Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 4
i love this story... Many parts i could quote. Chose this, "Floss stood and moved toward Dean. Reaching out, she cupped his chin gently and tilted his face up to meet her gaze. "You're a good man, Dean, and Peg knows it. It's why she asked you for help. Don't let the sheriff color your investigation. You owe it to Emma to decide on your own.". Can't wait for more, have the feeling your Dean, confronted to hurt babies, will be very interesting...
Author's Response: Yeah well nothing gets Dean going like hurt children right.. I'm going to get an update going soon - Kel
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 4
How sad, they found the baby dead and the sheriff thought the mother killed her and DEan came to the same conclusion. I'm glad that after Sam and the sisters talked to Dean that he'll search the truth. Amazing story Kel, I'm looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Yeah well we all know that Dean might stomp his feet but in the end, he gives into Sam. Glad you're enjoying so far - Kel
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 4
Like this story a lot, it's really speeding up know. The one thing I still have a very bad feeling (can't help it) is about the two old ladies, for some reason they give me a shiver and I absolutely hate to see Sam left alone with these two. Well, can't wait for this to continue, great work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Bia.. I"m glad your enjoying. And I so appreciate the review. It's always nice to know that people are reading. - Kel
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 09/02/08 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 4
If you like pina coladas and getting caught in the rain...lol or is it...GIve me two pina coladas one for each hand...lol Too funny! Hungover Dean is a true rarity! Wow so they think the Mom did it...I think that Sam is a good judge of people and that this story would be cut very shrot if that were the case! So, I'm gonna go with the assumption that Sam and the old ladies are right! Look forward to seeing how this one is explain...so sad that the baby died...that's a hard pill to swallow... Great update Kel! Looking forward to the next installment!
Author's Response: Yeah let's be honest when is it ever the obvious answer. Glad you're enjoying Gen, and I'll update soon - Kel
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 4
Those have to be some hard-core drinkers if they got Dean skunked. I'm more excited than ever to read more! I can't wait to find out what the sherriff knows about the mom and what really killed the baby. Also, I think something's up with the sisters. They know too much about the world not to know about the supernatural.
Author's Response: Glad to know I've got you hooked, Shannon. Thanks so much for the R&R - Kel
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 4
good job
Author's Response: Thanks so much, glad to see you're enjoying. ;)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 3
That's a turn I didn't see coming! Somewhere there's probably a connection between what's happening to Sam and the baby's disappearance, but you still have me in the dark. I love the way you explained Dean's thoughts about leaving and how a safe havens in his life have become places of avoidance now.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed Shannon. I always appreciate you taking the time to review. Thanks for reading - kel
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 4
So Dean on a diet of calamari and wine???? If only he'd been in that tux as well I'd have been in heaven...lol Great update as ever Kel, although knowing you there's a few twists up your sleeve still to come...
Author's Response: Yeah I hear you Bullet, why is it when I go to my local Italian restuarant there's nothing near that good looking sitting there??? LOL, though if there was I'd probably turn into a stalker ;). Twists ahead, thanks for reading - Kel
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 4
Wonderful chapter Kel, thanks! I loved the scene in the restaurant and the sisters' comments afterwards even more. So Dean is eating Calamari and drinking anisette and "wine"? The story takes an interesting turn and I love the tension you are slowly builing up. The plot is thickening and I can't wait to hear what's really going on in that town. Always looking forward to your next updates :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much Dagmar. Hopefully the next couple chapters will hold a bit more angst. As always I appreciate you reading and thanks for the review.. Hope all is well - kel
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hmmm, the mystery thickens. I'm guessing that Dean and the sheriff being right is going to be too simple an answer here. Once all that booze is gone he may think it through again. I'm enjoying this story, glad to have this chapter to keep me company in my insomnia fit tonight! - Angela
Author's Response: LOL, glad to be of help. Insomnia gets the best of all of us at times. That's the nice thing about this site there's always something to keep you entertained. Thanks for reading - Kel
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 3
NIce emotional mix in this - that bathroom at the start is just funny, Dean's memories are sweet, and then you run smack dab into issing baby - and of course they wouldn't take any work that was risky, now would they? lol. Angela
Author's Response: So glad you liked, and yeah it's not as if the boys would care right...lol
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 31/01/08 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 3
awesome chappy, kel...love the danny devito, arnold conversation!! love that peg and floss want to hire the boys!! can't wait for next chappy and the baddie!! bambers;)
Author's Response: LOL, glad it gave you a laugh B, and thanks so much for reading...
