Reviewer: PNutMnM (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 12
Sometimes I think Sam could use a couple blows to the head to help him think straight and poor Dean must be feeling pretty bad to want to curl up and die. How much does Dean remember from that day? So many questions, please answer them soon!!
Author's Response: Ok, that made me laugh. So true, Sam could use a couple head shots every once in a while! You know if I answer all those questions, it will probably just make more questions, right?
Reviewer: PNutMnM (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 11
Not a load of garbage at all. If that was the part you liked, I can't wait to read the part you didn't. I'm disturbed by the fact that Dean in on his way and neither one of them have come up with a plan yet. They can't count on Dean, he's got no clue what's going on. Glad I can move on, but somehow I'm suspecting things only get worse, right? Oh yeah, one more thing. Did you say something about a happy family of five? I'm confused about that, was it a typo or something else?
Author's Response: Glad you didn't think it sucked as much as I did. Poor Dean really is clueless isn't he, but i suspect that's changing pretty quick. I think you're right, it only gets worse. As for the family of five...no comment.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 07/04/08 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 12
Gripping chapter and so a suspenseful cliffy, I can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for saying so, I always seem to need to hear it!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 07/04/08 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 12
Not surprised you're happy...so am I now I've read it...great update and another awesome cliffy...can't wait to see Dean's reaction to their plan for him and even more keen to see Bobby and Sam get him out of it... Awesome mate!
Author's Response: Thanks Louy, I'm so glad you liked it. I wasn't kidding when I said I obsessed over that one all day. It's why my floors got mopped, my carpets got shampooed and my windows are all clean. Can I just say that I'm not so sure Bobby abd San cab get him out of it? It's not looking too good, but we'll see. As always, thanks for boosting my confidence when i seem to have none!!
Reviewer: brookiwinchester (Signed) · Date: 07/04/08 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 12
u suck out loud.the anticipation is agganiging but i luv it
Author's Response: Wow, thanks. Nobody has ever said that to me before. I kinda think I like it!! Glad you luv it, hope you keep reading!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 07/04/08 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 12
Dean is not going to die is he??????? i mean, i know he said he would do anything for Sam and bobby but not like this!!! the thought of Belial possessing him is skin-crawling!!!!
Author's Response: well, I don't nornally do death fics, but you never know, there's always a first time for everything, right? Just kidding...or not...don't really know yet. Ahhh...I'm so confused!!!
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/08 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 12
Helen, your chapters need to be longer!!!!!! i am on the edge of my seat and the chapter ends; how cruel. loved the line "you better still be alive in there Sammy, or i swear I'm gonna kill you." i can picture Dean actually saying this in one of the episodes............too funny. I said it before these 3 are evil and scary man i would not want to run into them. hoping chapter 13 will be soon. Renee
Author's Response: I'd love to make them longer, but sorry to say they would probably take two months to post instead of just two weeks. Sometimes I hear that little Dean voice in my head, and he tells me things (Weird, huh?) Anyway, glad you're still liking it and I'll try to get chapter up on less than two weeks again.
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 12
ACK!! And here we are at the start of the part I dreaded. For a moment, I thought Dean might get the upper hand--somehow--but no. I can't decide who I hate more--the blondes here or Jay. You've made me want to beat the holy crap out of all of them. And, heck, Waterson too while I'm at it. See--I turn bloodthirsty when things are after our boys. I will be eternally grateful if you make these two women get what's coming to them. PLEASE! And make it nasty. :-)
Author's Response: Dreaded yes, but you knew it had to come, right? Nope, no upper hand for poor Dean, that would be way too easy, and you know me, I don't do easy. I wish you could have seen the smile on my face when I read what you said about beating the crap out of all of them. Just remember, the three Is and Trent are just about done, but Jay, well, she's just getting started! I'll see what I can do about some sweet revenge but as you know by now, the end isn't always the end when it comes to me. (I must have closure issues, whatever that means)
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 11
Helen, OMG; i am in shock what a great chapter these woman are truly evil and scary as hell! Poor Sam and Bobby and poor Dean he has no idea what is coming. again great chapter i am sure chapter 12 will be up soon. rbliss
Author's Response: Bless you and thank you! Evil and scary, what a combination. You are so right about poor Dean having no clue what's coming too. Poor guy...I feel for him. Glad you liked it, and Chapter 12 is up as we speak!!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 11
You had me gagging with the bucket of blood and then Sam vomiting. Ugghhh! (But good bit of writing!) I'm eager to see how they get out of this one!
Author's Response: Wow, I'm so surprised that the blood/barf thing was as gross as it turned out to be, but I think I'm glad it did. I'm not entirely sure the boys can even get theselves out of this one, but we'll see.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 10
Poor Dean! Your description of his suffering was so good I could feel the aches and constriction myself. Moving on...
Author's Response: Sorry to say, his suffering is way far from over, if that's even possible. (Yep, pretty sure it is!) Moving on too...
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 11
I agree with all the other reviewers. You're too hard on yourself. This was a great chapter. The painting of the blood on Sam and Bobby was awesomely gross and disgusting And the lone tear on Sam's cheek just--wow--heartbreaking. This story frustrates me. Not because it's not good, but because the blondes have their trap so tightly woven. I wanna stomp my feet or bang my head into the wall.
