Reviewer: cheri (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hey I really like this but I'm a very impatient girl so----more please!!!!
Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 3
Good descriptions that paint a clear picture. Still not decided on the OC – Jury's still out. Good story so far.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 4
Another great chapter to this story and I can't believe I missed it when you posted... I love the way you've documented Sam's total anguish at being separated from his brother. Loved this line... 'He could feel his heart pounding. His protective big brother always responded to his call...Unless something was wrong, something keeping him away. ' And you have cranked up the tension tenfold...and now the disembodied voice tormenting Sam...Roll on next update...
Author's Response: It's always a pleasure to read a review from you:) Thanks for giving kind and encouraging words! I'm very happy you think the little Sammy section worked out, cause for some reason I think he's a lot harder to write than Dean... I have a hard time knowing what's going on in that head of his;) Hope you wont have to wait too long for the next chapter and that it wont disappoint. ~Anita~ PS: thanks for the five beautiful stars!!
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter from the beginning to the end! Don't we just love to see them worry about each other? Dean hearing his dad's voice commanding him in the distress was clever. I liked this update a lot! Though that 'final warning' sounded menacing...
Author's Response: Aw, Sanna, you really think that? Thanks, it means a lot. Oh, and glad daddy's voice worked out for you:p ~Anita~
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 4
poor Dean, I really thought Julia was going to leave him for a minute. injury check next? Thats always a good part:)
Author's Response: You got the shining?!?! Really? Care to share? That is one awesome username:) Sorry, I scared you with Julia's almost leaving, LOL. Injury check next... well - we'll see... hope you wont get disappointed;) Thanks for you reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 3
Very exciting! That girl seems quite interesting. One of my fav parts in this chapter was the attack. I hope the boys will be okay... I also like very much those 'thoughts' you wrote. For example Dean's last thought made me shake my head and smirk at the same time. Keep up the good work, sister ;)
Author's Response: Well well what can I say, that's just the way Dean is... :) Glad you liked it, and enjoyed the attack scene. Thanks for the vocal clap on the shoulder, sis. ~Anita~
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 3
Great update Anita, this is turning into a tremendous tale, and I love the description of the fight with the shadow demons, that was fantastic. And still so many questions raised about who this girl is and what does she know... Looking forward to the next update...
Author's Response: Ahh, another review from you, dear bulletbabe. You're so great. Thanks for your kind words. You think the shadow demons fight was good? Hurray, *I have a big smile on my face now* Thanks again, Louy. And thanks for the stars:) ~Anita~
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 2
I like this a lot...and I'm intrigued. Again I think you hit the nail on the head with the dialogue, very nice and it's the hardest bit to make believable. And I like Julia, she's a very believable character and you've left me wanting to know what's going on with her dream...and Sam's vision... I'd get writing if I were you...we're going to want an update soon!!lol
Author's Response: Thanks again dear bulletbabe! A new review makes me feel like a little girl on Christmas Eve. I'm glad you liked Julia. It's a bit scary bringing in new characters, so thanks for your kind words, it means a lot. Funny thing about the dialogue part is that, though it's hard, in English I find it harder to write the none-dialogue parts (probably because of my lack of vocabulary). completely opposite of how it is in my own language. Watch out for that third chapter, I'll have it up soon. Thanks again!! Anita :) :)
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nice set-up Anita, i feel pulled along with this story...and you've chosen a very good time to set it. There was such a lot going on just after the events of BUABS and the show didn't really resolve a lot of the incidents that happened in that episode. Great work with the dialogue, it's so hard to be true to the boy's voices but you managed it really well, I'm moving on to next chapter right now!
Author's Response: Ah, thank you bulletbabe (sorry, just have to use your penname, cause I really love it:). It means a lot to receive a review from someone as talented as you. And that you found the dialogue believable makes me really happy! I agree with you about that episode, I so wanted to know more.... see how they handled things. But that's the good thing about fanfic, we get to write and read about all the things the show doesn't provide us. Again thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 2
I liked this chapter. I look forward to Chapter 3.
