Reviewer: darkangel (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 6
Samny is the devil wooww wasn't expecting that looking forward to see what happends next
Author's Response: Ya, he's the devil lol ^^. The devil who seek redemption. I'll update as soon as I can (Hopefully tomorrow) and I'll try to make next chapter longer then this one.
Reviewer: darkangel (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 5
Is Dean a Angel or the devil himself hopefully we will find out soon and a nice twist with the amulet . Update soon
Author's Response: LOL You'll kow in the next chapter ^^. Thanks a lot for reviewing. Hopefully, I'll update tomorrow, but since it's the weekend, I never know ^^
Thanks a lot for reviewing, I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 5
Man that snow driving is hell! Nicely done, building the tension very well here! Very nice that you included the amulet in this! Can't wait to see what Missouri finds in that mind of his! Good work with Missouri by the way.
Author's Response: I totally agree with you about the snowdriving. We had a few snowstorms this year and I driving in those is a botch that's for sure. Thanks! Actually, you'll know more about why the amulet was protecting him in the next chapter.
Thanks again !
Reviewer: gater91 (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 5
wow! now that's a cliffhanger! please update soon!
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can, don't you worry. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 4
So Dean is either good in the extreem or the personification of all evil. WOW. Great plot, I am enjoying this and very good to see Missouri. I've always loved her and would love to write her one day. And I know I keep saying it but - great work writing in a second language, I'm so impressed by that...
Author's Response: Missouri is a great character. It's a shame that she just played in one episode... anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing (I'm repeating myself too ^^.)
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 3
Small mistakes aside this is still a great read. You have a fantastic imagination and some seriously good twists in this...reading on to next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot ^^. I wanted to write something different about Dean's deal. I'm glad it worked !
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/08 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 4
Well, then very intriguing...so Dean is either the devil or he's an angel...I think maybe he's an angel with horns lol! Nicely written storm, but then again living in Quebec we know about snow storms lol! So they're off to see Missouri...nice to see she will be making an appearance in this story...she's a great character to write! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Lol ! I love the line : "I think maybe he's an angel with horns" LOL!
And yes we do know about snowstorms, especially this year! It's incredible how much snowstorms we had just in the last two months!
That's true concerning Missouri. I would love to see her reappear on the show...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 10/01/08 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 4
thanks for the update! please post more soon :)
Author's Response: Don't worry, I'll try to post lots of chapters before school begins (on the 21rst) Thanks for the comment and for reading. ^^
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 3
WOW! Interesting twist! Dean is the human incarnation of Lucifer...Very very intriguing! Can't wait to see where you go with this! BTW I know where Laval is I grew up in Chomedey, lived there until I was 18.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing ;) It means a lot ^^
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 3
i dont know about grammars and all that since english isn't my first language but what i do know is that this story is gettin' real good :) please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! What's your first language if you don't mind me asking?
Anyway, thanks again for reading and reviewing lol.
Reviewer: gater91 (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 3
Great job! I really wasn't expecting that one!
Author's Response: Lol,^^glad you like it and thanks for reviewing and reading. It means a lot!
Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 3
Didn't Bobby give Sam 2 theories? One that an angel had been brought to hell and sent free and two the Lucifer was on earth. Or did I read that wrong? Anyway, I'm caught up in the story now so please hurry with more.
Author's Response: No you didn't read it wrong ;). Don't worry, I'll update soon and thanks for the review and for reading
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 3
did not see that coming
Author's Response: Well, actually, Sam is jumping too fast on conclusions, , thanks fro reviewing and reading !
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 2
Second chapter is as good as the first...I was worried there for a moment that Dean wouldn't have a body to come back to...Can't wait to see where you're going with this.
Author's Response: Lol. Glad you like it and thanks for reviewing and reading.
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 2
Nice update! my second language is french...I livein Montreal... Good job on this chapter I was really worried Sam was gonna start salt n' burning Dean before he had a chance to get back to his body... Interesting that he doesn't remember anything...look forward to see what comes next.
Author's Response: You live in Montreal? I'm living in Laval ^^(I hope you know where it is lol) Anyway, thanks for the review and for reading.
Reviewer: Armaita (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 2
"How do you expect me to get laid after that?" Great line, pure Dean-ism. Like it so far, but I'm wondering what the angel meant by 'our people's call'. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing this!
Author's Response: Lol, for the line that you wonder about, let's just say it's a clue about what's gonna happen later ^^
Reviewer: Armaita (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is great! Dean may not be the college boy of the family, but he definitely knows how to tell when a demon is lying to him. (Basically, whenever the lips are moving.) Loved the line about the savior not cursinge because, yeah, Dean is one of the good guys, but that doesn't mean he will give up his colorful vocabulary, or tendencies toward lust or gluttony. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Lol. I wasn't too sure about that last line. I kind of wanted to put something funny, but I didn't wanted to be it centered around humor when it's more angst then that. Glad it worked ^^. Thanks a lot for reviewing. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 2
keep the updates coming and i'll read 'em!
Author's Response: Lol, I'll keep the updates coming, don't you worry. Thanks for reviewing ^^
Reviewer: gater91 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 2
dude! your story is awesome! i only saw a few mistakes. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks ^^
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 2
Ok.... this was good. I really hated "seeing" Dean suffering in hell. You really got me with the YED being the one to hurt Dean yet again. OUTSTANDING writing!!!!!!! What's not to love about this chapter - it puts Dean back with Sam , where he belongs. I'm very interested to see where you go with this. BRAVO!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot :D I wasn't sure about the YED being send to hell instead of being killed, since the show madeit different from what i wanted for the story. I'll update as soon as I can. (I'll just try finishing to finish chapter 4 before updating ^^)
Thanks a lot for reviewing and reading
Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 2
Well you've got my attention. This story is different but a good different. I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks I was trying to do something that I never read before... thanks for reading and reviewing ^^
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
I'm always so very impressed with anyone who is able to write, let alone in a different language. You did a beautiful job of describing Dean in his surroundings, and the torture is harrowing. Looking forward to the next one...
Author's Response: | Thanks for the review ^^. I'm gonna post next chapter as soon as I can. I finished writing chapter 3 yesterday and my school doesn't start until the 21th so, I'll *try* to update everyday) | |
Reviewer: Noelani618 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is an interesting idea and I'm curious where you're going to take it. Nice job.
Author's Response: | Thanks a lot for the review ^^ | |
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great job! I only saw a few mistakes! Interesting story too...can't wait to see where you're going with this. If you need any help with your english just let me know...I'm bilingual so I think it'll be easy for me to help! Keep it up you're doing great!
Author's Response: | THanks for the review ^^. Well, if you want to help, I won't refuse it lol! Your bilingual ? What's the second language you can talk? | |
Reviewer: f250 (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
DIFFRENT, BUT VERY ENJOYABLE, KEPP UP THE GOOD WRITEING....
Author's Response: | Thanks ^^ I'm gonna update as soon as I can. | |
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