Author's Response: Please don't do that Vanessa, that would really hurt, and probably put a hole in the wall! Those evil blondes sure are smart, aren't they? Sorry if they're so frustrating, but I'm pretty sure one or two of them will get theirs in the end...maybe.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 11
Strigo, you're too hard with yourself, it was a terrific chapter, the tension was building up start to end. With Sam's tear and Dean coming, what a way to end this chapter, you know how to keep us at the edge of our seat. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I must have been having an emo moment. I'll try to not let it happen again, but I doubt it. I'm surprised the tear had that much impact, but I'm glad it did. I'm sensing there will be a lot more of them from poor Sam before this is through.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 11
Concerning your writing I honestly doubt you ever have a bad day, this chapter is so good and as I hoped the mastiff appeared too, what a creature (and the name, quite a fitting reference, very dark humor!).
Author's Response: Trust me, I've had some doozies! They just never make it out of my hard drive. Oh, and the dog's name, that hit me the second I thought about him. I'm thinking of actually gettin one and naming him just that. Maybe I can train him to eat the neighborhood kids! (Just kidding, honest!)
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh, wow. Not garbage - definately not garbage! Scary, slightly sickening (in the best possible way), and the that last image; Sam crying one tear as Dean comes stumbling through the snow - it's painted on my brain! Figure quick!
Author's Response: Thanks! I just don't know what came over me there, but I think I've exorcised whatever it was finally. Didn't really think the tear would amount to much, glad to know it did. :-)
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 11
Great chapter Helen, intense and gruesome...just the way I like it...I must be a sick puppy. The whole section with the bucket of blood almost had me gagging it was so descriptive and as you know, I am a fan of every one of your plotlines...and this is NO exception...Great work mate!
Author's Response: Thanks Louy! Guess that makes me a sick puppy too. Puts me in good company!
Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 11
Your so hard on you, is not a load of garbage, but it´s very cruel for Dean. Loved how they prepared everything, and I hope there´s a way the guys can alert Dean about it. You´re tired, but as capable as you are in no time the words will fall to write the final part. I´ll be waiting, this is a great story.
Author's Response: I think I like being hard on myself, it's what motivates me. Sorru you all have to hear it on a regular basis. Thanks for helping keep me straight.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 11
not rubbish at all,i thought it was a great chapter,can't wait to find out what happen's next.
Author's Response: Thanks for saying so, sometimes I just get in a funk and can't help it. I think they have medication for that, don't they?
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 03/04/08 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 10
Helen, excellent story. loved how you have Bobby in this story. great line from Bobby made me laugh out loud "BS. Train wreck is your middle name." so true Dean is always finding himself in some kind of trouble. and speaking of trouble what is with the huge black monstrosity staring at Dean doesn't he have enough to deal with? love the line "Whoa...easy there, Cujo." can actually picture Dean saying this. hope chapter 11 is soon; poor Dean he is in for a world of S@&*. Renee
Author's Response: I can hear his voice in my head saying just that phrase (Hope that doesn't mean something. They have medication for that, don't they?) I firmly believe that Dean never has enough to deal with, so I say, PILE IT ON HIGH! (Besides, the dog, well...it had a purpose, honest.) I'm glad you like my version of Bobby, it's my first attempt at writing him in any detail. Glad he's ok. Oh, and thanks for leaving the comments, I alwasy appreciate them!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 10
Oh helen no! youre gonna stab Poor Dean all over again and make him do it himself this time! poor baby! Loved the big nasty doggy gonna eat him till he coughed all over it and boy has he got a hell of a fever. funny isn't it how guys always get much worse flu than girls?! I like your girls they are a feisty and unholy bunch and I can't wait to see if old Belial gets to come visit again! More helen please! bev xx
Author's Response: Guys don't get it worse, they just can't handle it like we do. As for poor Dean, well...yeah, I think that may be exactly what I have planned for him, at least I think. More on the way, soon, I promise. I know I'm a little slow, but it took me forever to figure out where to go with this.
Reviewer: PNutMnM (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 10
Why do the words Dean and Motel 6 sound so dirty together? Oh, and the dog, scary. And the floor, scary too. All around scary!
Author's Response: I don't know, I like that idea, don't you? (the Motel thing, I mean) Glad you liked it, thanks for reading it.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 10
Finally, Dean's awake and aware of the shit he's in...LOL about time too...i don't want the girls to take him unawares. at the very least i want a fight on their hands. :)
Author's Response: Can't promise that, but we'll see!
Reviewer: Live1970 (Signed) · Date: 29/03/08 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 10
Can I just say that the animal scared me. Took me a while to figure out it was a dog too. Interesting about that bible verse too. Great update.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! The dog, got that idea watching my neighbor's running around the neighborhood. Glad he scared you too.
Reviewer: Buc37 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 10
Ha Ha, Cujo! One of my favorites. Great update.
Author's Response: Yep, that Stephen King knows how to get the job done! Thanks!!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 24/03/08 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 10
Terrific chapter. Things don't look for any of them especially Dean. So suspenseful, I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: You are so right, things aren't going to go very well for poor Dean, but did you expect anything less?
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