Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 7

good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!  I am glad you enjoyed the story.  More from me soon--different story of course!!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 7

Muffy.

Fantastic, so unusual and well crafted.  Loved the hug at the end and here's one for you Big Hug   thanks for sharing it and I'm never feel the same about moths from now on!

bev xxx



Author's Response: Thank you so much!!  I am so glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for your kind words and hug:)  Thanks again for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh Muffy this is such a vivid representation of the disorientation Dean is feeling.  His fear is palpable and I am captivated

bev x



Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I am gald you are enjoying the story and the writing:)  More soon!!  Thanks again!!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 5

Muffy this is a terrific story, it's quirky, edgy, kinda out there and I love it.  I get the real feeeling of spaced out-ness that Dean's suffering.  And the terror that Sam is trying to deal with all on his own.

It's frightening and funny and pacy and sweet.  Really good job! 

Bev xx  PS: hope you are getting better each day after being poorly



Author's Response: Thanks you so much for your kind words and concern!! I am getting better and having people enjoying my stories really helps:)  Thank you again!!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is so wonderful as Dean's getting sillier what with scary seals and killer moths and it's all to cover up how bloomin scared he is. 

reading on! loving it!

Bev xx



Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Glad you are liking the story and the silliness along with the drama:)  Thanks again!!

Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 7

Another great story. Can't believe how you guys keep coming up with them. I sure enjoy reading them.  Thanks for keeping me entertained, great work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!  I am glad you and other people enjoy reading them becasue I sure love writing them:)  Thanks again!!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 7

wow ,that was fantastic story.i really enjoyed it.thankyou.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!  I am glad you enjoyed the story:)  I have more sories coming soon.  Thanks again!!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 7

Another beautiful ending...to a fantastic story. I'm going to have to take a look at your bio page and find something I haven't read yet cos i'm going to miss reading your stories..lol

Thanks for the great read...



Author's Response: Thank you so much!!  I am glad you enjoy my stories--love to write them and have people enjoy them:)  Do not worry I have many other stories I plan to write so I won't keep you wainting long--promise!!!  Thanks again!!

Reviewer: tvbatina (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 7

Loved the story - it was very enjoyable. You can do no wrong when you have a healthy serving of hurtDean. Great job!


Author's Response: Thank you so much!!  I am glad you enjoyed the story and it is enjoyable having a good dose of hurt Dean isn't it?  Thanks again!!

Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 7

I sooo cried!!! OMG what a beautiful ending to an awsome story!! Dean can see!!! I'm so happy right now! Loved all the scary and full of angst moments, loved how Sam can't believe Charlie killed his own brother, LOVED the brotherly moments sooo much... To make it short, just loved every second of this story. You did an incredible job with this, congratulations for a real work of art!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words!!  I am so happy you enjoyed the story.  What can I say after that except thanks you so much:) :)

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 7

Awwhhh.....  I really enjoyed this, glad you got Dean back together in the end.  Can't really blame Sam forloosing that bear.  A great read! - Angela

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!  I am so glad you enjoyed the story and the boys always end up back together--they have to:)  Thanks again!!

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 7

I kinda felt sorry for Bill at the end there, however, Charlie deserved whatever that fluffy bear decided to do to him.  I loved Sams' confusion at Charlies' actions when he realised that Bill and Charlie were brothers.  He was almost more horrified at that than at anything else. 

I was so pleased that Sam managed to get the antidote and that Dean is on the road to full recovery.  A lovely ending to a gripping story.  Thanks.  Jane 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review and kind words:)  Never underestimate a fluffy bear and fractricide is probably one of the most horrifying things the brothers could possibly imagine or encounter--I think?:) Happy you enjoyed the story!! Thanks again!!

Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh my god, that was fantastic!  I read the whole thing straight through - just couldn't stop it was so well written and such a great idea.  I love the demonic seal humor and Dean keeping a brave face on but Sam seeing through it.  You portrayed both brothers brilliantly and did the chick flick stuff with the exact right tone for it to ring true to me.  I am so glad Sam got revenge on Dean's behalf and the 'fierce hug' when Dean recovers was really sweet.  Thank you so much for an extremely enjoyable read.  I know I'm gonna come back to it again and again!

Thanks again, Kirsty



Author's Response: Thanks you so much for your kind words and review:) I am truly gald that you enjoyed the story so much--Thank You!!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 7

You had me scared there for a moment when Dean still couldn't see after first receiving the antidote. Him hanging on just long enough until Sam returned was heart-wrenching. Wonderful last chapter, great end to an amazing stroy. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thanks so much.  I am glad you liked the story and the ending:) Thanks again for you review and your kind words!!

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 6

There was me thinking it was just a hallucination and that polar bear really was sitting on Sammy's chest, I'm pleased Sam's managed to tame it!!  Great timing for the helicopter rescue, but I think Deans' future is going to lie outside the realms of conventional medicine. 

'Sorry, Sam.  I did wait, remember that, remember that I waited.'  Heartbreaking line.  I don't like the sound of that continual note, please update soon and rescue our Dean!!

Great update, there's no let up in the tension or those cliffies!!  Thanks.  Jane



Author's Response: Thanks for your review!! Yes many twists and turns for Sam--help will get to Dean. Poor Dean and Sam.  More soon!!

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 6

Damn! Will be waiting for the next chapter. Good job

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! More soon!!

Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 4

I love when Sam gets all cold like that when someone hurts Dean! Charlie deserves the worst, I hate him!! Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! Sam is a time bomb about to go off maybe?  More soon!!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 6

Grrr...so when did you say you're updating this one again?

So pleased that the boys our out, even though Dean's not out of the woods yet and I'd hate to be the person responsible for all this once Sam gets on the war path...Looking out for next update...great chapter...



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!  Update soon-promise!!

Reviewer: tvbatina (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 6

Just caught up on this story. So good. So intense. So sad. Poor Dean. Love Sam's anger over what Charlie did to his brother.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!! So many things for Sam to deal with--Charlie especially.  More soon!!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 6

what a great chapter,heartbreaking.please dont let dean die.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!!  Where would we be if Dean dies:)  More soon!!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 6

What an emotional chapter! The end has almost teared me up. You write these hurt/angst/emotion/heartwrenching chapters so well. Dean will be ok.... will he???? Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you for you kind words and more is coming soon!!

Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 6

AHHHHHHHHHHHH
HHHHHHHHHHHHH
HHHHHH!

please tell me he's not dead!?!?! good chapter! hurry keep writin! :)



Author's Response: Thanks--you will find out soon--but I do not write deathfic if that helps:)  More soon!!

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 20/01/08 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 5

You do poor, hurt, confused and suffering Dean so incredibly well.  The underlying tension in the cabin is mounting as the situation gets more and more dire.  Dean's hallucinations are getting worse and you can feel his terror growing whenever Sam leaves his side.  Poor Sam is torn between trying to hold things together whilst finding a solution, and staying as close to Dean as possible.  Watching Dean suffer and being unable to stop it will be building up some serious rage against Charlie.  I hope there's a suitably unpleasant end in store for him!!

I am loving every minute of this story - despite the nerve-wracking cliffies.....lol.  Please update soon.  Jane



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and kind words.  More is coming!!

Reviewer: IrishTwilight (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 5

omg . . . i'm actually teary-eyed here!  wow.  the way you describe Dean's blindness, his always calling out for Sammy . . . and then the little jokes and childhood memories . . . just wow!  awesome job!  i can't wait for the next part!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! Glad you are moved by the boys!!  More soon!!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 5

Damn, this cliffy had better be  dream or something equally 'red herringy' because I was really enjoying this chapter up till then..now I'm all in a panic...

...don't take too long to update - please...



Author's Response: Thank you so much!! More soon-promise!!

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