Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Live1970 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 16

Yeah, ok, you're true to your word, but honestly, now the hell can you leave it like that?  Oh, and Sam performing miracles, holy crap!  I certainly hope this gets an update sooner rather than later because I'm about ready to fall off the edge of my seat!

Author's Response: You know, it always bothered me that the show never really let Sam become a psychic powerhouse...so I decided to do it for them.  glad you liked it and I will get right on that update...I promise!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 16

Helen, glad to see you back.  Missed you and your exciting updates!

This was a wonderful chapter.  I think I held my breath the entire time it took to read it.  No wonder I was lightheaded.  Or maybe that was just relief when Sam literally brought Dean back to life.

Sooooooo, an in-law visit, eh?  Maybe this is a good thing--imagine all the trouble you can direct at the boys as a much needed stress reliever.



Author's Response:

In-law from Hell...and believe me, I'd rather be entertaining Old Yellow Eyes!

I am really glad you liked the way it went and I am soo soo thankful for your patience.  One more day...one more day...then the stress relief will hopefully begin!!

Thanks again...and I'm still chuckling about the blow-up twins!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 16

Ahhhhh!  Ok Babe you may indeed peep out from behind that pebble that protects ya and instead of  a clobbering with the stinking Death Fic fish you may have this plate of delectible sushi and a big glass of ...Sprite (I'm not much of a drinker!)

But let me just remind you that the honking mackeril can always be re animated should we need him!

Loved it hun. 

Bev xx



Author's Response: Aww Bev...you know just what to say to cheer me up!  I've got the Wasabi all ready to go!!  Hold that mackeril for now...it can only go up from here, right?

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 16

that was an amazing chapter,not a death fic, just wasn't sure sometimes.lol.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, as always, for the great support!  I couldn't keep writing it without it.

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 28/04/08 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 15

Hi, this is my first review since joining a couple of months ago, I've been one of those dreadful lurkers,but this story is so amazing,scary and wonderful I just had to review thankyou and I can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

Hi right back!  I am honored that you chose this crazy tale I've told to make your first review and can only hope that you leave many more to come. 

I, too, was a lurker for over four months before I finally signed up and then didn't review for another two or three before finally breaking my silence and I'm really glad I did.

I am also thrilled that you really enjoy this story, it has been a lot of fun to write and I will be sorry when it's finished.  Thank you so much for letting me know how much you like it, I do really really appreciate it!!

Reviewer: brookiwinchester (Signed) · Date: 28/04/08 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 15

did u seriouslyjust kill of dean?

Author's Response: Well...I guess if you want to get technical...yeah, I did, but I reserve the right to bring him back to life later, which I fully plan to do.  The thought of Dean dead breaks my heart.  I could never leave him that way, never!!

Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 28/04/08 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 15

Oh wow ! This is the best epi ever in this story.... But I am sure Dean will live......How can he leave his sammy alone? He has to come back for his little brother. Good Job, Keep it up. :)
Pranami

Author's Response:

Dean will live, I promise!!  I could never take him away from Sam...Sam wouldn't know what to do without him.

Thanks so much for saying this one was the best too, I think it was my favorite one to write too and I am really glad you liked it. (And very happy you told me so!) 

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 28/04/08 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 15

Ahhhhh! Helen, what are you doing to us? Ahem, of course, I mean what are you doing to poor Dean, Sammy and Bobby? Den's bones crusing, Dean begging each Bobby and Sam to take care of each other, the pure desperation in the room.... where are the tissues??? Now you better tell us soon (!) how you intend to save Dean's life. Awesome and gripping chapter! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

Was it really that emo?  Yikes...sorry.  I must be weird because the CPR was what I thought to be the highlight of the chapter.  (Crazy, huh?)

I promise on all that is holy, I will save poor Dean's life, you have my word.

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 15

Helen,

i know you said this was not a death fic but  that was heart renching.  i am still crying.

