Supernaturalville
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 23/02/08 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 8

Ahhhh... just when we think all is fine.. Okay a whole week Jules really..hm...alright well you're the boss I guess.

Great update can't wait to read the rest - Kel



Author's Response: Actually....I have relented, and rushed the epilogue through its final checking. Yes, just when you thought it was safe to breathe again, there I go with another cliffie. Rest assured, there are no more cliffhangers - not in this story anyway....Jules

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 8

Oh that's just cruel, heartless even! We've gotta wait the whole weekend?!

Author's Response: Sort of... well, almost the whole weekend. Thanks for the review - hope you like the epilogue...Jules

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 8

wow, fantastic chapter.looking forward to the epilogue.

Author's Response: Thank you for that - and the wait is over. Epilogue being posted early...Jules

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 8

good job will be waiting for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for that - hope you didn't have a long wait...Jules

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 8

good job will be waiting for the next chapter.

Author's Response: ...and ditto...

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 8

Great chapter Jules.

Author's Response: Thank you. And thanks for reading...Jules

Reviewer: Danni87 (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hey Jules, Lovin this story, as I do with all your work. Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens. You and the evil clifhanger haha. But then again, you are a master at them. This is a great story that just gets better with every chapter.

Author's Response: Why thank you so much! Yes, I'm sort of addicted to evil cliffies. Hope you like the ending....Jules

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 8

Oh Jules, what is it with you and those evil cliffies???? Ahhhh, sitting on the edge of my seat here - lol! First I was hopeful that they had already changed the outcome of Sam's vision and then.... "The young psychic froze, his heart hammering in his chest. My vision...oh God... As if in a dream,..."

Awesome chapter, very well written. Absolutely gripping. So looking forward to the epilogue. Have a great weekend!



Author's Response: Hope your weekend is going great too. Ours is hot as hell. I envy those of you with snow at the moment. I'd rather be in the cold than in this hot, sticky, muggy summer heat. And no, the outcome of Sam's vision hasn't changed - yet.....Jules

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 8

A cliffie!!!! oh man...hope you don't drag it too long!!! i think my fingers have no nails left!!

Author's Response: oh, dear! Well, in all fairness to your rapidly dwindling fingernails, I better post the epilogue then, hadn't I? Glad you're enjoying it...Jules

Reviewer: moogsthewriter (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 8

AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! FIRST I HAVE TO DEAL WITH THE FACT THAT THERE'S NO MORE NEW EPS OF SPN UNTIL APRIL, AND NOW THIS???

 Dude, seriously, though, that was FRICKIN' AWESOME! :DD That battle scene was so intense, and after watching that last ep.... whoo! Lots of fighting. Anyway, great, great, great work - can't wait for the epilogue! And nice banner by the way... pass the word along! :)



Author's Response: Now, first of all, take a nice deep breath...that's the way... And guess what? I won't be able to help you with getting April here any faster, but I can post the epilogue for this story early. And I can tell you that there will be a new story from me on Friday. Feeling better, hon? Ok seriously, thank you for the awesome review. I will certainly let my aunt know you like the banner, if she hasn't read your comment already - :)....Jules

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 7

okay, that's so not good... One hunter down for the count, so it's up to Sammy to save the day...? You surely have faith in little brother. I'm gonna wait and see... And this, to true "aunt Ellen",

"It's called being a hunter, Ellen. It's what we do - it's what we were trained to do."

"No, it's called being a Winchester." Ellen glanced sideways at her tall passenger, noting the faint grin hovering about his expressive mouth. "It wasn't meant as a compliment." She tightened her grip on the steering wheel as she spotted a diner a few blocks down the street. "Stubborn, pig-headed, single-minded, obsessed, unreasonable..."

Sam rolled his eyes.



Author's Response: What - don't you have faith in little brother? Shame on you, honey. All the Sam girls will be after you. No more carpet for you to love - lol. Thanks hon - glad you liked that little moment with Ellen and Sammy. One more chapter, then the epilogue to go now...Jules

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh wow.....this is getting to be so....so....heartpounding! And what is with these cliffies? You have got to stop with those! Waiting until Friday seems like an eternity!

~Kayla



Author's Response: What is it with the cliffies? I gave up chocolate, so I had to replace the addiction...well, that's my excuse anyway - LOL. Aww, now, Kayla - look, it's Friday already. That wasn't such a long wait this week. Thanks for the review, hon...Jules

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 7

great chapter,i'm really enjoying ellen being in the story.

Author's Response: Thank you. I really love Ellen. Have been a wee bit sad that she hasn't popped up as yet in Season 3. Glad you enjoyed it...Jules

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 7

Again love the Winchesters interaction with 'Aunt Ellen'.  So we're getting down to it now.  Elizabeth's been captured, Dean's as good as and now Sam's on his way to rescue.  Nice. 

Added bonus we get another chapter on Friday, just great. 

