Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 16/11/08 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was a very adiquet pieace, that you have presented. It showed his true under ruged side of his valnerability of falling in love and its reason to why he can't.
Reviewer: Supernaturalfan15 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Reviewer: Harlow (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, the intensity of this story is amazing
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
awww this story is soo cute!! keep up the awesome work!!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
Damn Impala, I missed this one. Very well done and postively heartbreaking.. Gotta say I also read and weeped over the Twilight series....thanks for the great read - K
Author's Response: Aww, thanks a bunch for coming back and finding this one K! You're gunna make me blush. Oh gosh, isn't the twilight series just so amazing, glad I'm not the only one on this site who appreciates it :)
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
awwwww....very good and sad, bex!! broke my heart for poor Dean!! awesome job on this oneshot!! bambers;)
Author's Response: Hey Bambers! Thanks for stopping by and giving this very quick story a go, it is much appreciated! And of course those stars woah you're going to make me blush. Have a great day, Bambers! -Bex
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
Bex, this was simply stunning. The depth of Dean's pain, the regret of his lie just heartbreaking. Bravo!!!!! Crystal
Author's Response: Crys M'dear. What can I say, you're too kind. I'm glad you liked this quick little thing that I jotted down on a hot summers day. I hope all is well on your end! Thanks SO much for the stars, they truly do make me grin like a kid in a candy store :) haha -Bex
Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
aww how sad and poor dean..lovely one shot
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad I portrayed Dean to everyones liking :) -Bex
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
Beautiful descriptions. I would've loved more of the story but this works so wonderfully that I can be happy without it.
Author's Response: Howdy! Thank you so much for your review :) I was actually writing more but then I cut it because it seemed to ruin the flow and the over all finality of the piece...and plus it was growing late and my writing skills were slowly going down the sink hole lol! But thank you for wanting more, you're very kind, thank you again! -Bex
Reviewer: Pandemonium (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi Impala I am Kaide and brand new to the site but your story instantly called me and I just had to read it. This is my very first review and I have to say, this was very beautiful because I felt like I was reading a poem. Every word dripped with emotion and melted my heart for I love Dean so much. Thanks for sharing your talents. xxxx Kaide
Author's Response: Hey Kaide, well I've already welcomed you but once again WELCOME! *blushes* first review wow thanks for that, I'm so glad you enjoyed, I must say this was one of the first stories that I truly enjoyed writing all the way through! I hope you have a fantastic time on this site, and thank you dearly for the stars :) -Bex
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
Y'know for someone who doesn't read romance, I'm sure reading a lot of it at the moment...lol This was beautiful Bex, so sad and so true to Dean's self-sacrificing character...absolutely marvellouse.
Author's Response: Hey Lou! One of my most loyal reviewers! Lol sorry to drag you into romance, although this one wasn't too sappy more rip you're heart out and stamp all over it lol. However thanks for giving this quick story a chance and then reviewing you're amazing! Oh and those wonderful stars which put a smile on my dial! Hope you have a great day! -Bex
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG Bex! I'm a blithering mess over here!! This one just ripped my heart out right there with Dean's *biggest sob in the world* "He braced himself for the words he as about to say. Waited for the vile taste fo the lie to violate his senses and leave him momentarily numb." That evoked one of the saddest images of Dean my brain has ever had to endure!! Beautiful, beautiful! You wrote that scene of mutual heartbreak so well.
Author's Response: Heya Petra. Once again your reviews always leave a warm and fuzzy feeling inside of me :) Thanks for singling (sp?) a sentence you liked it really shows you were paying attention and enjoying this story. You're a wonderful reviewer did I ever tell you that? and you're just plain lovely! Thanks again! Bex
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
Like I said before, I think this is so beautifully written and so sad. I really felt Dean's pain and believed it which is important for a reader. What makes this one shot really special is, you haven't told us who the girl is but left it for us to feel who she is through Dean's pain. I think I might come and read this ever so often, because I found it so inspiring. Schelz.. 10/10
Author's Response: Heya schelz, thanks so much for your on going support and your willingness to listen to anything and everything that I scribble (or type in this case) down. You're a legend! -Bex
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