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Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 29/03/08 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 9

HOLY SH.......MOLY!!!!!!!!!

You can NOT leave it there!!!! No no no no!!!! Come back & add more!! Aaahhhh!!!

Pretty please?? With a Winchester on top?? LMAO

Author's Response: with a winchester on top. hhhhhmmmmmmmm..... that is incentive. :) i'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 29/03/08 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 9

okay, i thought, saturday eve, good time to catch up with Mag's great story, and then quietly going to bed... Sounded nice right, but now? damn i could scream like Kerri, but instead of screaming Sam's name, it would be yours! Crap, i'm not good at waiting... But i'll have to, right... Oh and loved this line, "she’d been on the receiving end of Dean’s glare once or twice, and it was not a good place to be. She always figured that it was probably what ants felt like when you shined magnifying glasses at them."

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 29/03/08 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 8

ah... Dean and food! Ellen's thoughts were very interesting, comparing Sam to John, and admiting than Dean is and would ever be an enigma. Straight to next chapter now!

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 29/03/08 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 9

Dammit, dammit dammit! I kept putting off reading this story, waiting 'til it was finished 'cause your writing is so freakishly addictive, now I've given in, and it ends (so far) on a truly evil cliffie!
Some days, ya just can't win...
Great job!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 8

Awesome update Maggie. Love the interaction between the brothers and the brothers and Kerri. I enjoyed to read Ellen's thoughts about Dean and Sam. Great story so far, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 8

Best description of Ellens character I've ever read. I always liked her and thought it was such a shame she was barely used in the series.
And if the story is gonna pick up steam in the next chapter, here's hoping Dean manages to get some food down Kerri's throat, she's gonna need to carb up! lol
Great work Maggie

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 8

Fantastic chapter!! Love how you have all the character written, they are just like on the show. Looking forward to LOTS more.

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 15/03/08 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

What is Kerri hiding?? Surely she must know she can trust Dean & Sam & that it would be better to come clean so they can figure this out & help her? More ASAP please!!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 29/02/08 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 7

Great update Maggie! Loved Sam's POV. There are so many wonderful lines in this one, a really well written chapter. So looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 7

Loved to read Sam's thoughts about Evelyn, Kerri, Valley he thought was home, a safe place but not anymore. There're a little tension between the three of them. That was an awesome chapter Maggie, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 7

great update Maggie! nice idea to write it from Sam's pov. His thoughts about Dean and Kerri's relationship, on the people he lost... Lots of terrific lines, my favorite probably being, "It was like a memory being physically destroyed. In Sam’s mind, Kerri’s house was sacred, a place time and terror wasn’t supposed to touch. But the world around him didn’t seem to care what he believed, what he loved-- it just took and took, and Sam was sure that, one day, everything would be gone. He was only so strong, only so resilient. Sam didn’t know how much longer he could fight, didn’t know how much more he could take."

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 7

But the world around him didn’t seem to care what he believed, what he loved-- it just took and took, and Sam was sure that, one day, everything would be gone. - Loved that line, loved this update. Very well done chapter. Loved that it was from Sam's point of view. - Kel

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 7

Pure quality!
The voices are so spot on it's just a delight to read, and the banter in this chapter is just second to none.
I must go back and refresh my memory about the whole bracelet thing, although the way you're writing, it is still easy to follow.
Great work, can only give ten out of ten but deserves a whole lot more!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 7

Love the banter between Sam and Dean, especially once Dean realizes Sam isn't doing what he wants him to do.
As always, your expression of thoughts and feelings is amazing! I feel like I'm inside Sam's head. His feelings become my feelings.

Reviewer: EmSyd (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 6

Awesome.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 6

Dean felt a strange comfort in the rooms that dotted the sides of the highway - I absolutely ador that line. Great update Maggie, not sure how I missed it but now I'm really going to need that PAWNS update ;)
Oh, and a little summer rain would fill out my day as well...lol. Just the hints in Pawns has me wanting to return to the land of the Weechesters. Thanks for the great read,

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 6

oh Maggie, great great update. I love these two together. You write them perfectly. Favorite lines, "They weren’t children anymore, hell they were both nearing thirty, and it was something Dean just couldn’t wrap his mind around. He wanted to know everything that had happened to her while he was gone, wanted to heal every wound, comfort every heartache, chase away every shadow. But the more time passed, the further Kerri seemed to slip away."

Author's Response: thank you fredo :) i do love having the two of them together. i like doing private time between both sam and kerri and dean and kerri, they all react differentently depending. :) it's always a little sad to think of what was lost in their past, i'm glad it's coming through in the stories.

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 6

Hey Maggie, I hope you feel better :) Don't worry, this update was definately worth the wait - as always. Love the way you let Dean and Kerri interact. So glad she was able to open up somehow and tell him about the bracelet. But Dean sure is offened by her holding back the location of it. I am looking forward to how this story will unfold! Great work :)

Author's Response: :) thank you so much, dagmar. i'm still sick, but functioning now, lol. yeah, i love that dean gets offended when kerri pulls the need to know, crap. a lot of what she knows does need to remain secret, but she also kind of does it to bother him. haha. i'll try and get the next chapter out a bit quicker.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 6

I do love it when those two get together, the way they bounce off each other, she's almost the female equivilent of both Sam and Dean mixed together. Would have loved to see a whole series of Kerri riding shotgun for the boys.
Great chapter and you've inspired me with talk of the bracelet, I need to backtrack and re-read the earlier stories. Read them before I was a member so - ages ago...
Great to see this chapter posted and I'm glad you're feeling better...

Author's Response: :D thank you, louy. when i first started mapping out the character and series, that's the way i described kerri to myself. i'm really glad you like her. the stories from the beginning of the series are going to start coming into play for all the later stories now :) i need to add in some recaps. lol. thank you so much for the review :)

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 6

I'm glad that Kerri told Dean about the bracelet. The bracelet is very powerful, no wonder that hunters and supernatural things want it so badly. Terrific chapter Maggie, can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Author's Response: thank you so much for the reviews :) a lot more secrets are going to start unfolding as the series goes.. cause, you know, secrets are never good for winchesters. lol

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 6

Funny that Dean is so frustrated because Kerri isn't sharing her feelings. Hello kettle, you're black!
So that's how Sam was freed from the ground. I've wondered all this time, even thought I'd missed the answer somewhere.

Author's Response: nope didnt miss it. yeah, dean and kerri are more alike than either things. lol. thank you for the reviews :D

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great update Maggie, thanks! I loved that you had Ash in there - he is such an amazing character! Also very touching moment when Sam entered Kerri's bedroom, cleary feeling Dean's and Kerri's need to be close as friends. The tension is building and I am looking forward to the next chpater :)

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 5

Yay! Ash is still alive! I loved that character. It was so sad when they killed him off.
I'm so curious about this deep dark that Kerri's hiding! Can't wait to find out!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 4

Hmm...Kerri putting up walls to cope with a problem. Who does that sound like?
The prospect of some unique shape-changing entity is exciting!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 5

I loved your description of Dean asleep next Kerri, his hand resting on the knife was a great touch. Can't wait to find out what the hell Steve is. Great update Maggie - K

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