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Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

wow, great start! So, a fever, ominous. Dean gone without the impala, ominous. That Geoffrey guy, ominous. The grubby carpet, ominous...

Author's Response: Hi, hon - Dean's just gone for coffee...honest....(this time, anyway - *evil laugh* ). The grubby carpet - oh, man, that made me laugh thanks, hon....Jules

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start here, Jules...can't imagine Sam's fever's a good thing and I gotta wonder about Dean leaving the car idling for a while but not pulling out...hm.. Thanks for making my Friday morning coffee break fun...;)

 



Author's Response: Hi, Kel - no, Dean has just decided to walk, which is why Sam didn't hear the car take off. And no, Sam's fever is not going to be a good thing - as a matter of fact, it's going to get a whole lot worse....Jules

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow--what a fantastic first chapter!  Definitely horrifying visions for poor Sam.  I love protective!Dean and especially this part: 

"Pancakes?"

Sam smiled - Dean's voice held that big brother note that said he was concerned but he'd rather poke his eyes out than admit it.

Can't wait for the next chapter!  Hope it's not too long.  :-)



Author's Response: Aww, thank you for that! Well, if you like protective!Dean (and who doesn't), I will be serving it up in spades in this story. Hope you can stick around...Jules

Reviewer: SupernaturalGeek (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh yay! Another awesome story begins *bounces* Great start, hon, I'm loving the brotherly interaction with poor Sam so (justifiably) freaked out by the vision and Dean all worried while trying not to show it. It felt just like an episode and the boys were completely in character - as always! I'm totally hooked and can't wait to find out what happens next.. :)

Author's Response: Oops - don't bounce too much, Michaela....you are already getting funny looks from the rest of the office after almost spitting your coffee all over the screen when I posted those Dean pics in Unnatural Disasters for you - LOL. Well, if it's brotherly interaction you're after, you've come to the right place. Sam's visions are going to hammer him big time, and he's going to need his big bro...Jules

Reviewer: Taliena (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oooooh!  Great start!  Very intriguing... I look forward to your next installment!

Author's Response: Thank you for that. Hope you like the next one - the visions get a wee bit more intense....Jules

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

wow this is going to be a fantastic story.cant wait for more.well done.

Author's Response: Thanks for that. Hope you like the next bit. More Protective!Dean coming up...Jules

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

great start! poor sammy :( looks like his visions are gonna deteriorate his health:S...can't wait for the next chapt!

Author's Response: Thanks for that - and yep, they certainly are. Sam's about to take a pounding, so big brother better stay close....Jules

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