Got to say Beth, I'm very impressed. This is your first fanfic yet you've already got a fantastic descriptive ability and you've captured the pain and angst beautifully.

I'd be very interested to read a full length story from you with more characterisation and dialogue because you obviousely have a lot of talent.

Well done! Louy

Author's Response: Thanx so much! I wrote this short fic, and another one i just posted, to sort of get my feet wet. I'm thinking i might start working on something a little bigger soon, i was just mainly curious how these short fics would go over first. I really appreciate the review tho, the few i've gotten so far (here and at ff.net) have definitely given me a little courage to keep going. Thanx again, beth :)