Reviewer: demon_snfan (Signed) · Date: 04/05/13 02:35 AM · On: Epilogue
Brilliant I've read this a few times and it never gets old. thankyou!
Author's Response: Okay, here we are. Well, thank you so much! I always get a thrill when someone reviews an old story. I had a bit of fun, sort of, with this one, as you probably know from my author's notes. It started life as a one-shot missing scene for Born Under a Bad Sign, I think...or Playthings - can't quite remember at the moment which it was. But when I came to tidy it up for posting, I realised I could pad it out into a full story. So here it is...or was...ugh, too early in the morning to get tenses right. And I did have fun with flu-ey Sammy at the end, and tying it in with Jared's heavy cold in Roadkill. You can really hear it in certain scenes that he's all clogged up, poor baby. Thank you again for letting me know what you think, and for reading an old-timer over and over. Take care, Jules
Reviewer: demon_snfan (Signed) · Date: 04/05/13 02:35 AM · On: Epilogue
Brilliant I've read this a few times and it never gets old. thankyou!
Author's Response: Hi! Oh, dear - the site's gone a bit Irish and posted your review twice, to be sure to be sure....I'll reply to the other one.
Reviewer: SamGirl2011andBeyond (Signed) · Date: 18/04/12 11:41 AM · On: Epilogue
I so love them. This story rocked. You wrote Sam's visions very well. Loved Dean's reaction to the visions and of course I loved the boys trying to keep each other safe. Didn't care for that Elizabeth jerk. Dean should have shot her or something, 'cause nobody gets away with calling Sammy a freak. Glad that they were able to defeat the demon and that the brothers and Ellen ended up okay in the end. Any chance I could persuade you to write another fic with the brothers and that Elizabeth jerk and have her killed off? Sorry, I just don't like anyone who is mean to my Sammy. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, Laina, I had toyed with the idea of bringing Elizabeth back, in company with another hunter, for revenge on Sam over Geoffrey's death. But it's still just a vague idea lurking in the back of my freaky brain. And don't apologise - I consider myself a Dean girl, but I don't like anyone being mean to Sammy either. The whole Gordon hunting Sam storyline almost made me ill. This was one of those weird happenstances - it started out as a very short one-shot. A missing scene or tag to Born Under A Bad Sign, which at the time I hadn't seen because Australia was way behind in episodes and I wasn't up with the downloading thing at the time. I bugged a fellow Aussie fan to tell me at least a snippet of what had happened in the episode because my tag depended on certain assumptions being correct. Anyway, I finally got to see the eppy, tweaked the tag a little, and then sat on it like a hen on an egg. And little by little, I realised I could make a full-length story out of it if I padded it out a little. So here it is. The original one-shot, trimmed and edited very little to fit in with the whole story, is mainly in the scene of Sam's breakdown by the side of the road. And the first line of the one-shot is in the final scene of Geoff's death, when Dean closes the journal and the wind dies down, and all they can hear is Elizabeth crying. Funny how a story evolves. So stoked that you enjoyed my hammering Sam into the ground - LOL. Jules
Reviewer: sammynanci (Signed) · Date: 19/01/12 12:01 PM · On: Epilogue
I loved!! Great job,wonderfull!!! You ´re awesome!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Nanci, I'm really glad you did. This story sort of grew - the scene where Sam runs from the car and then has a bit of a meltdown by the side of the road was originally a one-shot intended for just after the season 2 episode Born Under A Bad Sign. I'd actually written the one-shot and had it in my folder, but something bugged me about it, so I didn't send it to my beta or post it. My muse kept prodding me that there may be the potential for a full-length story out of it, and eventually I listened to her. So here it is. Parts of the original one-shot are in that roadside scene, and the scene where Dean finishes the exorcism and shuts the journal, then silence descends - that's how the one-shot kicked off. So glad you stopped by to read, and let me know what you thought. Thank you so much! Take care, Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/08/11 07:46 AM · On: Epilogue
i so did enjoy it once more your writings are very exciting to me and i feel that im part of it so thank you for it. i admire your work alwasy and i do like this one it kicked me sensless ... " Don'd say id! Don'd eved thing id!" Sam glared at his brother, not buying the innocent look Dean tried to muster. "Every dibe you say thad, we end ub gedding our asses gicked, Deed." now that should so be presented to the writers of SNP and have my Sammy say it ... it be funny as hell. i was wondering if i may ask so kindly for a copy to this story this is remarkable. Thank you MY RATING: LIKE HONEY TO TEA lol HONEY = SAM WINCHESTER TEA = Deffently DEAN WINCHESTER. :D
Author's Response: Hi, Ivonne, You should have your copy by now - I sent it towards the end of last week. Let me know if it didn't arrive, and I'll send it again. I'm glad you liked flu-ey Sammy and his blocked nose speech - lol. And he's right - every time Dean says something's going to be easy or a piece of cake, they do end up getting their arses kicked - LOL. Poor Dean - and poor Sammy. Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/08/11 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 8
OH NO!!!! please dont let this happen ... poor sam.
