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Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 10/01/08 12:19 PM · On: Watchers

This was just the best. !!!!!!!!!!!!
The Watcher - Phil- a disgrace to their calling.
Boy, did he pick the wrong people to play voodoo with.
poor Sammy- he'll always be a target because of what he is and because everyone wants to take Dean down.
OUTSTANDING twist- Sam taking a bigger role in their lives-EXCELLENT!!!!!!!
Your words just carried this story along to a perfect end!!!!!!!
Again, the blending of 2 of the best shows on TV - only a true master writer could accomplish that-
BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. You're right about Phil the Watcher, but like Duncan said, he only violated th code in spirit, not in a letter-of-the-law way. (Good thing Joe got him committed, huh?)
Sam as a Watcher should be fun to write, but I think it might lead to more tension and angst between the brothers...because of how Dean doesn't like answering to anybody else.
Very perceptive review, thanks again.

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 04:38 PM · On: Watchers

was not sure i would like it but i did good job!

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review; glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 04:38 PM · On: Watchers

was not sure i would like it but i did good job!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 08:55 PM · On: Washington

You have put two of my favorite shows together, Highlander and Supernatural. You blended the characters from both shows seamlessly. I cannot wait until the next chapter to see where this story goes.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I was pleasantly surprised by how similar Dean and Methos can be. I explored those shared traits in the next chapter. Thanks again, and I hope you keep reading!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 03:32 PM · On: Washington

this was really good. It is amazing how easily the Winchesters can fit into another 'strange" society.
Your words painted a vivid picture of Joe's Bar. Having been a dedicated watcher of The Highlander, it was all too easy to "see" the boys there.
Sam's feelings/ instincts I believe are going to be vital to Dean's survival in this world of immortals.
EXCELLENT job.... more please!!!!!!
BRAVO!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement. By the way, you are right about Sam's feelings/instincts, but I will not be exploring that angle until the next installment of this series. Thanks again, and I just posted the last chapter.

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