Good Story

liked how Dean protected Sam even at age 8.

John wanting to leave the kids at Paster Jim's; i can also so that happening especially at what he does for a living.

I liked how you had Paster Jim in this story they never really showed him on the show that much and i think you captured him good.

Rbliss 

My thoughts were interrupted by Dr. Krohn running into the room, a little frantic if you ask me.  She let out a breath as she entered the room, but she looked at neither me nor Jim, she was staring at my two boys.  I knew that Sam would only sleep for a little longer if he actually let it take him, which meant that Dean would be woken up.  I knew that Dean needed that sleep, but how could I really keep Sam occupied in a hospital room when I had other things to worry about?  See, parenting isn’t easy.

 

LOL I can picture Dean saying this actually, but i think that Dean got his morbid sense of humour from John in his early years, so yeah, parenting isn't easy, especially with someone who has to keep his children away from demons at the same time. :)

 

hope you are feeling better!!

Dean’s not going to make it to his next birthday.

i hope that demon will be exorcised and sent back to hell soon! 

Author's Response: Hahahaha, I'm glad you feel that way!!  Next chapter is up....hopefully it'll be good...

Oh...i should have known that Dean won't be asleep....and ypu he should be mad at John for trying to leave them off to Jim's.. although i think that maybe John would figure out a way to keep them together?

Author's Response: Oh, you really never know.  Something bad can happen and BAM! no happy ending, but let's see what happens....

Very mysterious...why would the demon attacked the Winchesters without killing them, especially when they are so vulnerable at this point? feel so sorry for Dean, and hope there's no lasting effects. i think John would tear the whole hospital a new one when he sees the handprint on Dean's neck!

Author's Response: Hahahaha, Thanks for the review.  Glad you're finding this interesting!!  The demon's plan isn't gonna be revealed until later, but I will let you in on it eventually.

Pastor Jim to the rescue, thank god....i was afraid that he'll come too late and that Dean and Sam were already separated and he can do nuts about it....

Author's Response: Yea, I can't have too sad of an ending....that would be soo sad if they were taken away, and somehow I would have to get them back together....too much legal business for me!  Thanks for reviewing!!

Dean has every right to be suspicious.... and i'm starting to like the doc.. :)

Author's Response: Yes, he does.  Oh that's good...I was hoping that she would be like-able....thanks for the review!

Didn't realise you had posted chap 2 of this...still enjoying it a lot, and I love your take on the boys and how they are relating to the authorities. Moving on to chap 3...

Author's Response: Thanks!  Happy that you're still enjoying this!!!

Sweet, but yeah, a bit short...the 'get information doctor' part was cute...i was wondering if there was any other way to explain to the kids what type of doctor she was....was wondering if you could write more next time...*hint hint* :)

Author's Response:

Thanks...hahah yea I know it's short, but if I didn't end it there then the next chapter would be really short....oh and the next chapter will be longer, I'm just having a little trouble trying to pin down John's actions and ideas...

Intriguing......wondering what will happen to Papa Winchester.....and the boys of course...although i think Dean will take care of Sam...i'm sure of it...

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Well John is in his own little bind right now, while Sam and Dean aren't having a good time either...oh I'm pretty sure Dean will do anything for his brother...thanks for reading and reviewing!