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Reviewer: theldybg4u (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 2

love it holly is hilarious love the part with the underwear

Author's Response: I had to write it in there. I couldn't resisit. I thought older sister...underwear...dean with his fetish for hot woman - yeah that works. HWxx

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is pretty good. just a bit hard to read with everything bunched together.

Author's Response: The other chapters should be spaced out more - sorry. HWxx

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 2

OK... got to love Holly.
That was priceless at the bar-she really knew how to set them up.
A true Winchester-OUTSTANDING job.
She seems to blend in well with the boys. '
I like your style-more please.
BRAVO!!!!!
hugs from Sam and Dean...you know I'm all for that.

Author's Response: *send virtual hugs* From both of course! I thought when I see an author promising those I want them so why not send them! Holly is too much like Dean. She's just as cunning and as smart and sassy! Go girl! HWxx

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

OK.............. .intestering beginning.
The thought of a female Winchester-can you imagine the temper.....????? OUTSTANDING beginning.
I also liked how you made time pass, and put Sammy into the mix- excellent job.
I'll be looking bforward to the next chapter.
BRAVO!!!!!!

Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! I try to please all my reviwers and potential reviewers. I tried to make it as real as I could to relate to Sam and Dean having the normal Brotherly interaction we see on the screen and having it just as real in your head. Glad you liked it. HWxx

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