:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: WendyLee (Signed) · Date: 13/04/11 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wonderful story, but you should have put a "tissue" alert out there!

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

I remembered how good your first one was, so of course I had to read this too. Jessica's family was nice and believable. This is very well done, that little chick flick was truly touching. "he and his younger brother belonging together like burger and fries" That was sweet and hilarious, really creative, lol. Who's burger and who's fries? :D

Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow...that was powerful. Very touching and incredibly well written. I couldn't stop reading.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well you brought me to tears so if that was the intention then you're doing great...lol. Loved this story and I'm so glad I took Fredo's advice and read it. Well done and thanks for the read - K

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG... this was so powerful..so poignant...so incredibly sad.
AWESOME JOB.!!!!!!!!
Sam's pain is so palpable - your vivid words just ripped apart any composure I had reading this.
Tears in abundance for the all too fragile Sammy. OUTSTANDING work.
Dean's desire to be there for Sam, to give into the chick flick moments- so Dean in his own way-always the protector-EXCELLENT !!!!
You are a great writer-thenks for sharing this wonderful story.
BRAVO!!!!

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was sooo awesome. Would of made a great episode.

Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

Lovely stuff...
Finding the ring, so sweet and heartbreaking, both guys breaking down... so so good

Dix

Author's Response: Ah thanks Di, I always wondered what Sam did with the ring, or whether he even bought it in the first place! Thanks for the review, means a lot!!!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

yup, i really enjoyed, very nice. Have to go take a look at fic number one...

Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

Just loved this story.

Look forward to reading more of your stuff

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

wow....that was...amazing...i don't really know what else to say, i'm kinda speechless

Reviewer: brat713 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

Awesome and wow are the only two words that come to my mind right now. Terrific story! So sad and heart wrenching. Poor Sammy. You nailed the boys perfectly. The story sucked me in. Like I was there dealing with everything right along with the Moore's and Sam. I'm glad I took the time to read this story. Great job. I can't wait to read more from you in the future :)

Reviewer: PoseidonsChickadee (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

*dabs eyes and blows nose loudly* That was soooooo OH! I can't describe how painful this was. It was so poignant. I have yet to read a Moore family fic. To read Sam dealing with the pain. It was fantastic in how deep and developed it was. The Moores were like every other family who lost their child, and sometimes being like everyother etc etc makes a story bland but it made this SOOOO real. Not to mention how in characters the brothers were. I can see Angela's soft eyes. And Tom's fatherly questions. Carrie's understanding. The hurt of them all. All of that with the brothers perfect characterization made it so life like. Like I was watching. It was truly, truly a lovely piece of work and I am VERY, very glad that I took the time to read this :-)

Author's Response: Ah, you guys!!! Glad you liked my own characters, was a bit unsure of them myself....

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