Reviewer: Eternity12 (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 3

haha all authors love reviews. i liked how the person sam thought about to give him strength was dean. it was... touching. jessica  threatening to remove dereks man hood with plyers made me laugh.

can't wait for chapter four! 

Reviewer: Marcy (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 3

Ok, you are a genius.

You caught the very true, the deepest meaning, the nature of the relationship between sam and dean.

I think it also came out in "if life were fair", did you read it?Great story as well.

But for now i just can't wait to read chapter 4...=>

Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

I was just kidding about the blackmail you know. Anyway, this chapter is good and I like how Sam couldn't succeed without Dean with him, in some way at least. The brothers need each other.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 3

I liked how you had Sam picture Dean in his mind to start overcoming his fear of water.  I also liked that you included Jessica in this chapter.  Just watch your spelling.  I can't wait until Chapter 4.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 2

This was another good chapter.  I felt sorry for Sam for being so traumatized that he was so afraid of water and then being teased about it.  Kids can be so brutal.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

The drowning scene was very well written.  I felt like I was drowning reading it.  I can't wait to see what you do for the next chapter.

Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 2

OK here's your review. I love this story as I new I would since I love so many of your stories. Since your asking for reviews I want you to continue soon. This is already turning out to be another great one, and I think this is review #12.

Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 2

I'm not a swimmer although I have made my attempts and the way you describe what is going on in Sam's head during it all....is so accurate.  Can't wait to read more...

Reviewer: MissyLaMotte (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

Good job. I especially liked how you described the wordless dialog between the brothers. 

Reviewer: Eternity12 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

Omg that woman is evil! poor Sam! poor Dean! this story is amazingly written it feels so real, the reactions the thoughts running through their minds! you sucked me in! please update your last chapter!  

(thats a good review tactic, I should try it on my stories!)

Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

ok ok I'll go out on a limb and be the fifth different reviewer.  Great story - hanging out for the next chapter.

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

OK, Hunny,either post that or I'm gonna keep reviewing till we get to 5 'cause I want more!

Liked it very much, scary and lovely interaction between the bros.

Birdx

Reviewer: supernatural16 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

great fic!

looking forward to the update

c x x