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Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 5

yeah, Dean wants to know, and me too! Great update Maggie. Nice moment when Sam arrived in Kerri's bedroom, and always nice to see Ash, even on the other end of the phone. Well, huh... more, please?..

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

What Kerri is hidding from Dean and Sam, is it why the thing is after her, so intriguing, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 5

I've been waiting eagerly for this update and I was so happy to see it here this morning...and it was well worth the wait.

Loved that image of Dean and Kerri lying next to each other that you brought through from the last chapter...it's such a beautiful idea and it's gotta be one of my all time favourite scenes...and the plot is thickening nicelly...!

...you've got me at the edge of my seat waiting for the next one so please don't take too long...!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 16/01/08 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 4

Maggie, oh, my god, that moment on the bed when Dean takes Kerri into his arms was wonderful.  though I have no interest in the two of them together romantically, the idea of them drawing comfort from each other was perfect.  Great update and I look forward to more - Kel

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 4

What a poignant chapter. One of my favorite moment is Dean in bed with Kerri, Dean is so tender with her.I'm so glad that she opened up to Dean and told him what happened that day. Who's that Steven guy, so intriguing, can't wait to know more about him. Awesome work with this chapter Maggie. I'm lookling forward for more.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 4

awesome chapter Maggie! Loved that Dean makes evrything possible for Kerri to feel safe again, glad she finally talked to him, and curious about that Steven guy. What the hell is happening??..

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 4

Wonderful update Maggie, well worth the wait! The description of the "bad guy" was awesome and so detailed. You made one feel Kerri's fear - it was so real. I loved protective Dean, but Kerris is right:“You’re not always gonna be here, Dean.” Dean couldn’t answer, hell, at that moment he couldn’t even breath. She was right,.....

Loved every line of it and I am looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks :)

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 4

What an update...not only have you thought up and developed one of the most original and terrifying bad guy I've read in a long time but that whole scene with Dean and Kerri on the bed talking took my breath away.

I love the way you've developed this relationship from day one, transceding sex or physical attraction (quite something for Dean) and focusing instead on the deeper love that Dean is so capable of...and that he displays all the time with family.

Great update - worth the wait!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/01/08 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great chapter!  You had me worried about Kerri.  At least we know she's going to be okay.  And looks like she'll have Sam and Dean to nurse her back to health.  Lucky girl!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/01/08 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 2

I think I held my breath when Dean went into the old room.  I get so absorbed with your stories that I feel like I'm there.

So funny that Tim Collins is the sherriff!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 10/01/08 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 3

OK, I am seriously behind with my reviews. Reading fast here to catch up on another one of your fantastic stories :) So glad we are getting to read a new Kerri story here. I really like it so far, can't wait where you will take us from here. Thanks Maggie!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 3

Argh, Maggie, you're killing me..lol.  I'm late for church cause I couldn't read just one chapter..How awful that Kerri had no one to take care of her, I can only imaging what that image will do to Dean and Sam.. Loving this story, update in a hurry please :)

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 2

Awsome update and makes me look forward to summer rain, to see when Dean kicked the sherrifs ass...lol. 

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 3

yup, bad on too many levels. But they're here now, right, they'll help, take care, find what did this, and kick the sheriff's ass. Please?

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great work! Poor Kerri! I can't believe they thought that they thought Sam and Dean did this!

~Kayla

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 3

Poor Kerri - and poor Dean for feeling so guilty.  Enjoying the tale, eager for more

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 3

I know I keep saying it but I just love the relationship you've developed between Kerri and the boys, and how lucky that they are there now to be able to look after her.

And if anyone deserves a bit of looking after it's her...you've kind of put her through it a bit in previous stories...lol

Great update, quality writing as always.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 3

Wow - great chap - and more new characters! I love the way you are fleshing out the Kerriverse. I'm hoping that Dean will stop feeling guilty about the painting now (haha - fat chance). Dean is seriously in angst mode and looks to be heading for a crash.... Can't wait to see Dean in serious mother hen mode....assuming he hasn't made himself sick by then....

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 2

Poor Kerri, no break for her. I hope that with the help of Dean, she'll open up, get better. Intriguing story Maggie, can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 2

awsome!!  love it! like always!!!! keep updating!!! is great!

good job!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 2

yes, limb from limb, go Dean. Thanks Mag to be back here, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 2

Just tell me this isn't going to be the last Kerri story cos I'm getting quite a bad feeling about this...

..and keep the updates coming, this is addictive stuff as always...

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 2

Oh man!!! Serious Dean angst a comin'!!! He is totally gonna beat himself up over this.... Love the addition of Tim to the Kerriverse. So glad that Dean was able to squash those nasty rumours about John - lol.... I was sooo happy to see another chappie of this up - I've been longing for a good read all day - and here you are!!! Thanks Maggie - lovin this story!!!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great, the follow-up of Not All It seems. OMG!What a start, Kerri is in big trouble. How "Steven" can act like a vampire, spirit or demon and to be an human, very captivating. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

Way to mess with our heads!  I'm like Kerri and can't figure out what the hell is happening.  Excellent beginning!

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