Supernaturalville
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 21/10/08 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 9

I guess i can't hate you for that major imagination of yours you'd scared me for a very long time. It kind of makes me wonder if there is a binding spell like that .  . . . 'cause I don't like be alone in life nor in death. Thank you. I will give you my special RATING:) 400 ++++ this was good in how your words composed this story. Its great. Thanks !!!!! PLEASE DO A SEQUAL AND MY RATINGS:)) WOULD HAVE TO CHANGE. YA SEE. SAY HELLO TO MY HUGE RATING SPREE !!!!!!! If you so don't like it let me know, here is my address:  lamix1mana@yahoo.com Again THANKS



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked this one. Actually there is a binding spell like that, I found it in a collection of shamanistic works, whether it works or not, I don't know. I love your rating system! I will be back with a sequel, the idea of the boys bound together is a fun place to play!

Huge hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 21/10/08 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 8

That is creepy as hell. I don't understand that the reserch he did could be that powerful and why that flick something to bobbys head to go over where the boys are and help out. Its a TRIPPY ASS STORY, but I like it.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! A lot of the research is based on a book from the 1840s. I'm so glad you like this story, it's very close to my heart!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 21/10/08 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 7

Okay, now that a resarch has begun now the only thing need is the reemedy or clean deans blood. It can be done. This is a headace even for me Sam.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Once Sam is on the research, everything gets better! Trust Sam to save his brother!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/10/08 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 6

Not to sound morbid, but at least he is able to by his side. Unlike myself I never had the chance to G*** B**. A word that I'm afraid of that it terrifies me to this day. I awaken with sever shacking, headaces, and cold sweat. I do thank you for this story.

Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! And I'm so sorry *hugs* I'm glad you're sticking with the story though!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/10/08 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 5

What can I say this is a great piece of work. Thank You!!

Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/10/08 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 4

Maybe its what he may have eaten. Maybe not. I love you and your composition of this piece. Thanks!!!!

Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! It's not what he's eaten, it's something much worse!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/10/08 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 3

I'm sorry, but why in the hell has he not called Bobby. Why hasn't Sam kicked the ass of those new bees that don't know how to take blood. There is something definetly wrong with this dr. commitee and hospital if they don't resolve the problem . . . . I as a reader will mentaly beat the hell out of them then fire at them with rock salt and send them to hell. HA,HA,HA ..... I do like this stor, but I don't like it when they keep pllaying pin cushin on Dean. Maybe he was using his top brian instead of bottom!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'll let you in on a little secret--the blood test happened just that way-to me! I thought I would inflict it on Dean to make myself feel better, or at least share the misery!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/10/08 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 2

I can so see my self in his position for it has happened to me. Of course, in a differnt way. I myself would not like to be alone that is my one fear. Don't tell anyone. The way of the imagery in words you've establish makes the reader feel apart of the story. Thanks!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Being a lone is one of my greatest fears as well! And all this happened to me, at least these early chapters! In fact it all started one year ago on the 25th of October!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/10/08 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Okay this is more than terrifying, this can not be happening. I really do like this brotherly story thanks.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Dean is lucky to have Sam, it makes everything easier I think!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 9

Great story..Did you do the sequel to it? Sounds like it would make a great story. Thanks so much for writing..

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I haven't done the sequel yet, but I have an idea forming up! I think it would work awesome. We'll see what happens, though. Thank you again!

Hugs,
Muffy

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 06/07/08 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 5

I'm so glad I know that this isn't a deathfic..or I would be crying by now..

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! No worries about that, I don't write death fic. Promise.

Hugs
Muffy

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 3

Well, no heart attack, has got to be good, more tests - not so good.  Why don't they ever tell you anything in hospitals??  This is so nerve-wracking, poor Dean is absolutely terrified, he doesn't like anything being out of his control, and Sam is hanging on to his outward calm for dear life.  Neither one, is fooling the other. 

The rookie needle wielder brought back a few painful memories.  Dean as an abused pincushion almost driving Sam to murderous hunter was a lovely touch....lol!  Thanks.  Jane

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I hate the fact they never tell you what's going on. I was very frustrated and ready to scream...And never a word from the staff.

The needle guy was based on personal experience and Dennis (the Sam in that case) came very near to knocking the guy out of the room on the second go. Ouch and feet really hurt!

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 2

Wow, the sense of total panic from both the boys is so scary.  You've captured perfectly that overwhelmingly awful, totally out of your control, feeling that comes from a trip in an ambulance with sirens blaring.  Hospitals/doctors freak me out at the best of times but that knowledge that something is going terribly wrong with your body and it being beyond your ability to stop it, is portrayed with terrifying realism here.

As always, the comfort that the boys draw from the others presence, is displayed perfectly by your unspoken conversations.

I'm so pleased that I have found this story again, don't know quite how I lost it first time.  Thanks.  Jane



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I love this story. It has a resonance for me and I plan to return to the setting and the concept of the boys joined together very soon. In fact as I was contemplating a sequel the infectiomn I had (that inspired this) came back and I was back on bed rest, so teach me to think about sequels!

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 9

I would read the sequel if you did one. Good job

Author's Response: Thanks so much--glad you liked it enough to ask for a sequel.  I already have one planned and it is cooking in my head as I write this reply.  Thanks again so much!!!

Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 9

Yeah, great story sad it's finished.  Hope you do a sequel, sounds good to me.

Author's Response: Thanks for you review!!  So glad you enjoyed the story and a sequel is already in the works:)  Thanks again!!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 9

that was a great story,a sequel would be wonderful.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words!! Glad you enjoyed the story and a sequel is already in the works:) Thanks again!!

Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 9

LOL wouldn't it suck for sam if dean hooked up with a girl or two and well you know...  *grins*

Author's Response: Thanks for you review--yes poor Sam--I am sure he would be terrified, disgusted and traumatized probably resulting in therapy:)  Thanks again!!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 9

Now this is finishing a fic in style...and you've almost set yourself up for a series here...hunting with that connection would sure make for a good plot...great work, I've really enjoyed this tale.

Author's Response: Thanks so much and yes a sequel is in the works!!  Thanks for your kind words and glad you enjoyed the story!!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 9

Great finish to this story!  I like the idea of them bound together in such a way.  Laughed when Dean let a tiny portion of his memory of a night with a Heather slip through to Sam.  Too funny!

 



Author's Response: Thank You so much!!  Glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for your kind words:)

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 9

Wonderful chapter! Way to bring this story home. It was a great read all along and I loved every part of it. Thanks for sharing this with us!


Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!  I am glad you liked the story and it brought you enjoyment:)  Thanks again!!

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 8

ooohhhh sure leave it there to drive me nuts. GOod job by the way. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks so much--I thought it a good place to leave it:)  More soon!!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 8

And I was enjoying this chapter so much as well..now that's what you call a cliffhanger...

..great use of ritual and you've got me on the edge of my seat to find out if this works...Gotta say I hope you're planning to update soon...please!



Author's Response: Thank you for the review and your kind words.  More soon!!!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 8

wow this fic just keeps getting better and better,please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!  More is coming soon--promise:)

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 8

What a cliffhanger again! Great story, loved every chapter so far. Can't wait for the next one. Hope the boys are going to be ok!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words!! More coming soon!!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 8

An incredible cliffy here.  Wow.  I really like how you used "Ring Around the Rosy".

Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens!



Author's Response: Thank you so much!!  More coming soon!!

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