Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 7
Great update to a great story...loved the flashback to the bruising and the nosebleeds, now those symptoms don't bode well... Roll on with the next update, can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Yep, not good. More coming soon!!
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 7
good job will be waiting for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!! More coming soon!!
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 14/01/08 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 6
dirty water - hmm - cardiomyopathy? CHF? Pericarditis? And I'm supposed to be taking the night off medicine! Nice chapter, I'm enjoying this story
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! Glad you are enjoying it and more is on the way soon!!!
Reviewer: IrishTwilight (Signed) · Date: 14/01/08 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 6
argh, how can you leave me like this?! ;) despite my frustration at the cliffhanger that was another awesome update to a story I am so totally hooked on. keep 'em coming! :)
Author's Response: Thanks. Sorry for leaving you hanging there but more is coming soon!!
Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 14/01/08 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 6
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I'm very sad now! please dont let him die!!! :(
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! Don't be sad--more soon!!!
Reviewer: Evergreen (Signed) · Date: 14/01/08 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 6
Noooo! You can't leave it like that!! Will Dean survive? Is it his heart? Thanks!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! More coming soon!!
Reviewer: Arafel979 (Signed) · Date: 14/01/08 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 6
OMG...DEAN!!!! Lovin' this story and watching for more! Nice work!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!! More soon!!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 14/01/08 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 6
Grrrrr, horrible cliffhanger, but great chapter. The flashback to Sam saving Dean's life was just perfect, and beautifully written as ever. Great work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! More soon!!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 2
"Sammy? You still there? Sam? If this is just anxiety, it’s ok, I would rather have you there to tease me than be alone. This really sucks and frankly little brother I would rather not die alone if that is what’s happening. " That's so frightening and so wonderfully written, Walked this road once with my Dad, takes me right back there Muffy, my heart is breaking all over again. Bev xx
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! It is nice when people can relate to a story personally. More soon!!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
"Dean could read the fear in his brother’s eyes. “Sorry,” he got out. Sam squeezed his hand, “it’s ok, Dean. I’m here.” “Thanks,” he said holding on to his brother’s hand" Muffy, that's so powerful, we know Dean only reaches out when he's plain terrified and you conveyed that so well.You said this was based on a recent event? Wishing you all the best Hun and hoping things are improving. Reading on sweety Bev xx
Author's Response: Thank you very much!! Dean is so fun to write. Thanks for asking--I am doing much better now. More soon!!
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 5
Still loving it. You write that bond between the brothers very well. Poor Dean and Sam - one can feel the desperation there in the room. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks you!! I love the bond between them!! More coming soon!!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 5
Heartbreaking and beautifully written. And 'please don't let this be goodbye.' you had me almost in tears...great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Thanks for the kind words!! More soon!!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 4
He definately needs a little TLC and I do think I'm the gal to give it to him! Think I may have a fight on my hands though...lol So he must be in a bad way if he's accepting going back to the hospital...must move on...
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I am sure you would have to fight many!! More soon!!!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 3
Okay, so you've documented one of my very worst fears...having blood taken...and by someone who's a rookie and looks twelve...Argh - skin crawling right now... Gotta say this chapter was a personal nightmare, but had to read it anyway.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! My personal nightmare relived!! More soon!!
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 5
ugh this is killing me! what the hell is wrong with dean? *hugs sammy* please more updates!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! More soon--promise!!!
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 5
will be waiting for the next update. Good job
Author's Response: Thank you very much--more soon.
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 10/01/08 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 4
Aw, poor Dean. Love how you switch between Dean's and Sam's POV! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'll have more up very soon!
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 4
poor dean! can i nurse him back to health? *grins* hehehe. thank for the update! more soon please?
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'll split the nursing duties, how's that? LOL More very soon, promise!
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 4
WIll be waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'll have more up very soon!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 2
Although this chapter is pretty much the ride to the hospital, you've made such a great and well rounded job of describing it. I love all of Deans internal thoughts and how you've used them to express Dean's fear and confusion at what's happening to him. Great update...
Author's Response: Thank you so much. That feeling of being out of control I thought would really affect Dean. More soon!
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ok... this was great!!!! You just took us right to the deep end of the pool- Dean in pain. Excellent transitions between the spoken and un spoken commentary. Can't wait for the next update!!!! BRAVO!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll be updating very very soon!
Reviewer: Evergreen (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ohh, gave me goosebumps. Please let Dean be okay. I look forward to the next installment!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Dean will be ok, eventually!
Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
Love the start! Love Dean pain! Ready for more! (am i shouting too much?)
Author's Response: Thanks you! We all love a little Dean pain don't we? It's just so lovely!
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
Dean's scared? Definitely not good, not good at all! Great start!
Author's Response: Thank you! Dean scared always reminds meof a line from Buffy, when the scary things are scared you need to be worried. Same goes fro Dean I think!
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
oooohhhh i will deffently be looking for updates on this one.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I will update quickly, I promise!
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