Loving this one Jules.  Thanks for the great morning read - Kel



Author's Response: We are getting down to it now. And hopefully this update will arrive before your morning paper - LOL. It all starts to come together in the next chapter - and it might not be so good for our boys....Jules

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 6

Ah, Damn Jules you're just working this one.  I love that you've gotten Ellen involved. Despite my feelings for Joe I've always enjoyed anything involving Ellen.

Now lucky me you've posted the next chappy early so I"m moving on - kel



Author's Response: Who, me? *bats puppy dog eyes innocently*. I sort of felt Jo was a bit too much of a kid, but I love Ellen. Thanks for the review hon - I'm chuffed you're loving it so much...Jules

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 7

Hahahahaha.....it's a great surprise that you decided to put this up early...i cn't wait for Fri to see what's in store for bot boys...

Hopefully Sam will feel better, cuz he needs to save Dean this time round!



Author's Response:

Well, Missouri's tea is working, but will it work in time? Sam's still pretty weak...thanks for the review, and ooh, pretty stars....Jules

Reviewer: SupernaturalGeek (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 7

Damn - I'm so sorry, I somehow managed to miss last week's update! It was only when I saw this as I was posting one of my own that I realised! *ducks* Oh well, it was nice to read two in one go.. You're definitely upping the tension now - I love the interaction with Ellen and the boys, especially when she thought for a second Dean was serious about shooting Sam in the foot! That made me chuckle! I'm glad she's helping them out but they really are in it now. Can't wait to see how Sam will rescue his brother from this one.. :)

Author's Response: LOL - it's called real life, hon! And damn, how it gets in the way. Aww, thank you - yes, I am tightening it up a wee bit. And I intend to really drop them in off the deep end in the next chapter. Hmm, did I say that? Yes, I did - lol. Hope you enjoy, hon....Jules

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 7

OMG Jules, what are you doing to us? One step closer to Sam's vision coming true.... Thanks for your sweet comment :) Looking forward to Friday!


Author's Response: Hehe - sorry. Yes, and the next chapter is closer again - *evil laugh*. But don't worry - you know I have to have a happy ending, or my muse will run away permanently. But it's going to be a rough ride till then...Jules

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 19/02/08 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for reading. Not long to go now...Jules

Reviewer: moogsthewriter (Signed) · Date: 19/02/08 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 7

I think you get my first review on this site! This is an amazing piece of work - you've got me waiting in breathless anticipation! Great work - keep it up! Can't wait for Friday!  :)

Author's Response: Well! I am honoured that you chose me! Welcome to the site. I hope you have many happy hours perusing all the great stories on here. *hugs*... And thank you for your review - I'm glad you are hooked. Next chapter will be up very shortly...Jules

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 19/02/08 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 7

Wonderful update as usual, a very intense read! - Angela

Author's Response: Thanks Angela - I'm so glad you're enjoying this. It's a bit of a change of pace from the last one, I must admit. And the tension increases a wee bit in the next chapter...Jules

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 6

What's a few carpets amongst friends!?  The plot does indeed thicken and I love it.  Poor Sam, waking up without Dean there and realizing he can't do much, as afraid that Ellen doesn't trust him as the other way around..  This is very well written, great update!

Author's Response: LOL - that carpet! I don't think Fredo has quite forgiven me for killing it! I'll make it up to her, I promise. A few questions will be answered in the next chapter. And it's almost over - just this next chapter and the eppy to go...Jules

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 6

Dean's walking into a trap? Or is it the demon's way of luring Sam into his own trap??? and the part when Dean said to shoot Sam in order to keep him there, that's funny....i was thinking that if Ellen did shoot Sam, Dean will point his gun at her for real!! LOL



Author's Response: Ah, well, that's the big question, isn't it? Is it a trap for Sam, with Dean as the bait? And yes, I think Dean would have a conniption if Ellen really did shoot Sam. Thanks for the review, hon...Jules

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 15/02/08 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 6

no more doubt, you're a cold-blooded carpet killer... He's walking into a trap? And you're sure he's gonna walk till next friday?! Crap... But on the good side, it's always nice to have a Winchester brother coming out of the shower just wrapped in a 'thin motel towel'... Well, see you next... friday, okay okay... 

Author's Response: *hangs head in shame*  I killed it.... A trap - well, we'll wait and see. But is it a trap for Dean, or for Sam....? Ooh, you're admiring skimpy-towel-clad Sam? He is rather cute, isn't he? Perhaps Dean needs his shower time in a future story - lol....Jules

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 15/02/08 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 6

Another carpet bites the dust. I hope Sam remembers to get dressed before he goes out...hehehe

Great chapter Jules.

Laura



Author's Response: Thanks Laura - well, he'd certainly cause a stir, wouldn't he? I know the Sammy girls would prefer that as his normal daytime wear - lol. And yes, another carpet falls by the wayside - one minutes' silence, please.....Jules

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