Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 12
so really done and done... great ending, some frigging funny lines! And Bobby, not a chance against the sisters, lol... Okay, will wait very patiently for the next story... (thank god i know you're typing right now!!!)
Author's Response: lol, patiently my ass....How can I resist writing when you ask so sweetly ;) Catch you on the next one. :)
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 12
This has been a GREAT story from start to finish!!!!!! Outstanding verbage, timing, tenor, humor, and just good old Winchester craziness made a neat, package to entertain and keep your readers in suspense and laughter all the way thru.AWESOME job!!!!!! I love these sisters- they kept Sam and Dean on their toes- with the added piece with Bobby-Excellent writing!!!!!!!! your skillful crafting of the story and the visually perfect words made this a must read for me!!!!! BRAVO!!!
Author's Response: Aw, you're making me blush. Thanks a lot sweetie for your kind words. So glad you enjoyed this one and I hope to see you for the next. - Kel
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 12
Fantastic! I'm happy to wind this one up, too. Not that I want to see Peg and Floss get gone, but i did want to see the evil hag get her due :) I love how you made Dean the one who's great with children and babies. that was a touching scene where Sam is so relieved to hand over Oscar and he quiets right down when Dean holds him. this line gave me great big belly laughs: Peg cradled the baby in her arms and turned to face Floss, a slight smile pulling at the corners of her mouth. "These boys faint more than a nun at an orgy." What wonderful characters you write. I've enjoyed this story tremendously. Thanks Kel! --cricket
Author's Response: hehehehe, I think that line's been written in my notebook since I started the story ;) I've just been waiting for the right place to use it. So glad you've enjoyed and I'll catch you soon - Kel
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 11
I love these two women, never take no for an answer. If that's the answer then just do what you wanna do anyway. Love it. I can't wait to see what Bobby and the women do to save the boys and the baby. Wonderful story that I have been enjoying very much.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the stars lostatc and for the comment it always means a lot when a writer you respect gives you the thumbs up and tells you they've been enjoying ;) Kel
Reviewer: v_airy (Signed) · Date: 04/05/08 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 11
Great story! Your story has great interaction between Sam and Dean, and I also like the sisters, and the creepy Black Annis. Glad Bobby is here now. Please update again soon!
Author's Response: thanks so much and I'm thrilled you were creeped out by the baddie, that's always a good thing ;) Kel
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/05/08 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 11
that was a great chapter,so much was happening.very exciting.
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh yeah and did I forget to mention...14 more days! WOOHOO! I am SO anxious!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 11
Yay! Sam is out of the cave! But man you are really doing a number on my Dean...wanna run out into the woods and nurse him back to health... As for Bobby, he has got his hands full with those two sisters...LOL Floss really has a one track mind doesn't she lol! Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Thanks Gen, so glad you enjoyed. yeah Dean's a bit beaten but let's be honesty he's had worse...As for Bobby, well who knows maybe he'll enjoy having his hands full ;) Thanks for reading, chick. LIVONIA OR BUST!!!!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 11
Great chapter Kel. The Black Annis is out there, Dean, Sam and Oscar in the open, so not good. Floss has a thing for Bobby, well, well. I knew the sisters wouldn't stay in the car, what a duo they're doing. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Glad you dug it oceane, I'm working out the ending as we speak.. or well I type...lol...well you get my drift. I'll post just as soon as I can ;)
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 11
Oh wow, you had quite a few things in this chapter. Sam's painful thoughts and his escape with little Oscar (grand job you did with the cave description, the sight of the Black Annis's bed is still in my head, so creepy!) while Dean is about to sacrifice himself again, heavy stuff but great! Think this will be some showdown when Bobby and the sisters will join them; ja, Bobby and the sisters this sure has it's moments (am I totally wrong or does Floss have a soft spot for Bobby?) I want more!
Author's Response: I'm working on more...lol. As for Bobby and Floss well we'll just have to wait and see. She does seem a tad enamored with our bearded hunter, huh. Glad you're enjoying and that the cave creeped you out.. It's satisfying to know the descriptions worked. ;)
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 11
Love it! What else can I say :) ? Floss' thoughts about a cleaned up Bobby - just priceless! Looking forward to the next chapter. Hope all is well!
Author's Response: I'm working as we speak to get a new chapter up. Things are a bit slow cause the boys started soccor (4 NIGHTS A WEEK!!!!) But I'll get this one wrapped up soon. Take care of yourself ;)
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 30/04/08 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 11
Read this last night but just had to come back this morning to R&R...I'm so glad Bobby's on the case...and is there a bit of romance in the air for our for Bobby? Cos if it is, well it's about time!! Love it Kel, as alway, skilled writing and a great plot! Fantastic work, roll on the next update.
Author's Response: Don't know about a romance per say, but I'm thinking there's sparks at least...lol. Thanks for the wonderful review and for the stars.. glad you're diggin this one.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 30/04/08 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 11
Hahahahaha...Floss has a mini crush on Bobby!!! that is so cute! i really really hope Bobby and the sisters would come to the boys' rescue before they are too tired to carry on. i have no doubt that the sisters are very capable of holding their own when it comes down to the crunch.
Author's Response: I love that everyone believes so much in the sisters.. It's great to people enjoy characters that I created. Last chapter coming up.
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 29/04/08 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 11
Kel, could Floss and Peg be Dean and Sam. i love how they act. Floss liking Bobby too funny. we all knew they would not stay behind. Like how you described Sam having to deal with Oscar and that he thought Dean was better suited to handle children especially since he is a big child himself. but more importantly he all ready raised one.....Sam. great story Renee
Author's Response: Thanks Renee, so glad you're enjoying. And yeah Floss and Peg's relationship is a reflection of the boy's.. just seemed to work out that way the more I wrote about them. Thanks for taking the time to review - Kel
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/04/08 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 11
I love Dean's philosophical views on the word suckier and how it applies to his life. Too funny! So Floss is checkin' out Bobby? Snow on the roof, but still fire in the furnace.
