Reviewer: IrishTwilight (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

i think i like where you're going with this.  i'll definitely be reading more.

and, since you asked . . . it's 'cross' not 'crucifix' a crucifix is a representation of the cross with Jesus on it.  you have to say 'cross' because it's empty.

what's your first language? (if you don't mind me asking)

Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know and for the review ^^!  Actually, my first language is french, so that's why there are going to be a few mistakes... anyway, glad you like it :D