Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/04/08 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 10
The description of the cave gave me the creeps. Sam and Oscar're trapped in the cave, Dean is badly injured and the Black Annis is out there...not good at all. Thank goodness Bobby is there but Peg and Floss had the upper hand, they're going with him, lol. So intense, can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Man I"m glad the cave creeped you out, it's always nice to find out the descriptions worked. Things aren't looking good for the boys, but no worries, their Winchesters ;)
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 21/04/08 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wow, talk about Clash of the Titans, Bobby V Peg and Floss, and I think Bobby just came off worse!!...lol. It's great to see Bobby enter the arena, this could just be a match made in heaven. This is just so tense and exciting, poor Dean nearly out of the action, Sammy floundering in the dark looking for another exit and just where has that Black Annis got to?? I'm so pleased Oscar's still hanging in there. That lair was just so horribly well described, it had my skin crawling. Sam wrapping the baby was just so sweet. Another superb update, looking forward to the next one. Thanks. Jane
Author's Response: LOL, yeah some cage match eh... The boys are hurting that's for sure, So glad you're enjoying and that you felt the cave was well described. Thanks for the review and the stars - Kel
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 21/04/08 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 10
Bobby's got his hands full - those two may be more to handle than the Annis - ha - poor Dean could use him though, huh? Like the image of Sam being surprised at picking up Oscar. Nice chapter, enjoying the tale - Angela
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying, Angela. I'm thinking we're nearly at the end now. Thanks as always for the review ;)
Reviewer: gapdragon (Signed) · Date: 21/04/08 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 10
really enjoying this story and new to the site so having to remember my manners and not keep demanding more more. I love the sisters - think when this is over they should open a 'roadhouse'. Thanks for the stories (just starting the sara series) My family also conspire to drag me away from the computer. Thanks again su Liverpool UK
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying, yeah family's just don't get it huh...lol. Thanks for letting me know you're enjoying, it's always fun to find out people really are reading...lol Enjoy the site there are a ton of really great authors - Kel
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 21/04/08 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 10
I still absolutely love these two old ladies - don't we all wish that's who we could be when we get that age? Still enjoying the story. Thanks for a great read.
Author's Response: I absolutely agree, how nice to have that much get up and go....I think mine energy's already gotten up and left ;) Glad you're enjoying - Kel
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/04/08 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 10
i just love floss and peg,they even stood up to bobby.lol
Author's Response: Standing up to Bobby doesn't not seem easily done, huh? Glad you liked and I'll do my best to update soon - Kel
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 21/04/08 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 10
Awesome! Still loving this story. Yay, Bobby is to the rescue.... oh well - and Floss and Peg! You had me cracking up once again about these two ladies. Can't wait to see how they will get the boys and the baby out of their troubles!
Author's Response: Yeah, gotta love Bobby. He might have finally met his match in Floss and Peg. All's well as long as Floss doesn't try and marry him, all of her boyfriends seem to be shortlived ;) Thanks as always for the review and the stars
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 21/04/08 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 10
You've still got me hooked, kel, and again with the snow white reference, hee hee. love those feisty ladies, and now they're riding to the rescue with bobby in tow! go grannies!! -c
Author's Response: I don't know why but now that I've used it I can't get that snow white image out of my head...lol. Glad you enjoyed - Kel
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 21/04/08 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 10
i love those women! hehehehehe. they even got bobby to take them with him *shakes head* anywho, please update soon!
Author's Response: LOL, Yeah lucky Bobby right. Glad you're enjoying and thanks for the review - Kel
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 21/04/08 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 10
Kel, great chapter i love Bobby wanting to pour holy water on the women; too funny! that had me laughing for a while. Dean is hurt, Sam is sick and poor Oscar. again love Peg and Floss. Renee
Author's Response: LOL, yeah Bobby is an absolute favorite of mine and I love adding him in wherever possible - Glad you're still enjoying - KEl
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/08 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 9
Kelly, excellent story so far. i love Peg and Floss they are great characters. so willing to take care of Dean and Sam. Grandmothers they never had. Dean's in trouble had a feeling this was going to happen. hope chapter 10 will be up soon Renee
Author's Response: Dean's in trouble, yeah, that happens every now and again huh, lol. Glad you enjoyed and I'm heading to get chapter 10 done now. So glad you're enjoying and thanks for dropping me a line, it's always great to know people are reading - Kel
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 17/04/08 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 9
Gripping chapter Kel. OMG!Things didn't go as planned. Suspenseful, can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: LOL, no they did not. But then again, if things did go right for the boys would we still love them quite as much?...I'll update soon - Kel
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 9
The right thing and the easy one just never match up, do they? Enjoyed the chapter, nice images in the memory, looking forward to more of this tale - Angela
Author's Response: No they never do seem to match up. Heartbreaking really, glad you enjoyed and thanks for sticking with it. Take care of yourself - Kel
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 8
Knew the sisters would end up being up to something - least it seems to be something on the boy's side. Maybe they both run a tight ship - lol - angela
Author's Response: LOL, yeah the sisters are definitly up to something alright. Glad you're enjoying
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 9
An action one, very exciting, loved it! And what a flasback, thought my heart would stop. (The Black Annis - I'm now absolutely sure she is related to one of my superiors, her sister I would guess, she even looks like her!) Really hope, you will update before the weekend, have to know how this continues!
