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Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

Fabulous stuff, I think you nailed John. This's a brilliant missing scene. So if John really went to talk to Rebecca, was it how he found out about Jessica's death? That's clever!



Author's Response:

That was my thinking. Then he'd have time to go to Stanford and check it all out before Dean's phonecall in "Home", and of course the first thing he'd do when he knew his boys had been through so much already was come straight to Lawrence.

Thanks very much for the review, glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

Might have been difficult, but damn, it was good!

Loved the way you had John jump in his car and hightail it over there, coz I love your take that just because John is 'absent' or uncontactable. doesn't mean he isn't keeping tabs on his boys.

This was very well written with a rivetting story plot, a perfect missing scene. Very plausible but also heart wrenching. I just loved it. Great work!

And that ending, it does leave room for a follow-up, doesn't it...



Author's Response:

John left to protect the boys, we know that, so I find it hard to believe he'd just ignore them for a year. Nice subtle hint at the end there ;) Maybe I'll do a tag for "Faith"? Hmm...

Thanks for the lovely review!

Reviewer: Pooka Bunny (Signed) · Date: 31/12/07 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this story so much!!! I can agree that writing from John's POV is very hard but you did a really great job!! Keep up the awesome work!!

~Ash/Pooka~ :)



Author's Response: Thanks Pooka! Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/07 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

Good job irnan. And I really agree with this line:

Sometimes you think he’s the only hunter you know who lives this life for the right reasons.

I've always thought that about Dean too! Well done. 



Author's Response:

I think that was what made episodes like "Croatoan" and especially "What is" so powerful: the way Dean carried on in spite of his apparent loss of that conviction. Anyway, don't mean to ramble on, thanks for the lovely review!

Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

Glad I read it. Nicely done. Thought you handled John's POV very well. Well thought out. Kudos!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, nice to know you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

You did a great job.... :)


Author's Response: Glad you thought so, thanks!

Reviewer: JennieC (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

I don't think I've seen a stroy yet with this timeline - great way to bring John in to the picture.

 Loves it!!

hugs

 jen 

 



Author's Response:

There's just no way he didn't hear about St. Louis! Thanks for the lovely review.

*hugs back*

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

loved dean's message to john....never misses a chance to inject some smartass into any conversation...

Well-written......... I've always loved John's character...

 



Author's Response:

I think in spite of himself Dean got ever so slightly bitter about John's long absence. And there's only one way to deal with that sort of thing if you're Dean Winchester!

Glad you liked it, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

Fabulous stuff.  I so enjoy your writing!

Dix

p.s. Happy New Year... 



Author's Response: Thanks very much! And a Happy New Year to you too!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well, may have been difficult Lara, but I thought you nailed it. I could see John going through it all, just as he should have at the end of that episode. Great work!



Author's Response:

*wipes sweat off brow and grins triumphantly*

Thanks very much! I kept finishing a paragraph and then going away wondering if that was too Sam or did that sentence sound like Dean...?

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was great. I love having John try to figure things out by just watching the boys.

I find it interesting to read about other people's views/opinions about the brothers.  How they look to an outsider - other than gorgeous!

Thank you 



Author's Response:

I can't believe he'd ignore them completely for a year - seeing them in St. Louis would give him enough time to find out about Jess and then come to Lawrence when Dean called...

Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

Lara

Had to come back - i got to be first reviewer!!  Yeeha never managed it before!!

Bev xx



Author's Response: *hehe*

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

Lara.

That's great. We all know that John loves his boys he's just too broken himself to be able to tell them that very efficiently. But this pov is so tense with his pain thinking he's lost Dean.

Loved it Thank you.

Bev xx



Author's Response: Thanks ever so much, Bev, I'm glad you liked it! John as a person is just so hard to capture...

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