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 3
This is a great story. Peg and Floss are very dynamic characters and excellent in their ability to distract and get the Winchesters to do what they want. Tone-timing-temper-it's all their in a complete package-AWESOME job!!! It's interesting to see the boys reactions to what could be called small town aunts-EXCELLENT!!! More please. BRAVO!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your enthusiasm and I appreciate the compliment. I'm so glad you're enjoying and I promise more soon - Kel
Reviewer: Anybody out there (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oh, I didn't ask about the Sara series because I don't like this story -you got that, right? Cause I LOVE this story. Just had to make that clear, lol
Author's Response: LOL, you're too sweet, are you trying to make me cry...lol. I never denied your sincerity...thanks for reading - Kel
Reviewer: Anybody out there (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oh, Kell, I know I've said I loved the sisters before, but.... Still does:) And I have to say; you have a talent for creating believable characters and bringing them to life. Think that's why I'm such a HUGE fan of your stories, cause they all contain great char. And now in this story there's a missing baby, looking forward to see where this is going... A little question: Any story in the Sara series on the way soon....? Pleeeeeeease say yes;;)
Author's Response: wow, thank you so much honey for the compliment, though I love the guys (and I mean LOVE...) I always enjoy throwing new characters at them to interact with. It's a thrill when people enjoy them. As for Sara...lol. Keep your pants on, even now I'm in the process of putting that poor family through the ringer again. I hope to have a post up before the end of February. Thanks for caring and I hope you continue to enjoy this one. - Kel
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 3
Poor Dean, you've captured so well, how Johns' death deeply affected him at this point and the worry over Sams' future is really starting to weigh him down. It's like he's yearning to settle down someplace safe and hide, yet terrified of being caught in a trap. Peg and Floss seem to have managed to trigger off his protective side although I hazard a guess that they may be quite able to look after themselves! I loved that steamy bathroom scene - helping to clear Sams cough - the thought of two drowsy steamed up Winchesters mmmm!! The dialogue was hilarious and so typical of sleepy ramblings, lurching from one subject to the next. Lovely! The way you drew them from that steamy oasis of calm and plunged into a state of full alert was beautifully done. Nothing like a child in danger to get Deans' attention. I am so looking forward to your next update. Thanks. Jane
Author's Response: Yeah who hasn't had conversations like that right...lol. Some of my best times have been simply rambling with a friend, trading barbs and making each other laugh. So glad I've got you hooked, hopefully I can keep you that way - Kel
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 3
Ahhh, perfect! Loved the brother moments in the bathroom - lol. You just write everything about our favorite brothers so well. And Sam's thoughts about Dean being over at the neigbors house were just spot on. What a turn of events. Too cute that Peg and Floss want to hire Dean and Sam to investigate Sara's disapperance. But I wonder if there is more to the sister's actions than just pity for the family and the baby. Ok, I agree with Fredo..... we WANT another chapter like NOW..... please???? Thank you :)
Author's Response: Like now, huh, Well we'll have to see what I can manage..lol. If I skip laundry this week and just toss some cereal at the chlidren for sustenance I might be able to wrangle one before the weekend's over. Thanks for your never-ending enthusiasm and I"m glad you're enjoying - Kel
Reviewer: Roguehunter (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great chapter. I am really loving this story so far. Peg and Floss are so darn funny. Feel bad for Sam being sick and all. Great job writing both brothers. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much it's always so nice to hear people think I've done a decent job with the brothers. After all, they're the reason we're here..lol. So glad you're enjoying and thanks for the review it really does just make my day - Kel
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 3
"Got me, I never knew you could put wall-to-wall in a bathroom. Though, as a person well acquainted with hugging the porcelain god I gotta say the rug's a nice touch." LOL very funny line! Damn, so much for that, Dean thought as he struggled to deflect Sam's whole you're the wind beneath my wings conversation. Oh man, you are on a roll with these tonight! And the whole Arnold conversation *shakes head* too funny! You really have a knack for writing Dean dialogue! Poor baby has been kidnapped! Not good! But with the Winchester's on the case something tells me this is gonna end up supernatural in nature.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the one-liners, I was trying to lighten the story a bit in face of the missing babe, I'm happy it worked. I've been missing you honey and I'm waiting to find what's up with poor Ronnie and the boys...thanks for reading chicky - Kel
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 3
I like the idea of the guys investigating a non supernatural case. still loving the two women, those are two tough old ladies. Thanks for a great read.
Author's Response: Man I'm always so happy to hear that an outside character is working for you guys.. Though I love the boys, I love their interaction with others just as much. Glad you're enjoying and thanks for the review - K
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 3
It's getting very intriguing. Who has kidnapped little Sara, poor sweetie. Great update Kel, can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Update'll come hopefully before the weekend, so glad to know you're enjoying. Thanks as always for taking the time Oceane, it means so much - K
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 3
Awesome! Why does it have to stop?! I loved it. The first part, with Dean's thoughts, and everything in that bathroom (so usually toilet paper comes white in the States, cause here it's pink, and no I don't dye it myself), then Sam's feelings while waiting for Dean to come back, and the sisters hiring them, perfect. So glad you followed your first idea about that story, can't wait for more. Promise me i'll get at least one more chappy before i leave for my vacas, please please please...
Author's Response: WOW, I rated an Awesome huh. See that's what I can get done without a hubby...lol. Pink huh?...weird...lol. Actually I think you can find it in both blue and pink here.. I'm also glad you talked me into following my instincts though things are about to get rough...I think I can work one more chappy.. though all this Vacation chattin is killing my motivation...lol - Thanks for reading my friend - Kel
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 3
good job will be waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks much and I promise to update a bit quicker for the next one - Thanks for the review - KEl
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 3
great story,really enjoying it ,well worth the wait.
Author's Response: So glad you're liking this one, and thanks so much for taking the time to review, it's always great to know that people are reading- K
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 3
Well, apart from having some of the most original lines...'as a person well acquainted with hugging the porcelain god I gotta say the rug's a nice touch'....lol...awesome, you also managed the clearest description...I could have been sitting in that house with the boys. And you know how to make a story work...Dean plus kids in trouble equals a real thrilling ride and I already know I'm going to love the rest of this one. And still loving those ladies...
Author's Response: Thanks so much Louy, I'm glad it's holding your interest. And just let me say that, the blue bathroom was truely the bluest thing I've seen ever....as you can tell it made an impression on me...lol. :)
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