Author's Response: Well I'm thinking that dean's got a pretty good handle on what sucks and what's even suckier...lol. LOVED 'Snow on the roof, but still fire in the furnace'...made me laugh out loud. Thanks ;)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/04/08 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 10
Death by dismemberment---good one Bobby! I love Peg and Floss more with every chapter! I don't think I'd go up against Bobby, but damn if they aren't doing it and getting their way!
Author's Response: LOL, glad you liked the inclusion of Bobby, he's always a favorite of mine and him plus the sisters just seemed like a fun exchange to write.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/04/08 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 9
Wow! I wasn't expecting Annie to outsmart the Winchesters! And I loved your story about the mangy dog. It was so touching.
Author's Response: Thanks, Shannon, glad you liked the flashback, I honestly wasn't sure about adding it in. I just can't help throwing in a Weechester flashback now and again...lol.
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 29/04/08 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 11
I didn't think Peg and Floss would happily wait at the car, especially as it seems Floss has taken a bit of a shine to our Bobby!! Poor Dean, only an ounce of fight left in him and it looks like he's about to use that up, at least Bobby's in situ now, so that should make everything better! That Black Annis crawling up the wall and waiting above the entrance was a very creepy vision, made my skin crawl, I'll be checking doorways tonight!! Sam seems to be picking up the Fatherhood thing just fine, I bet he doesn't want to give Oscar back in the end!! Well, as long as he doesn't start crying again.....lol Well at least all the ingredients for a rescue are there now, and whatever happens, I think Peg and Floss will be heaping the meals on those hunters. Who knows, the way to Bobby's heart....?? Another great update, looking forward to the next one. Jane.
Author's Response: Yup, everyone's in place and we're down to it now.. One more chapter to go. So glad you're diggin the story, and thanks so much for reviewing and the stars ;)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 29/04/08 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 11
LOL! Oh my, Floss already plans on feeding and cleaning up Bobby!! And i love how Peg knows exactly what's going on in Floss' mind, great other pair of sibling you have here. Man, seing how the Winchesters are now, the time they'll be seventy years old they won't even have use of words anymore. Talking about them, Sam's expedition almost made me feel claustrophobic also, and Dean, what the hell he thinks he can do??! great update. Oh, and... two freakin' weeks!! :)
Author's Response: Hey it's Dean, you know the man never gives up....lol 13 DAYS!!!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 10
Sorry i slacked on the reviewing...wanted to but somehow didn't have the energy to do so til now...LOL this story keeps getting better and better...hopefully bobby and the ladies would be able to save both boys, although i have a feeling that the boys are in for a lot more trouble before they arrive!!
Author's Response: Ah...well I'll forgive you for slacking on your reviews...lol. Just glad you're still hanging in their enjoying the story. Thanks for reading - Kel
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 10
What's not to love about this chapter...Sam has found Oscar-Dean is badly hurt-not so good-Bobby's on the scene-OUTSTANDING!!!!!!! I love how you describe the meeting of Bobby Singer and the Mabel sisters- like 2 bulls butting heads. Got to love the old girls - no backing them down-glad their on Sam and Dean's side-AWESOME This story has just gotten better and better-great writing from a master!!!! More please . BRAVO!!!!!!
Author's Response: A Master *snort* don't know about that hun...lol. But I have been having a lot of fun with this one. Glad you're enjoying and thanks a heap for the stars ;)
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 22/04/08 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 10
Did I enjoy this chapter - the inside of the cave, what a nightmare, like 'Dante's inferno' (what gory details, I mean the nest, horror). Just loved the way Sam treated little Oscar (and Dean was right here, what a ridiculous name for an innocent child). And if this wouldn't be enough Dean is hurt bad and the Black Annis still after all of them. Glad Bobby arrived, always feels good when this guy is around; well, he found his master this time it seems, I'm curious to see this very special rescue mission. Great! (Oh, and my personal Black Annis at work, she only enjoys the taste of us adults, bad luck for me!)
Author's Response: hm.. she only takes bites out of co-workers huh, man that's rough...lol. I'll send those Winchesters your way and they can fill her with rock salt, hows that?...Glad you enjoyed and I'll update this weekend. - Kel
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 22/04/08 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 10
oh Kel, excellent! Bobby's completely overwhelmed by these two ladies! And Sam found poor Oscar, and his way of taking care of him, adorable. Update asap, okay, at least before Dean dies in that damn forest! ;)
Author's Response: Dean's a tough guy, he can wait it out in that forest for a bit...lol. I'm gonna get the update up this weekend ;) hopefully. Glad you enjoyed - THREE WEEKS!!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 22/04/08 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 10
So okay I couldn't wait to read this...Alright, Sam found the baby! woohoo, but Dean is hurt pretty bad...booo! But Bobby's arrived! woohoo! and the Mabel sisters are insisting on going with...lol... This should be interesting...can't wait for the update! Nice work so far Kel!
Author's Response: LOL, well there's a compliment, it's always nice to see someone losing sleep over one of my stories...Glad you enjoyed and I'll update soon - Kel
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 22/04/08 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 9
Wow sorry it took me so long to get back to this! Nicely done, building the suspense as always! LOL gotta love it when Dean can corrupt a Disney classic! Looking forward to the next chappy but I have to get to bed so I will read it tomorrow...promise!
Author's Response: Never a worry Gen, I'm just glad you're still enjoying. I know that whole Dean and the Snow white thing just wouldn't get out of my head.. glad it gave you a chuckle - See you in three weeks !!!
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