Author's Response: LOL. Don't worry, your Sammy will live to fight another day. I don't do death fics, remember? Not unless I have a very good backup plan to bring them back to life again. I want the boys to ride off into the sunset at the end of the show. I certainly don't want them killed - not again. Hang tight. Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 03/08/11 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 7
ok this geoff is so pissing meoff ... he keeps reminding of max's brother that almost tried to have dean shoot him self is that where you get all your material? for the show SUPERNATURAL.
Author's Response: Good analogy there - he is definitely like Andy's evil twin brother. But don't forget the demon is doing his fair share of tweaking here. And Geoffrey being an innocent civilian would have had no defences at all against the power and influence of a demon, who would know just what buttons to push to get their host to do exactly what they wanted. Geoffrey is a victim here as well. Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 03/08/11 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 6
This is so exciting to have Ellen there and i feel that she is like playing the roll of the mother figure to the boys ... ? do you think that if ellen stayed in character of supernatural would the boys think of her as mother and joe as sibling?
Author's Response: I think that Ellen wanted to mother the boys, and would have made an interesting addition to their family dynamic - as long as Dean kept away from Jo - LOL. But seriously, I do think Ellen cared for the boys in her own tough-love way, despite being absolutely livid with Dean - and Sam, too - when Jo ran off to go hunting with them. I think that Sam very much wanted that mother connection and possibly saw Ellen as a good representative of that. Dean, I'm not so sure, as he remembers his mother, and I think that in Dean's heart, no one could take Mary's place. But that's not to say that he didn't form a bond of sorts with Ellen, because of how distraught he was at her and Jo's death. I think though, that he would have liked Sam to have that mother figure in his life. Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/08/11 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 5
wow , you have so turned the tables on me ... to bestow on Missourie to have called Ellen ... that so scared the hell out of me ... i would have thought that she would have sent the one that is doing the damage to sam not ellen big turn on that and i applaude you.
Author's Response: LOL - glad I could still surprise you. And no, Missouri's plan is to try to keep the one who is hurting Sam as far away from him as possible until he's strong enough to fight back. At the moment the psychic attacks are crippling him, smashing through his defences and taking him down. He needs time to recover just a little of his strength....but even with Ellen's help and Missouri's magic hoodoo potion, will their enemy give Sam that time that he needs? Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 31/07/11 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 4
wow the srtucture of the stroy has gotten to be avery personal one for the eldes brother and how you form the ante of Sams fatigue to see what will start to happen then black lash on him as if nothing i love this story thank you.
Author's Response: Hi, Ivonne, Yes, Dean is taking this one very personally. Someone is hurting his little brother in ways that he can't seem to fight against. He has no target to shoot at, and his frustration as well as his worry about Sam is mounting by the minute. Dean's feeling pretty much out of his depth by this point. But help is on its way, from an unexpected source. Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/07/11 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 3
i so love you when placeing two of the best psychics on the prowel. to bring Max miller just send bad vibe and shakes to ellumate the situation this is great.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you for that. Yes, it is a bit like the situation with Max Miller - I wondered just how many psychic kids like Sam there were out there, especially ones that kept under the radar like Ava, whose mothers didn't die in a nursery fire. Hope you enjoy the next chapter - the boys are getting closer to their quarry. Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/07/11 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 2
mmmm it send massive chills with in the feeling of 8 legs crawling down my spinal cord you are mmmm wow there is no word that i can find you have left me speach less thank you for the work ? i was wondering if i can get a copy of this story pleas i leave you my email pissedsam74@yahoo.com
Author's Response: Hi, Ivonne, You certainly may have a copy - I will email it to you as soon as I've answsered all your lovely reviews. It sent chills down your spine, eh? Well, that's a pretty great pat on the back for my storytelling skills. Thank you for that. Things are going to get even scarier as the boys put the pieces together and begin to track their foe - or is he tracking them.... Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/07/11 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
As a writer, do you go out side or somewhere where its calm or noisy to atribute to ur writing or does it come freely into your thoughts and the mind captures it all with such intensity that it allows you to close your eyes and comince typing or writing freely with or without mistakes by its own self as if the delacacy of your thoughts transfer to its energy of finger tips and begins to ascend its first word, sentance or phrase. this is WOW incredable, for i can see it devlope as if i am with the character itself but only as a dark image where the character can not hear me nor see me. As every intenseity of trying to help becomes so distance that i can see and smell the charded ember of Dean himself...as if i was emplaced as a character in the story. thank you for that there is only two other writers that can do that and you are the third.
