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Reviewer: SuperNaturalObsessed (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 9

HAHA. i knew they'd be back. NICe

 `hugs Dean and shields from Adam and Lori Ann.'

Reviewer: SuperNaturalObsessed (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 6

OH YOU ARE EVIL. VERY NICE.

Reviewer: SuperNaturalObsessed (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 3

This is sick and thats what i love about it. Okay that sounded wrong. I love the irony, although it kinda makes you wonder, if there are people who really do this kinda stuff, then you'd really have to think twice about what you do incase you screw someone over and they want payback. HAHAHA looks cautiously`i'm scared. lol

 

Kudos for an intoxicating story

Reviewer: SuperNaturalObsessed (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 2

I haven't seen Saw 1 2 or 3 in a while, which one is this from? i remember something like this from se&en



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reading!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much.  This didn't come directly from Saw per se - just the idea of it, the concept of making someone decide on their own life versus someone else's.  If you haven't made it that far yet, you'll see in later chapters just where the final decision comes into play. 

 I've teamed up with another author who sweet-talked me into doing an alternate ending second story.  We're in the writing stages now and should hopefully be able to post in a few months  The story will be called 'Redemption' and will be posted both here and on ff.net.  Keep your eyes peeled! 

 Thanks again for reading!  ~nc

Reviewer: SuperNaturalObsessed (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG I LOVE YOU.

This is my idea of brilliant. i absolutely love Saw and everything it represents and combining that with my 2 favourite guys in the world to torture AND crashing the Impala (i have nothing against the metallica, i just love destructive stories) is sheer brilliance. My favourite scenes were always the ones where sam and dean get hurt and also the emo ones. I am SO  glad i found this story. TY

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 11

Great story. Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 11

What an amazing story. I really liked the end and Sam realizing that he had to give Dean space and time. This story was very hard to read at times, the first couple of chapters packed with emotions. But you wrote these chpaters so well, making the horror Dean was experiencing so real and you gave a believable explanation why this was happening to him. When it came to the decision he had to make it was clear there would only be one way for him to choose - even if that meant giving up his life. This passage was some really great writing. I am looking forward to reading more of your stories. By the way, I would love to see a sequel to "Hanging on by a thread" as this story had a deep personal meaning for me and I always wondered how Dean would cope with what happened to him. Thanks and take care.

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 11

I like the ending just the way it is. Sam accepting Dean being himself instead of some version of Sam was just what they needed to get back to normal. Glad to see them in the clear of a horrible experience - thanks for the read - Angela

Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 11

Wow!

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 09/02/08 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 11

LOL...well, i like the ending very much...it's a different direction than what a lot of the writers would take...thanks for sharing this story with us!!!

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 09/02/08 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 11

good job

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 09/02/08 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great finish to a thrillride of a story neo, Enjoyed all of this although at times it was very hard to read, but that's a tribute to the visual quality of your writing...you made it all very real. Great work, I'm very impressed.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 10

WoW, Poor Dean, he never gets a break does he..lol but that's just why we all love him...hehe

Great update and thrillingly written, looking forward to the next chap and the fact that Dean's gonna be getting some well earned TLC...

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 10

OMG, you had me on the edge of my seat here! So Adam and Lori Ann are finally taken care of. But it will be a long way back for Dean, escpecially emotionally. Looking forward to how you will deal with his healing progress. Great work!

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 10

Finally.......they'll be on their way to recovery!!!!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 9

OMG, just when I thought things were about to get better you left us with another cliffhanger and danger is just around the corner.... again. A gripping chpater! You write these so well. Looking forward to the next update and hope that Sam and Dean will dodge the bullet.

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 9

OMG.. these monsters are back after the boys.

This is OUTSTANDING work-drama, action-anguish-horrible human beings-AWESOMR!!!!

You have really written a gripping story!!!!!!!

More please.

BRAVO!!!!!

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/08 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 9

So Dean to keep the watch even whenhe can't defend either of them - and now that's about to hit the fan.....  Great chapter.  Angela

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 02/02/08 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 9

Now that's what you call a cliffy...what a place to end this great chapter...need more as soon as it's written please...lol, and thanks for the read!

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 02/02/08 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 9

OMG.....they are back!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 02/02/08 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 9

OMG NO SAM WAKE UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHH I HATE FREAKIN LORI ANN AND ADAM:@:@:@

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 31/01/08 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 8

Argh...you're not gonna let them get to the boys in the safety of the hospital are you? That would be just tooo cruel...and glad there's a little bit of comfort being had even though I have the feeling it's probably fleeting...

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 31/01/08 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 7

The cavalry!!Yeah go medics!!!! And those zombons turned out to be lovely sugary treats after all...I'm happy about that...hehe

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 31/01/08 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 6

I am NEVER watching those Saw movies as long as I live...lol But can't not keep reading this - just WAY too compulsive...moving on...

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 31/01/08 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 5

Think you've hit the nail on the head there..nothing worse than the absence of everything especially for Dean...moving on

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