Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed)
10/01/08 01:57 AM · On:
Great story so far. Love the flashbacks. More please soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, more very soon, promise!
Reviewer: Janger (Signed)
09/01/08 06:00 PM · On:
I'm really starting to not like Charlie, leaving those poor defenceless boys alone in the woods - well nearly defenceless.
"Not far, you cunningly found a short cut," what an excellent line, wonderful flashes of humour amidst the scary situration that has just got a whole heap scarier!!
I was just getting nice and comfortable in that cosy cabin snugggled up with the Winchesters bros when you had to let that bloody Polar Bear back in....lol
Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next one - I really need know what's happened. Great update. Jane
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Jane! You will really start hating Charlie in a chapter or two, promise! It's funny sometimes when I am writing one or the other of the boys just say something like the "cunning" line. Love when they do that. More very soon!
Reviewer: Janger (Signed)
09/01/08 05:37 PM · On:
Oh No, so not good, poor Dean, poisoned, wounded and unconscious in the snow with a deranged, injured Polar Bear on the prowl. You really know how to start a good story!! Scary on so many levels.
I'm feeling the boys have been set up big time here, Charlie sounded nice but maybe he was not so forgiving about the hunt that went wrong!! I didn't like the sound of that dodgy water either.
I loved Deans self dialogue on the helicopter journey, what a lovely way to start his day with a hangover, John Denver and flying.....Wonderful stuff, I must go and read the next one. Jane
Thank you so much! Poor Dean in the snow with a polar bear after him. At least it's not a demonic seal!
Charlie is a little, um, not nice. But you'll find that out soion!
Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed)
09/01/08 05:25 PM · On:
OMG! Chapter one was a great start, and this one is awsome too! Sam has to wake up, he can't leave Dean alone with that thing!! *panicking*
Great story, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, more very soon, I promise
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed)
09/01/08 01:45 PM · On:
Ok... you got my attention with this chapter.
First of all, I don't trust Charlie. He lost too much because of John.
A little too convenient that Dean starts to feel woozy after drinking something Charlie gives him.
The bear going sraight for Dean, just pushing Sam aside...?????
You have painted a vivid picture - the tnesion is already on max high-GREAT JOB!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And not trusting Charlie is a good thing, too bad the boys didn't figure that out before it was too late!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed)
09/01/08 07:15 AM · On:
OMG - What a first chapter, I can only hope you have the whole thing written and are planning on updating every day or so because this is totally addictive and very very good...
Looking out for next instalment eagerly...
Thank you so much, the updates will be coming quickly, I promise!
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed)
09/01/08 06:34 AM · On:
Wow--well, this is off to a fantastic start. Poisoned and badly hurt Dean. Gotta love it. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Doesn't get much better than poisoned hurt Dean does it *giggles*
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed)
09/01/08 02:53 AM · On:
Nooo.......oh god....Dean can't fall asleep!! Where's Sam??? Shouldn't he be there to the rescue!!??
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Don't worry, Sam's nearly there, really!
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed)
08/01/08 10:38 PM · On:
Hmmm, swamee say - beware hunter/creature with reason for grudge and funny looking coffee! Good start
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It would have been nice if Sam and Dean remembered that before they went, wouldn't it?
Reviewer: iluvdean (Signed)
08/01/08 10:18 PM · On:
I absolutely love how you write what Dean is thinking. It creates a different aspect to this story that intrigues me. I have to admit that I've already read this story, but its finally on this site, yay!! and so I decided to read it again. Keep up the great writing!!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much for rereading--what a lovely compliment. I love adding in the thoughts, now that I have started I feel cheated if I don't "Hear" those as well.
Reviewer: JennieC (Signed)
08/01/08 08:46 PM · On:
What an exciting start! I can't wait to get more of this gem. Hurry, please, Sam needs to find Dean before it's too late!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Sam is coming, don't worry. You know our Sam, he's in a panic, but still looking. And luckily he has that trail of blood to follow.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed)
08/01/08 06:52 PM · On:
Ah- I'm doing the happy dance - cause now this story is over here! Thanks Muffy!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!