OMG how awful.........

i know you said Dean was in for more of an ordeal so i am sure the next chapters will show that.

and what about the double mint twins i am sure they are still to be dealt with.

can't wait to read more.

You still ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Renee 



Author's Response:

Thanks Renee!  Happy to hear no fish are sailing my way from your direction!  I am sorry if it made you cry though, but I am very glad you liked it.

Dean's ordeal is not quite over yet, as you have already guessed and the fate of the double mint twins will be revealed as well.  Thanks so much for your awesome words!!  I can never get enough!!

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 15

that was brutal...if only I had a fish!

Author's Response: Ugh...please, no fish!!  That would be brutal as well!! I really am a bit overwhelmed at the response to this chapter, so let me say big thanks and I am really glad you liked it and offered up some dead sea creatures.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 15

Author's Response: Vanessa, I promise you that Dean will live to fight another day, even in this story.  And let me just say that I'm really not sure exactly what to say.  I hoped that the crunching of bones in Dean's chest would lighten the mood a little.  Guess I was wrong.

I'm glad you liked it though, your opinion really means a lot to me.

Hun, please don't think my tears while reading were a bad reflection on the chapter.  It was wonderful.  When it comes to the boys, my emotions just run away with themselves.  And I knew that every second I was reading that Dean wasn't going to stay dead.  But his words--and Sam's words--were just little arrows of grief in my heart.  And, hey, there's nothing like crying into your morning cup of coffee.

As far as the crunching of bones in his chest?  Well, I have to admit there--you did get a smile out of me.  I kept thinking "Ooh, that's gotta hurt.  And, boy, that's sure not gonna make his recovery any easier."  So see--it did lighten the mood for me a bit.  I was thinking ahead to possible future hospital scenes.  Are we getting some??



Author's Response:

Salty coffee Vanessa...yuck!  But I am glad you did like the chapter.  I honestly didn't think that chappy was overly emotional, but apparently it was.  Maybe I need to proofread when I'm awake.

Glad you liked the bone crunching too and if it'll make you feel better, there's a little dose of hospital drama to come...it wouldn't be one of my stories if there wasn't, right?

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 15

Arggh!  I am sitting here Hunny with the biggest stinkiest old dead mackeril in my delicate lady like hand and I don't care how big a rock you is cowering behind I WILL find ya of you don't save our beautiful boy!

Heehee, come on Sweety, finish it and rescue me from my torment.  Cool story!

bev xx



Author's Response: Aw Bev, you know just what to say to put a smile on my face!  Oh, and I think I can actually smell that fish all the way over here...yikes...my fingers are clicking away as we speak!!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 15

This chapter broke my heart, so much sadness in it. Beautifully done Strigo, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.  I am really glad to hear you liked it and sorry if it broke your heart, but maybe I can fix it later.

Reviewer: Miss Sparrow (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 15

Omg that was so sad.


Author's Response: I'm sorry if it was sad, but painfully necessary to the storyline.  I hope you liked it and let me say thank you for taking the time to read and review.  It is very much appreciated.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 15

brilliant chapter,but very sad.can hardly see to write.you did say not a death fic,you have'nt changed your mind have you?lol.

Author's Response: Nope, haven't changed my mind yet...still not a deathfic. (Hard to believe, isn't it?)  I think my emo phase may be over too, but we'll see.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 15

Oh Helen, I'm out of words this time, but I think I understand now what you said about the brotherly bond, dear God, awesome!

And I swear, I will personally move this rock you're hiding behind!



Author's Response: Thank you so much Sabine, and I actually didn't even make it to the most important part yet.  I'll hide under the rock as long as I need to, but if you find me, don't hurt me!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 15

Ahhh, crap--I can't even type because my eyes are too full of tears.  They've been pouring down my cheeks for most of the chapter, but most especially when Dean started whispering about the bright light and seeing his mom and how she wanted him to come to her.  And you completely did me in with “I’m sorry Sam…I’m so sorry…I love you little brother…”

I KNOW you said it's not a deathfic but my mind doesn't seem to want to wrap itself around that truth.

