Wow, I'm glad I ran into this. What a cool and thoughtful read. I think I really dig your style. I can't explain it but this left me with an almost haunting feeling... I gotta reread this.

One thing I loved about this is that you captured Sam and Dean very well, and in so few words! Makes me wonder how great you are when you're writing longer stories.

Author's Response:

Oh gee...*shuffles feet* Thank you. Very much. This is what happens when I write while being depressed. ;)

I'm very glad you like the story, and that it transported what it was meant to.

This is actually my only SPN story ever, I usually write RPF.

Thanks again, your review means a lot! :)

 

very nice job. really liked Sam's thoughts on things, and how he realized he couldn't change them just sitting there doing nothing. awesome that he finally got up and went after his brother, knowing Dean needed him!! thanks for sharing!! bambers;)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for letting me know what you think of the story! :D

I'm so glad you like it - Sam's thoughts are kinda personal for me (now that sounds strange *lol*), so I'm glad to hear they didn't seem strange or wtf-like to anybody else. ;D

  

This was very nice, and you have a great style working for you. 

This would have been a great first part of a longer fic - any chance you might turn it into a multy-chapter? 

I'll be keeping an eye out for you're next work.

Author's Response:

You just made my day. You really, really did. I thought nobody would ever read this, leave alone like it or leave a review - and here you are!

Thank you!

Before this I only wrote two RPF h/c fics, this was my first try at Sam and Dean, even though my main concern was to transport the thought I had on my mind.

I don't write regularly, and I'm not too good with longer stories, especially in English, so I guess this'll remain a one-shot. I wish real life wouldn't shoot my muse to hell most of the time. 

Thanks again.. YAY! :D