine good guy...keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 29/02/08 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 15

Wonderful new chapter - thank you. I loved the conversation between Ellen and the Doc. Clever of you to have his wife killed by an evil werewolf. Lots of feelings in this chapter and you handle these moments so well.
"Those brothers are two halves of one. It would destroy Sam to lose Dean." - I guess that says it all...

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 15

Doc would definetly end up in the National Enquirer! Poor Dean - he gonna find a way to get into more trouble without those splints? Sadly, I'm out of those delightful little next buttons, woe is me -lol. Very much looking forward to more! angela

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 14

David seems like a saint, or sweet on Ellen, hehe, but gotta be going against the Winchester grain to do the whole "kindness of strangers" thing - love this story - Angela

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 11

How in the world did I miss reading this until now?! What a grand ride so far.... Moving on - Angela

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 15

I was really struck in reading this chapter by how mature your writing is - it so doesn't seem like a first effort to me!!! Your dialogue and characters are wonderful. I am totally hooked on the Doc - loved the twist that a werewolf killed his wife - and it totally works for me for him to be a love interest for Ellen! And hey, don't ever feel like you have to rush Dean back to health - you know we all love him weak and in bed....

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 15

I liked this chapter. You did well with the medical stuff.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 15

So pleased to see getting some very well earned TLC, if anyone deserves, it he does. And interesting touch with the doc...
Great chapter, please keep it coming...

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 26/02/08 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 14

Poor Dean and thank heavens for 'David' he seems to be working out, although I always have this sneaky feeling, like you never really know if someone is a good guy till the end credits..hmmmm!
Still loving this!

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 26/02/08 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 14

Great story!
I'm loving every chapter.

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 13

Once again another great chapter! Honestly, the formatting took some time getting used to it in the beginning but I'm fine with it now and I love your writing style. You do a great job portraying the boys and I like your version of Ellen and Ash as well. Poor Dean,, he never seems to get a rest - but I like it -lol! More please soon. Thank you!

Author's Response:
By formatting--do you mean the non-paragraph, sort of point form thing?
Yeah--don't know why I write that way. It's just comfortable for me--helps me delineate in my own mind just who is saying what. It hadn't even occured to me that it varied from the norm--but I see what you mean.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 23/02/08 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 13

I liked this chapter and I like your writing style.

Author's Response: Thank you--I appreciate hearing that.

Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 23/02/08 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 13

PS Sorry forgot to leave you stars, here they are now.

Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 23/02/08 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 13

This is soooo good, this can't be your first fan fiction, it's too good, love hurt/sick Dean, waiting for next installment, impatiently. Well done, keep up the good work.
Silvertayl

Author's Response: I'm blushing! Actually i had no idea the whole realm of fan fiction existed until I stumbled across the supernatural.tv site. Then i thought--ooo--gotta do that! Great creative outlet.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 23/02/08 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 13

Man, I hope that doctor is as good as he's making out, and poor Dean just not able to catch a break...but I'm loving every moment of it...
Roll on next chapter...

Author's Response:
---uh oh----(and i direct this to you all who are kind enough to review---)
-Is this too much trauma for him???????? I tried to have a logical sequence of events supporting the whumpage, but I'm getting a message that it carries on too much..........
BUT---we all have our own particular vices to feed.........bwahaha

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 23/02/08 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 13

Wow! just loving this story! The whumpage just keeps on coming.... There must be a support group for that... oh, hey! That's what this is, isn't it??? Love Ellen being all mother hen. And you can't ever argue with a story with Ash - miss him...*sigh* Perhaps Dean is cursed... pneumonia on top of his other injuries is just not going to be fun. I'm thinking the doc is going to be trustworthy, but that doesn't mean nobody is watching him.... I'm hoping we are getting Bobby soon too - gotta bring the gettaway car, right? Love me some Bobby! And just so you know, I totally agree with Dean - no painting or hurting the Impala in any way!!!

Author's Response: Re- the support group---yeah-- i'm really glad to know there are other mildly twisted fans of the dean!hurt---i was ready to seek out a shrink (lol)

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 23/02/08 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 13

Yikes--poor Dean just can't catch a break. And yet I love it. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 12

Aw I loved this chapter. Seeing Sammy try to take care of his brother just warms y heart. And poor Dean in pain, I love it!
Awesome job!

Author's Response: thanks to a fellow support group member (See Iam's comment on chap 13--it'll make more sense --lol

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 12

Oh see, I'm such a twisted person that I actually enjoyed it (loved it!)when poor Dean's injuries started to hurt without the hospital meds there to take the away the brunt of the pain. Is he on the road to recovery? Or will he have a little bit a setback seeing as how he had to leave the hospital early?
Great update!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 12

Awe Mal, this is a great chapter, Dean's out and safe, for the moment at least, the cops are confused and Sam is happy watching over his brother...so I have to wonder at what's coming next...abd whatever it is I'll bet i'll enjoy it...Thanks for the read...

Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

"It’s like the slab of cake that was coveted by a dieter—it wasn’t evil. It was just cake. It was the dieter who gave it the capacity for harm. …"

Did you have to put in that and remind me how very familiar I am with that sentiment? Good going. Hurry with your next update.
Pobre Dean!

Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 11

Oh, so fun. Dean preparing the act and all of them running along the hospital was great. Thanks god the good doctor is on their side. Nice chapter.

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