Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 7
Excellent ending...it's as though SAm just needed to see past the whole Dean being an arch angel and just seeing him as his brothe r and that's enough!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. I'm thankful for every read and every review. I'm glad you liked the ending too. Again, thank you.
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 7
I do like the idea that Dean can't ever go to hell.... A lovely end to a very exciting story, I've thoroughly enjoyed the trip. Thanks. Jane
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate you reading my story and all the reviews you left.
Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 7
Really interesting and unexpected ending - I liked that. look forward to your next story rachel
Author's Response: Unexpected is good right? I hope so. I'm happy that you liked it. Thanks for readind and reviewing.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 7
Fantastic finish, I've really enjoyed this story and you've got a great concept here for a whole series if you ever wanted to come back to it...great work and thanks for the read.
Author's Response: Working on the series as we speak. I'm trying to decide if I want to write it all first or post the first chapter now that this is all done. Knowing me it'll be posted soon, I have no patience. Thanks for reading and the reviews. I really appreciate the time and effort.
Reviewer: tvbatina (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 7
That was really an enjoyable story. Great job - love Dean being an arch angel. And love the hurtDean too.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I love the idea of him being a arch angel and a part of saving Sam but I doubt it's something we'll ever get from the show. Thanks for reading and for all the reviews!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 7
i enjoyed reading that story,well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 6
Wow...Michael!!!!! That's like a big thing right??? This story is addictive.... :)
Author's Response: I think it's kind of a big deal but everyone has their seperate views of the Arch Angels. Thanks for the review and the nice words.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 6
Not much better in the world than walking barefoot down a beach...and I'm so glad you came back to that whole 'dream' sequence...was wondering what that meant...looking out for more...
Author's Response: I love walking on the beach so much! Early in the morning no one but dog walkers and joggers to bug you.....gads, I miss the beach. Might have to go soon. Thanks for reading and for the review.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 6
Dean thought he had an hallucination and if it was true, very intriguing, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the review. Would Dean ever think its true?
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 6
Wow, that was a powerful message from his Mom!! I'm so pleased Dean's been released and that the boys are getting some decent R & R by the beach. I loved that early morning walk, the sea always seems the perfect setting for peace and inner healing. Thanks for a great story. Jane
Author's Response: Thank you. I love walking the beach and I love the Oregon Beach especially because it's generally not bikini type weather so you're all bundled up and bare foot. That's the beach to me.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 5
wow fantastic chapter,well done.
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 5
Loved the battle with the demons and Sam protecting Dean and feeling guilty about his condition. It was heart breaking how Dean wanted to know what he did wrong and telling Elliot that he was alive because the treatment was delivered to him and not to his brother. Excellent chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you are reading and enjoying my story. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 5
Lot of action in this chapter. With the help of Sam Dean has been released from the mental institution. Dr Elliott got what he deserved, lol. What's going to happen next, can't wait to know.
Author's Response: Glad the action worked. I find it to be one of the most difficult things to write, never sure if its making sense, moving too slow, too fast. Thanks for reading and for the review.
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 5
Thank heavens Dean's able to walk out of that awful place. He's had a really rough ride and it sounds like he's even been torturing himself over giving Sammy normal. The electro-shock therapy was pretty brutal and enough to bring out the slightly more aggresive side of Sam's nature (cheers!!). I think Dr Elliott may just choose a change in career after Deans' little chat!! Loving the story, Jane
Author's Response: Glad that you're still liking it. I should have the next chapter up tomorrow sometime. Thanks for all the reviews and for reading my story.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 5
Electro-shock, damn that's gotta hurt...I'm so glad Dean's out of there and starting the long road to recovery. And I definately have a soft spot for big bad protective Sam now thanks to you... ...great read, thanks...
Author's Response: I tend to not give Sam his due but I think I did him a little justice in this story. I'm glad you like him. I actually did research on elctro-shock before I wrote this. People still do it. It can be used in extreme case of schizophrenia. And it can cause severe cases of memory loss. There are a very few number of people who come away from it intact. But for those that it helps, they swear by it. Don't think it's a choice that I'd make but I'm lucky enough to be healthy. Glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 4
Thank goodness, Sam is there, he's going to take care of Dean now. The reunion between the brothers was heartwrenching. Riveting story lostatc, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for reading and for the great review.
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 4
I'm surprised Sam managed to refrain from doing some serious damage to Dr Elliott!! How scarily frustrating that there is nothing Sam can do to help his brother because of the court order. Poor Dean needs rescuing pretty soon, he's in such bad shape. Looking forward to the next one. Jane
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying. This was written long before there was any idea that Sam would do harm when there was another choice. If I were writting this in light of Season 3 it probably would've turned out way differently. Thanks for the continued reading and reviewing. I smile every time my computer chirps at me and says I have a new message - YEA!
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 3
Thanks heavens Sam's tracked him down, straightjackets, electric shock therapy and being in the hands of a mad psychiatrist is one thing but that demon with the needle thing just made my skin crawl. I feel it wil be a long time before the boys decide to go solo again after this one!! Jane
Author's Response: I gotta admit I really liked writing that part - makes me one sick cookie doesn't it? It makes me skin crawl still to read it - my two favorite forms of torture bamboos under the fingernails and crucifixtion (haven't written that one - yet). Water dripping on the forehead is a good one two. Okay, showing my not so good side. Thanks for reading and for the reviews. I really appreciate it because it makes my day!
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 2
Oh, poor Dean, things look bad and are getting worse! Strapped down with a whole queue of demons waiting to take revenge on him. He's in dire need of a rescue here - where's Sammy?? Great story. Jane
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying the show. My kids helped me write the bit with the demons bicker over Dean - they thought it was hilarious. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great story so far, I really enjoy it! Hm, if you post on the other site, why not post over here simultaneously? Anyway, very good read and I am looking forward to more :) Thanks.
Author's Response: I do post simultaneously now but I wrote this story last year. I am working on a follow on to this and another story and I will be posting it simulatneously. Thanks for reading and I'm glad that you like it.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 4
This story is going from great to even better. My heart was in my mouth all the way through this chapter and thank heaven that Sam and Bobby are on the case...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
Author's Response: So glad you like it. Better get your heart back where it belongs, it's really not good for it to be out of place. I will be updating again soon. I've got to drag it out just a little bit or you could cheat (someone else's words not mine)and go read the whole thing on ff.net. It will just be another couple of days if you like to stay loyal here It's only seven chapters long. Thanks for reading and the wonderful reviews that always make me smile.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 4
great fic please update soon.
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for reading and for the review.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 20/01/08 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 3
Poor DEan, demons're taking their turn to torture him night after night. Sam finally found out where is he. Riveting story, can't wait to know what's next.
Author's Response: I am really glad that you're enjoying it. I hope I continue to keep you interested. Thanks for reading and for the review.
Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 20/01/08 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 3
great story - looking forward to the chapter Rachel
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked the story.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/01/08 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 3
OK, next chapter straight away please - Loving this story and Sam needs to put his foot down... ...actually couldn't read the needle bit, almost had my hand covering my eyes...great writing!
Author's Response: Sorry about the needle. I know of a lot of people who had a hard time reading that. My daughter has a phobia of needles and never got past that paragraph. All I can say to defend myself is that I could've made it a lot worse. (I really should've warned my daughter but I completely forgot about her needle thing!) Thanks for read and the review.
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