Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
Incredible line---"and hold infinity in the palm of your hand"! It made me shiver. I can understand both brothers hesitaiton with telepathy, considering they like to keep secrets from one another, but in some ways they already have it. Very clever idea to save Dean!
Author's Response: It's by Blake, I'm afraid, no matter how much I'd like to take the credit for it. I'm pretty sure my idea would give them both some trouble for a while, but hey - at least they'd both be alive to get annoyed about it, right? ;)
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
That would be great way to free Dean.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, thanks!
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
Fantastic way out of the deal! Bonding of souls is a really cool idea. It wouldn't make a big difference 'cause they already have it. Our hunters together and safe... and Dean sunbathing ;) This just can't get any better.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm sure it would make a little bit of a difference, especially to Dean, but I think I'll leave the implications of Sam's spell to more talented writers ;)
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
Perfect deal breaker..Thanks for the read - K
Author's Response: I knew there was a reason I took law... thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Seraph (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
Perfect.
S.
Reviewer: Seraph (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
Perfect.
S.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: theldybg4u (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 1
omg i hope you follow up on this this can be a great story i liked it
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, thanks!
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good job
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: wolfsnight (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
That's a really cool idea, though I'm not entirely convinced that Sam and Dean don't already have some type telepathy already! Good job.
Author's Response: All siblings have 'telepathy' to some extent, I think. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: naughtyafro (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, That was really aweinspring especially the last lines .. Great Job!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: seamonkey (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 1
ooohh spooky ..maybe could continue this thread?
Author's Response: Spooky? Not quite what I was going for... Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
It’s a bonding, Sam’s words run through your mind again. Of… well, your soul. To mine. It voids the contract, see? The demon can’t take yours without mine. Which would be reneging on her side of the deal, you know? She agreed to bring me back, not take me to hell for eternity. I have never thought of this!! Hey, that could be the solution!! Semantics, right?? You just gave me some hope for season 3! :)
Author's Response: Exactly! Dean hasn't done anything, it's outside influence (Sam) that's made the fulfillment of the contract an impossibility! *unbearably smug grin* Glad you liked it, thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
short, very short but very good! maybe next time a little bit more background information? any way i liked it, well done!
Author's Response: Background info is exactly what I didn't want to get into... it wasn't meant to be a story, just a possibility. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
Lara, this was wonderful, the "conversation" was perfect. Loved the last part "Anyway, you don’t mind, not really. Not anymore. You just lie there, on the hood of a car parked at the edge of the Grand Canyon, and hold infinity in the palm of your hand." Crystal
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review Crys! Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh Lara, I'd love for that to happen, how clever! I loved this idea;) Though just drabbles its clear ur a mighty talent hun. Love the end part -You just lie there, on the hood of a car parked at the edge of the Grand Canyon, and hold infinity in the palm of your hand. -Great suff! Schelz
Author's Response: Thanks for the reivew, schelz! It's called something like subsequent impossibility of the contract in law... who'd have thought my coursework could inspire a story?
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 1
Outstanding! A great way out of the deal. Not to mention a cementing of what we already know - that the boys souls are bonded, each relying on the other. I need to say, that image of Dean lying on his car? *long sigh* very cute, you've got everyone's attention... This line "...almost drowning out the sheer joy Sam's been radiating ever sonce that demonic skank let you go" is absloutely stunning. I love this image of Sam coz we know that this is exactly how Sam would be. And the skank label, just perfect, we all feel the same! oh, and Grand Canyon? Lovely touch! You sure are the Queen of these well written little drabbles. You're nailing the characters in these original and creative ideas. Very cool.
Author's Response: Oh, they HAVE to go to the Grand Canyon. It's practically a cliché. As for Dean sunbathing... ... ...
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very cool, and a great idea for getting Dean out of his deal!
Author's Response: Thanks very much!
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
I liked that. I would be interested in seeing this played out into a longer story. Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 1
Fantastic as always - and a great way out of the deal. If ever an idea deserved to be explored it's this one! (Is that hint for a sequel too blatant?) And congratulations on your new status...! Thanks for the read.
Author's Response: Not blatant at all... I'm just not sure I'm cut out to write a "season 4" ;) Thanks for the review - and the congratulations!
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