Reviewer: rahne (Signed) · Date: 25/01/09 09:06 PM · On: A Mask to Come Undone

Even when Sam rejects God, he still believes in Him. You've captured a piece of Sam perfectly. And if he studied religion or philosophy at all in college, maybe he'll realize what some modern Hindu saints have tried to teach-that if you can't worship one image of god, worship him/her in the person of someone you love, and it's really the same thing. I love little moments like this in stories. Thank you. Well written.

Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 16/01/08 09:55 PM · On: A Mask to Come Undone

wow!!! that was amazing!!!! i love the insights into dean, and the little things sam is trying to remember. really, really good. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much.  :o)

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 11:15 PM · On: A Mask to Come Undone

God, you absolutely killed me with this one.  What a beautiful heart-wrenching story.  Thanks for the read - Kel

Author's Response: Thankyou for reading, and for taking the time to comment!  :o)

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 05:28 PM · On: A Mask to Come Undone

good job!

Author's Response: Thanks!  :o)

Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 07:48 AM · On: A Mask to Come Undone

This was just beautifully written. I think I cried through the entire reading. Sam's pain was so vivid and emotional that it hurt my heart to read it.

Amazing.

Author's Response:

*hands tissues*

Thankyou so much.  I feel so much for Sam, having to carry the grief of this loss before it even happens.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 04:32 AM · On: A Mask to Come Undone

This is a powerful piece of writing, sad and desperate, but very real to watch Sam work through some of the stages of grief before his brother has actually been taken from him.

Wish you'd write the sequel to this, the one where they find a way out of the deal so they can both get back to their lives...Not sure if you do requests though...lol

Great read - Thank you!

Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 01:31 AM · On: A Mask to Come Undone

truly heartbreaking!  i can almost feel sam's pain.  awesome, awesome job!

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 14/01/08 11:54 PM · On: A Mask to Come Undone

I adored "The Whipping Dance" and I love this one just as much. This intense, sad little fic is original and clever!

You have not only captured Sam's love  and desperation, you have captured his passionate nature and brooding intensity. And you captured me with the poignancy and desperation that I felt with every memory, every understanding, every interpretation.

You made me catch my breath with his exceptionally well written little oneshot. Fantastic work!