Author's Response: Hi, Ivonne, No, I have to be on my own to write, usually. Lots of noise or people can pull me out of the story, an d if someone's talking to me or talking nearby, I tend to write what they're saying instead of the dialogue or action playing out in my head. Sometimes it's very difficult to get what's in my head down on paper and have it flow as smoothly as I imagined the scene. Sometimes a chapter will practically write itself. I think it depends too, on what sort of mood I'm in as well. If I'm stressed or upset, then everything flies out the window and I can't write to save my life. The words just won't come at all. Having said that, I've written a few one-shots when I've been in pain or feeling ill, that I've been pretty happy with....*shrugs*...not really sure what happened there - perhaps the pain or flu medication is to blame? But I usually try to be in a calm/creative frame of mind, away from people and other noisy distractions, with some music on - usually one of Supernatural's featured artists like AC/DC, Def Leppard, Bon Jovi or something suitably mullet-rock-y, and hammer away at the keyboard. Hope you have been keeping well, and your back isn't giving you too much pain at the moment. And how is your own writing project going? Did you find someone to look it over for you? Jules
Reviewer: leslie92708 (Signed) · Date: 24/01/11 01:56 AM · On: Epilogue
I liked it! nice reference to the Leprechaun story!! I'm having fun catching up!
Author's Response: I am so glad you are! LOL. This story actually started life as a sort of missing scene to Born Under A Bad Sign, and just grew. Well, it sat in my folder about 95% completed for months, then when I finally got around to blowing the cyber-cobwebs off it, I realised I could actually turn it into a multi-chapter story with a bit of tweaking. The original one-shot is still in there, with very little tweaking, actually. It's the scene by the side of the road when Sam first runs off, then falls and breaks down over the fact that he'd killed Geoffrey. Thanks so much for reading! Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/10 08:28 AM · On: Epilogue
this one kicked more then an ass i still do not like Geoffer. . .weafer he si zeeed up or ton. . .how do youlike that owt nac yalp ta that. . .hahaha. . .and jewls, ive read it and scared the living LLEH out of me seriously. . .tactics. . .i will read the next one after the green guy thanks. . .u are my nemowtab . . .hahaha. . .there is no one but your counter partner child that is ROYAL WRITER LIKE "MUM" i so cant get over that and i love it. thank you both of you.
Author's Response: Thank you, Ivonne. Yes, my "daughter" is pretty damned good at weaving a tale. Unfortunately, her job and study don't allow her to write much these days, but I'm hoping that will change and she can get back to doing what she loves. So glad you enjoyed this one - it was a pure brother tale right from the start. I'm glad you could come along for the ride, even though it got scary in places. Take care, and I'll see you on the next one. Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/10 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 8
i maybe as dumb as sam. . .no offens sweety sam todd, but this son of a bitch of Geoffery had a kind twist. . .but finish it sam dont suck into his crap. . .Deran watch out!!!! Ellen, sheild her away from this. . ..
Author's Response: Yes, Geoff was in deep - twisted up until there was not much of the real Geoffrey left at the end. Fingers crossed that Sam's fears for his own fate don't get in the way of what has to be done.... Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/10 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 7
damn you winchesters there should be a gadget to where . . .oops. . .im a stupid ass monkey hunter whom needs both mental and physicall. . .to omaybe even sycological help becon. . .damn it Ellen call Bobby.
