This one made me smile, a great glimpse into the 'normal' things that big brother's do for their kid brothers. Very nice!

Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad I made you smile!  :)

LOVED IT!! You have nailed the depth of the boys love and the comfort of their companionship in one fell swoop.

Sam checking to see that their legs were identically crossed an absolute gem!

Your title is perfect!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it!  :)

good job!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Looking forward to that ficlet...hope it won't be too long in coming. And this one I liked a lot. Beautiful descriptions and very thought provoking...thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I've made a good start on that ficlet, so hopefully it won't be too long until it's posted.

Awesome, this needs to be a story! As a drabble, it has me intrigued. I just loved it. Your third line stole my heart. Fantastic, best one yet in a little library of drabbles that have been as outstanding as they have diverse.

Keep it up! You're doing a wonderful job!

Author's Response: Thanks!  I've made a good start on the ficlet so hopefully it shouldn't be too long until it's posted.  I'm glad you've been enjoying the drabbles!  :)

good job

Author's Response: Thanks.

Dean's incredulity at Sam's exasperated "He was supposed to say don't be afraid of the dark" said it all.

You captured innocence beautifully. a safe, protected place to be.

Your line "no matter how hard you run, you have to face your monsters" is about us all.

Another thoughtful drabble.

Author's Response: Thank you!  :)

OK... thank you for answering the question I had in my mind-why did John Pick YED to deal with.

YEt, it raised a question for me-why would John give the YED something to use against Sam???? another way to make Dean feel guility????

THese are very good drabbles!!!!!

 

 

 

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying the drabbles.

good job

Author's Response: Thanks!  :)

Okay, I'm going to write these prompts before I lose my nerve (I love your work, and I guess this is a good way to let you know it).

finis; probabilities; wrenching concern; violent reaction; fatal flaw; timed response; "...failure to communicate"; trickle down; fighting chance; laughing and floundering and finally just letting go; so easy; you always have to have the final word; Well, yeah, that's a given...; How in the world?!

Thanks for listening...you always surprise me in the most delightfull ways!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)  I'm glad you're enjoying my fics.

Thanks also for the prompts, there's so many!  I think I will be writing some of these...the muse definitely perked up at 'violent reaction' and "..failure to communicate".  I'll have fun with these I'm sure! 

"Treasure it...but not now". How true is that! Dean didn't have time to bask in his Dad's praise did he? With John's secret and death, Dean was only left with turmoil.

This little drabble captured this beautifully.

Heart wrenching, loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you!  I always thought that was so sad, to finally get that praise only to have to then deal with that secret and John's death.

Ok, lump in throat. I have the picture of that park firmly in my mind but it isn't the visual - your words clearly direct us to view it throught the Winchester filter, so we feel.

I think Dean coz S3 Sam is 'over it' - it's now all about vengeance, mission, and deal breaking. But then again, we know it's his history, his dreams, so maybe your park scene was his nostalgic trigger...

But more Dean for me coz we can be sure after WIAWSNB where his heart lies. Not that we didn't know it before...

I have this image of Dean leaning over the roof of Metallicar, hands clasped, sun rays behind him, far away look in his eyes, watching your park. Your focus on 'him' wondering what it would be like to be a child playing and not have a care in the world also made me think Dean coz he would have memories of happy times playing with parents where Sammy would not.

Clever to give us the choice.

"He wanted it so badly" This line is the kicker. Really sad stuff.

I'm loving your drabbles, true to form in drabble style and Winchester essence. Excellent work!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!  I always love it when a reviewer lets me know what they thought of a fic.  It's interesting to see how people's thoughts agree with or differ from what I had in mind when I wrote it.

I wrote it last year before season 3 started with Dean in mind, for exactly the reasons you listed.  After I'd written it though, I realised it could apply to both boys at various times in their lives, and I liked this, so I left it up to the reader to decide for themselves.

I'm glad you're enjoying the drabbles!  :)

Whoa, this was amazing, so much said in those 100 words...packs a huge punch coz we know this is exactly as it is.

"Drain every last second of life from the miserable solitary year" - the boys hearts revealed perfectly, my heart beat in agreement and understanding. Beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thanks!  One of the things I like best about drabbles is that you can fit so much into just 100 carefully chosen words.  I'm glad you liked this.