 



Author's Response:

Vanessa, I promise you that Dean will live to fight another day, even in this story.  And let me just say that I'm really not sure exactly what to say.  I hoped that the crunching of bones in Dean's chest would lighten the mood a little.  Guess I was wrong.

I'm glad you liked it though, your opinion really means a lot to me.

Reviewer: Live1970 (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 15

Sweetheart, you can't find a rock big enough to hide behind that I can't find you!  What the hell are you trying to do to me?  I knew I should have ignored that e-mail before going to work today because now I have to go there all rattled.  OMG, that's all I can say (but i'm still giving it 10 stars)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the stars!  Sorry if I ruined your day, but hey, that's just me.

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 15

I am so gonna hold on to your promise that it's not a deathfic!!!! I don't think i can stand the thought of Dean dead! your last scene reminds me so much of Mystery Spot's scene!!!!! *sniffs*

Author's Response: I am a woman of my word, I swear!  I couldn't stand the thought of Dean dead too, unless he was one very sexy vampire floating outside my window...ahh, dare to dream.

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 14

Ah!!!!!!! finish it? finish it??? no no no no no....he can't finish it....at least i hope not...what's gonna become of Dean if he finish it?

Author's Response:

But he has to finish it, how else are they going to get out of there?

Hope that means you are still liking this story and don't worry about Dean, I said no deathfic and I meant it.littleface

Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 24/04/08 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 14

Wow ......such a nice twist in the story. I thought Dean wd never make it. Yipppeeeee now hes alive. The Story seems to be getting more and more interesting. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter......keep posting really xcited to read further.... :)

Pranami

Author's Response: Thanks so much Pranami!  I've still got a twist or two left up my sleeve, so I hope you stick around for the rest!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 24/04/08 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 14

OMG   what a chapter!!!!!!!!!!

This has been a wild ride-action, suspense, angst,brotherly love, twists and turns-AWESOME job  !!!!!!

Excellent writing and storytelling- you have captured all the elements and made them yours_OUTSTANDING!!!!!

More please.

BRAVO!!!!!!

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much, glad to hear you like what's going on so far...and it's still not over yet!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 23/04/08 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 14

Think this is probably the most painful chapter you ever wrote, I'm scared out of my wits for Dean and it is just one little sentence here that keeps me from going insane completely, the thing the Demon lady said about Sam "he believes enough for all three of you". God, I hope she is right!

And why would anyone who writes these brilliant things want to hide behind a rock? Don't hide, write the next chapter and release us!



Author's Response: Thanks Sabine! I must warn you, if you think this one was painful, wait until chapter 15.  Remember what I said about the bonds of brotherly love being stronger than death? Well, it would have made it into chapter 14 if I'd been a little less wordy.  15 is half written though and should be up by friday...but don't hold me to that.  I got a bad feeling about that one though, I think the rock won't be big enough to hide behind and I may just get hit by flying debris.  (Just kidding!)

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 23/04/08 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 14

It better not be!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing chapter 



Author's Response:

It's not!  I swear!!  I promise!!!  (please hold heavy objects until the next chapter!)

Big thank you!!  I am glad you liked it!!

Reviewer: deanpamforever (Signed) · Date: 23/04/08 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 14

 

You are a master!!!!This story is awsome!!! I love tha last chapter!!! Poor Dean, he is so brave!!! You said you won't kill him so is ok for me, I love angst and limp Dean, unless he dies of course!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Pamela!  I don't think I know exactly what to say other than that.  I am truly thrilled that you love the whole story and as promised, I will not kill Dean, ever!  (I don't think I could...he's too darn cute!)

I probably love writing Dean angst as much as you love reading it, so I'll try to throw in just a little more for good measure. 

Thanks again!!! :-D

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