Author's Response: hm... so you've found yourself a hag, huh. lol. Hopefully she doesn't eat small children. I'll post as quickly as I can. - Kel
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 9
that was a brilliant update.really looking forward to more of this great story.
Author's Response: Glad you dug it, and I'm working on an update as we speak....well actually that's not true, once I respond to the reviews then I'll be working on the update ;) thanks - Kel
Reviewer: danny (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 9
keep up the gud work i am really enjoying this story please update soon Danny xxxxxx
Author's Response: Thanks so much Danny, and I appreciate you taking the time to review. I'll update soon - Kel
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 9
Y'know you've ruined my Disney favourite..never again will I be able to watch 'Snow white and the Seven Dwarfs' again without thinking of 'that' line...lol Great work Kel...can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: hehehe, I know that was such a classy line right...I seriously have never seen the movie, though I did check online to make sure it exsists...glad you enjoyed - Kel
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 9
Great update. Oh dear, trouble found the Winchesters again... Some really great lines in this chapter. In fact, Sam had little doubt that his brother would confront the old crone with little more than a tooth brush if Sam thought it would be effective. - this one had me cracking up. Looking forward to more - as always :)
Author's Response: Ah, Dagmar and stars too how sweet. Glad you're enjoying and hopefully I'll get you another chapter sunday or monday. Hopefully all is well ;) Take care - Kel
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 9
awesome chapter, even better after a second read. Several funny lines i could quote, but my favorite is finally not funny, just beautiful, Often, when faced with fears larger than he was sure he could handle, Sam would think back to that one moment in time. Though, it wasn't the last time Dean had offered up his life in exchange for Sam's, it was the first that Sam could remember. The site of his brother, kneeling there in the dirt would always be the image that straightened Sam's spine in defiance. Sam returned to the present, determined to live up to his brother's example. Thanks for the terrific read.
Author's Response: Thank you...for your encouragment (uh, nagging...lol) You always keep me moving forward ;)
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 15/04/08 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 9
You had me howling Kel! And I read this chapter at work! There were so many funny lines: "Regardless of what you think, Sam, you're not out of the woods yet." Sam, unable to resist, gestured to the surrounding forest and grinned. and this one! He had to admit, in later years he'd found the tale of Snow and her dwarves to be much more interesting when watched on the Skin-a-max channel. At least then the dwarves had reason to whistle while they worked. I love how you are able to seamlessly weave glimpses of their past into the storyline. You've got me on tenterhooks with this ending. Can't wait to see what's next! --c
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the flashback, i was hesitant to add it in feeling it wasn't as relevant as I felt it was, but a good friend convinced me to keep it in. I'm happy to see she was right (she always is...lol) Thanks for the wonderful review and I'll hopefully post today or tomorrow - Kel
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 8
Whoooo! Gun-totin grannies!? Kick-ass sisters with an attitude! I can't wait to find out how Peg and Flossy save the boys! --c
Author's Response: LOL, yeah well those sisters protect their own, that's for sure. And I"m pretty certain that they now consider the boys theirs...Glad to see you're still reading and I'm working as we speak on the next chappy - Kel
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oh my, this was my favorite line: Despite the futility of it all, Dean kept going. After all, he was nothing if not his father's son. You paint such a vivid picture with your words. I'm really enjoying this. --c
Author's Response: Thanks for such a great compliment, glad you like :)
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 11/04/08 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 2
Heh heh heh, i had the funniest vision in my mind when i read this: For some reason Dean had no trouble imagining Peg down here in the basement wielding a cleaver as she beheaded the family chickens. Kel, I'm loving this story, can't wait to see where it goes from here! Poor Sam. -- cricket
Author's Response: Gotta admit the whole, killing chickens things comes from my mom's story's of her Italian Grandmother preparing for their big sit down Sunday dinners.. As for myself, I like my chicken, all neatly wrapped up in plastic wrap preferably with the name Perdue on it ....lol. Glad to see you're still enjoying - Kel
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 11/04/08 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh Kel, this line had me rolling in laughter (down the cubicle aisles at work no less): To put it bluntly Dean was basically as a big a ho for food as he was for women, -- cricket
Author's Response: Now Cricket I don't wanna be responsible for you getting booted from work so hold the laughing to a minimum ;)
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