Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 07:17 AM · On: Never Ending Road
this is a very good first fic, well done.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm always glad to hear that.
Reviewer: MissyLaMotte (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 05:22 PM · On: Never Ending Road
I think you did good. It is pretty hard to write a one-shot, because you have to develop and resolve a plot in a rather short period of time. I would have liked to find out who killed the old woman, though, and why.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I thought about revealing that too in the story, but it didn' fit in really, so I left it open.... Mabeshe owned the cabin long time ago and came back to refresh some memories about her life when she was younger.... And maybe te one one murdered her as just a fugitive on the lam who needed money and killed her because he refused or had not enough with her.... To be honest, I'm not rally sure about that, too XD
Author's Response: Oops, I mean "because SHE refused", of course ;)
Reviewer: Anybody out there (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 05:20 PM · On: Never Ending Road
This really your first? Wow, I think you did really great. It was a really interesting and original story plot, and it contained all my favorites: The brothers of course:), a tired Dean, a long dessert road and one hot black car:) And I know all about how hard it is to write in a foreign language. But I think you did really well!! Keep up your great work! ~Anita~
Author's Response: Thanks. It' always good to hear it doesn't suck totally. XD Usually I write in German and I thougt I should try something else. I'm glad to hear, you liked it. ;)
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 02:37 PM · On: Never Ending Road
My favorite line: "You mean a bad-supernatural-thing-keeping-me-on-this-fucking-road-feeling or a bad-I-think-I'm-to-dumb-to-read-a-fucking-map-feeling?" very nice. Und dein englisch ist super, man könnte meinen es sei deine Muttersprache. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, it's one of my favourite lines, too und Danke, ich mag Englisch sogar lieber als Deutsch XD
Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 16/01/08 08:32 PM · On: Never Ending Road
That was so good! Loved Dean's swearing, that's why we love him, right? XD "As long as his brother was able to swear at regular intervals, he was doing okay" haha, Love it!
Author's Response: thanx ;), that's why I love that guy, too. He is so funny ;)
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