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Reviews For Fear and Loathing in New York

Reviewer: clynn345 (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 02:58 PM · On: Chapter I

So great love it

Author's Response: Yay! I am so glad that you do. Thanks for letting me know.

Reviewer: clynn345 (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 02:07 PM · On: So Mote It Be

Love it

Author's Response:
Thank you! I really appreciate it :-D

Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 01:29 PM · On: So Mote It Be

You have drawn me into this tale. That was a great opening...left me wanting to find out who? what? when? We already know the hunter. Great!

Author's Response:
I added three girls. Any of them could be the one whose brother died. :-D Even though it is only one of them, the other two have very important parts.
So very glad that you liked it! The opening was inspired by a friend leaving a writing group that I'm in and too much SPN LOL
Thank you for your review, I enjoy hearing that my crazy ideas make sense to others

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/12/07 07:02 PM · On: Chapter I

Too funny! I loved this chapter! The dialog and characters are so much like my daughter and her friends (except the gaymate is usually more toughy-feely). I laughed the entire time I read this!

Author's Response:
*nods* So glad that you liked this chapter. I was quite proud of the dialog myself. Truth is I based it off of how a friend of mine, a fellow ff writer, speak with each other. I noticed that I joked around with her differently than I do with a few of my other friends and I wanted that rapport for these two characters. As for the gaymate, I don't have any gay male friends. A few female ones and the touchy-feeliness varies per person. For Jake I was channeling Lorne from the Angel verse and the fact that I find the calling of people food endearments funny lol
And I say Yay Me! For making you laugh. That's the best thing, either making someone laugh or making them cry lol Means the story effected them in some little way.
:-D
Thank you again and I have the next chapter ready, and should have it out soon :-) Happy Holidays!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/12/07 04:35 PM · On: So Mote It Be

Very colorful and whimsical, like a painting or a poem. A beautiful beginning! The joy and mystery and foreboding all mix wonderfully well to make me yearn for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! *blush* Glad to know that my intentions were made clear. I wanted that ethereal feeling that I always thought went with all rituals and prayers, whether Wiccan or Catholic or something else. But I also wanted that sense of loss there. *BG* Glad to know that worked out and I have ya yearning for more. Just what I want to hear!

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