Author's Response: So you read the second chapter too. That makes me a happy not-so-very-little girl:) Thank you for your review:) Anita
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 1
This sounds like a good start to an interesting story. I just have one suggestion you may want to have someone proofread your work. I look forward to reading chapter2.
Author's Response: Thank you Marlana, had a little sneak peek on your bio, to get your name, not that I don't like your penname:) Glad you like it and finds it interesting. And about getting it proofread, yeah I'm know it's got some bad spelling and gramar here and there, and I acctually found myself a beta over at ff.net, so from chapter five (maybe before that...) and out, it's hopefully will get better. If she hasn't given up on me, that is, after not hearing from me for months... Thanks again for reviewing:)
Author's Response: Haha, talk about bad gramar. I reread my respons to you and found alot of errors in those few words, just overlook that;)
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 2
Dean has a really really bad feeling... It makes me worried. I'm liking this story so far! This's very interesting, I look forward to your update. Your English is good! I'm little curious... Do you have any problems with writing in English at all?
Author's Response: Hehe, yeah, if even Dean's got a bad feeling, things might get bad:) And thank you for thinking my english is good, it's far from perfect (and there was someone on ff.net eho said she could be my beta, but that was six months ago, and she has probably given up on since she haven't got anything from so far, not good). I don't think writing in english is easy, but I have read alot of books in english during my education, guess it helps a little. Am I rambling now? Think I am, so I'm gonna stop. But agains thanks, Sanna, always a pleasure to hear from you:)
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 2
Dun Dun Dun....lol nice chapter. plot thickens! :0) ~Kayla
Author's Response: Hi Kayla. Like to end with dun dun duns :p Thank you for your reading and reviewing, hope you're gonna like the rest of the story to, if I ever gonna get it up and posted:) Anita
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
good job
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, bookworm (like your username, by the way:). Thank you for taking time to give a review!
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
Okay. So I'm gonna read the next chap as soon as it's appeared in there. Can't wait! ;)
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh God, Anita this's an awesome start!! This chap is very good, so intense and emotional. The brothers are true to characters. And a cliffie at the end! I'm gonna read the next chap right now --->
Author's Response: Oh, thank you Sanna. So glad you liked and enjoyed it. I had fun writing it:) And I loved to hear that you think Deanie and Sammy boy are true to characters. Thank you for your support. Anita;)
Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
great story so far!nothing like sammy in pain to get Dean to agree to the hunt...can't wait for the next chapt:D and i think u'll do fine for the chapters ur stuck on:) just stick to your methods...because chapter 1's awesome and just make the story flow with chapter one the rest of the way and u'll do fine:D...if ur really really stuck just jot down all the way this story can turn out...and trust me one of your ideas will just jump out at u and u'll know that that's the direction you wanna take ur story...i hope that helps keep up the good work:)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement. And of course I'm glad you like chapter 1. Nothing is more motivating than knowing that ppl read and like your work. Again thank you. And I just posted chapter 2:) Take a peek.
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
Uh oh! Fighting again? Oh those two brothers....lol Nice work! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Can't let the guys get away without a little sibling bantering:) Glad you liked it, Kayla. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ow bloomin heck sweetums you can't go leaving me there! Not with Dean about to go nuts and Sammy doing his freaky special child number! Come on write more you can do it Hunny, come on finger on those pretty little keys and tap away!! That's it now you're cooking! Bve xx
Author's Response: Lol, freaky special child number :p !! You're awesome Bev. And you don't have to wait long for chapter two, am writing on chapter five (but it's hard). Thanks for the review, I'll kick my little writers but:)
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is off to a good start! Those other chapters will come around I bet, sometimes for me a few reviews can be a kick start. Enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, thanks for telling me. And I hope you're right about the kick start. One things for sure, I'm a review-juncky. Thanks again, danrac:)
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hey, I know the feeling - finally managed to break the back of a chapter that's been killing me for about a month. Keep at it, you'll get there, and I can't wait to see it when you do!
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement, it really helps. And thanks for taking time to review. You don't have to wait long for the first chapters, but after that one... but your reviews helps:) Good luck with you own story!
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