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Reviewer: WICKY987 (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 12

love it cant wait for next chap thanks

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 30/04/08 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 12

terrfic chapter Maggie, loved the whole beginning with Evelyn's return and Sam's reaction.  Now I can't wait to see what Kerri knows and how they're gonna protect the information. 

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 12

Terrific chapter Maggie. They're dealing with a trickster, how they can win against a powerful, immortal god. Suspenseful, can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 12

damn Mag, wow. So trickster okay, war okay, but Kerri... More!

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 12

A TRICKSTER!!!!! OMGosh!! Didn't see that coming. WOW. Awesome & scary & oh crap.

More ASAP please.  

Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 12

ooooh....good cliff hanger!  can't wait for more!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 19/04/08 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 11

Excellent chapter Maggie.  I enjoyed hearing Kerri's take on the hunting world.  I'm looking foward to more.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 17/04/08 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great chapter Maggie. Thanks goodness that Dean wasn't there when Kerri talked to Jo, that would've broken his heart. Poor Kerri, she seems tired about all this, doesn't feel to fight anymore. Can't wait to know what's next.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 11

I'm so glad Jo and Kerri had this talk.  It was so honest and not the least bit of jealousy or possession came through.  Kerri may have gotten through to Jo where no one else can (not that I think she'll listen).

Kerri's words explain so much about the depth of her love for the Winchesters and how she sees her role in their lives.  It's both beautiful and sad.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 11

The evil of the world was fighting for dominance, but Sam, he was fighting for family, and by god, he was gonna win.

yay Sam! Great chapter, Kerri's words were so haertbreaking, like Sam i'm happy Dean didn't hear them...

Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 11

"Everything she said was true, and that was somehow more devastating than any lie she could have told." 

beautifully written chapter, and heart-wrenching.  but i guess the truth always is.  can't wait for the next. 

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 15/04/08 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 11

So sad, but so true. *sobs* Another awesome chapter, what IS this thing that is after them??

Am looking forward to more soon.

*gets comfy in the corner to wait*

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 10

Ah, Damn, very very cool, Maggie.. Can't wait to find out more about what Kerri's dad did.  Cool chappy.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 9

HA, terrific Maggie.  Loved this and can't wait to see if it's actually Dean's body or just his image, moving on...

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 10

Wow!!  You blew all my guesses right out of the water!  never in a million years would I have guessed Kerri's secret.  You little devil!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 9

OMG!

The ant in the magnifying glass is an excellent comparison to Dean's anger!

 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 8

I can't believe you've posted three chapters that I haven't seen!  Where have I been?

Ellen's thoughts about the boys are so good!  I especially liked her observation of Sam resembling his father in more than looks as well as the comparison between Sam and other world-weary hunters.  It gives such a good sense of the toll their lifestyle exacts.

I am soooo interested in seeing how Jo reacts to Kerri (and Dean with Kerri)!

Luuuv that last bit with the breakfast being passed back and forth!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 10

huh... interesting... I'm glad Dean never let go with Kerri, cause after that Christo... But he's here, he'll stay, and with Sam and Ash's help, they're gonna save the day, right? Right!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 10

What that thing who can take the form of people and vanished in thin air. I'm glad that Kerri tell Dean her secret, it was too heavy to bear on her shoulders alone. So captivating Maggie, I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 10

well.  Captivating.  I came to the story late but read all 10 chapters in one sitting because I simply couldn't stop.  I really love the character Kerri and the relationships she has with the boys. i can't wait for more.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 10

Ouch...she Christo'ed him, that must have hurt...and isn't that just typical of just about every man on the planet to want to 'fix' things, nice bit of observation on your part...and I think this bad guy rivals 'Shadow Stalker' for ingenuity...

Another great chapter, keep it coming please!!!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 9

So there is only one good thing about having missed your last update and that is that I get to move straight on to the naxt chapter right away...not sure I would have survived long with a cliffy like that anyway...

Great work Maggie!

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 10

Holy.........!!!!! WOW!!!! Poor Kerrie, but AWESOME chapter!!! More ASAP please.

Reviewer: AimesLuvsThe Metallicar (Signed) · Date: 03/04/08 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 9

OMFG!!!
ive been reading this series over the last couple of days, and seriously...woah!
i actually screamed out when i realised i had come to the end of what youve written lmfao. sad i no...
HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE!
so mean...
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!
i dont think i can wait any longer! lmfao

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 9

What a cliffhanger!!! Maggie don't leave us like this too long, update soon.

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