Author's Response: LOL - yep, Ellen couldn't keep Sam from rushing....or staggering....to the rescue. Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/10 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 6
this demon is going to get its sorry . . . what ever to TIMBUCK TO. . .to eve screw with my boy when Dean is out of course . . .ANOTHER IDGIT, for even trying to get this thing. . .damn them both. . . Ellen dont allpw that naked boy out of your sight or i will personaly kick all three of you weather you are a hunter. . .this way kicking your assential selves from doing something stupid.
Author's Response: Ah, but will Ellen be any match for that famous Winchester stubbornness? We all know how single-minded Sam can get. Let's see how she goes with keeping our favourite psychic safe, eh? Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 04/06/10 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 4
these two better hav good insurance as well as a good room in a bad location of a graveyard. . .for as soon as dean takes sam to bobby. . .he will seriously kill anyone or anything that come within his or family way.
Author's Response: Yes, we all know and love that big brother protective streak, don't we? Thanks so much for reading, hun. Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/06/10 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 3
thank you, but as long as this story doesn't end im ok.
Author's Response: Don't worry, the story is a fair way off from ending just yet. Still a few chapters to go. Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/06/10 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 2
no it wouldn't be scary it be worst. . .uncontrollingly teriffing. . .not that im saying sam is the devils advocate. . .he is good just screwed.
Author's Response: Oh, it's going to get very scary before the end, for poor Sammy and for Dean. And no, I'm not saying Sam is the devil's disciple either - he was a pawn in the demons' game all along. Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/06/10 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
this is going to be one of the stories that i like and may feel to be apart of it.
Author's Response: Hello, Ivonne, Thank you - I am touched that you feel to be a part of this tale. Hope you enjoy the coming chapters. Jules
Reviewer: Dolphindreamer (Signed) · Date: 19/03/10 09:34 PM · On: Epilogue
Yep, I'm back...not going anywhere...as long as you have stories to read!
Sam got his chicken soup -- I got mine!
Happy sigh!
A favorite for sure.
Again, read like an episode.
So, well done!
Thank you for your wonderfully talented self!
Off to read more. I'm a tad slow...but know that I am out here!
Karen
Author's Response: Oh, I think there are a few you haven't gotten to yet - LOL. Yep, Sam got so much chicken soup he almost grew feathers. Big brother was in overdrive after that jacked-up hunt. Thanks so much, Karen. That is such a lovely compliment. And it's fine - take it at any speed you wish. There are a few quite long stories - Here At is a marathon read - so there's plenty left for you. And again, I hope that you'll consider sharing your lovely stories with we UnGen'ers, and come to think of this as a second home for you, too. It's a great place, and very reader-friendly. We'd love to have an author of your calibre added to our ranks. Take care, and thank you once again for reading. Jules
Reviewer: Dolphindreamer (Signed) · Date: 18/03/10 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 4
Oh, man, this story is so great.
So in charecter. Well thought out. Should be an episode...a best seller even!!
I bow to you!
Karen
Author's Response: Ah! You're back! And funnily enough, I've been playing in your back catalogue as well - just finished Haunted House - Haunted a little while ago, and read Demon Drop before that. Thank you for this. I'm really chuffed that you're enjoying the story. It started out as a simple little one-shot revolving around a scene or line from Born Under A Bad Sign, but I never finished it, and so it sat in the WIP folder for ages. One day I went back to it, and realised that I could pad it out into a full-sized story. And here it is. Hope you like the rest of the tale - and thank you once again for your lovely reviews. Jules
Reviewer: ritsam (Signed) · Date: 02/05/09 10:53 AM · On: Epilogue
Awesome-top to bottom just beyond awesome. Oh, from fast to last I just simply swallowed this story. Those visions just totally devastated Sam, and Dean, oh Dean, you are sucha good big brother. But this is totally Sammy story, the Geoff guy... such a freak, how he sent those burning Dean vision to Sam....really horrible. Sam was really screwed and baby was so sick! But Dean was there to take care of his sweet lil' bro, so cute. But the last chap.. oh BAAM! Geoff was fried, I liked that, he deserved that. But Elizabeth's words to Sam...not so cool. How could she tell those harsh words to Sam! Stupid girl! Anyways, just fantabulous story, I like it with all my heart.LoveRitu.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that , Ritu. Yes, the visions really hammered Sam into the ground this time - deliberately so, by the special child and the demon. And yep, Liz was lashing out i grief, but those words cut Sam deeply, especially coming hard on the heels of what he had just done to save Dean - and Liz, for that matter. Thanks once again for reading - I'm so glad you loved this one. Jules
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