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Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Holidays In Hades Are Not Recommended

I'm really blown away by your descriptions, you have a very powerful imagination and you're very good at writing it so the reader can see the action rather than just read it.
Great chapter..moving on...

Author's Response: Thanks, I love doing the whole descriptive thing, my brain needs the exercise sometimes, lol!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Possession Is 9/10ths Of The Lore

You've really raised the tension in these last few chapters and I have to say I'm loving it, moving on straight away!

Author's Response: Glad that worked out, I wasn't sure if I could get the atmosphere right :)

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Crucifixion Is A Flesh Wound

Had to just say...damn, this is strong stuff and very very good. This demon sucker is as creepy as hell and real mean to boot...roll on whatever fate Bobby and Sam have for him...

Author's Response: I love the demon, so much fun to create, thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Vision

Damn even in Sam's worst nightmare Dean's got a smart mouth...lol
Powerful imagery in this dream sequence, and you made it very real. Moving on to next chapter...

Author's Response: He just has to have a smart mouth in any situation, so it was good to get inside his mind for a few minutes, lol!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 10 - A Demonic Revelation

So finally, I've made it back and having just read this chapter, I was right back into the thick of it straight away! ...and ooh Dean getting pissy with Bobby, love that!
You have some fantastic lines in here especially...the stench of old meat and squelch of rotten food strewn around his feet like nightmare confetti.
Loved that, and I'm determined to finish reading the rest of this story today...Great work Sammy X Louy

Author's Response: Thanx Lout! Really appreciate all the lovely words, it's very encouraging!

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 23/02/08 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Holidays In Hades Are Not Recommended

Well they're back together, but i get the feeling that it ain't over yet...? Hope not! It's too much fun!

Author's Response: No, one final chapter to go! I didn't wanna finish but there's really nothin more to write! Lol, Thanks for the lovely review, as usual :)

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Working Man

Freaky in a fantastic way!

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Crucifixion Is A Flesh Wound

OMG DEAN!! please don't let him die. I hope Sam and Bobby can kill it or something! update soon!

Author's Response: I'll think about it...lol. Thanks for the review, will be working on the next chapter tonight so hopefully will post it early next week :)

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 15/02/08 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Vision

Oh, that's freaky. Real Dean? Sam's sub-concious pretending to be Dean (and that's scarier still!) What happens next?!!!

Author's Response: Lol, freaky in a good way?? Will post sometime today, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Working Man

Ow, that hurt. You mean, nasty thing, sending a demon to beat up poor dean AND give him angst? LOVED IT!

Author's Response: Lol, thanks, I think! Will hopefully post again today :)

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 07/02/08 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Some Kind Of Truth

only dean would throw handgrenades at rats! poor sammy's nose though...and there's almost as much blood as S.T!

Author's Response: Haha lol! The gore just keeps comin, I'm gonna have to stop beating Sam up :)

Author's Response: Scrap that, lol. I love the guy but kickin' fictional ass is so fun!

Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Some Kind Of Truth

Sweeny Todd??? is it good??? oh i'm intrigued with your story by the way!

Author's Response:
Oh my god, yeah! It's freakin ace, see it if u can - u don't even notice the singin once it gets going.
Thanks, will post asap. :)

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 03/02/08 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Some Kind Of Truth

Enjoyed this chapter a lot...you have a real talent for writing action, and there is plenty of it in this chapter...will look out for next post...

Author's Response: Thank u so much! I got all serious, decided the action needed to be more intense. Will post again soon :)

Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 03/02/08 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Some Kind Of Truth

I'm loving this! My favorite line has to be "Kinda gives Ratatouille a whole new meaning" LMAO! Great story, looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks! I put that in at the last minute so glad u liked it! Will post asap.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Two Plastic Butts And One Nasty Surprise

Boy...that whole Travolta image is just cracking me up, and I loved the banter in this chapter...and now a cliffy too...can't wait for next post...

Author's Response: Yeah, I have no idea where that idea came from - I don't even like the man! Lol, thanks for the review, will posts again asap :)

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Worst Nightmares?

Doesn't have to be long to be good and this is good!...Baldy-locks...hah! Moving on straight away...

Author's Response: I was worried they were too short but I guess not! Thanks as always for reading!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Grrr Is For...Gross

This has got some of the funiest lines ...'sneezing shoe laces for a year' priceless. Really enjoying this fic...and it's funny as hell...great work

Author's Response: Haha! Thanks, Im keep meaning to get serious at some stage but the humour keeps popping up!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 5 - A Distraction

Hah, 'Dean Winchester, sex monkey' I think we all like the sound of that...great update phoenix, moving on to next chapter...

Author's Response: Lol, thank you! Hopefully will update soon :)

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 16/01/08 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 5 - A Distraction

dang, was hoping to find out what they are going to hunt!! great humor once again!! look forward to next chappy! bambers;)

Author's Response: Lol! Will post again soon!

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 16/01/08 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 4 - The Blame Game

great job. love the humor in this story. thanks for sharing!! bambers;)

Author's Response: Thanks! No probs, thanks for reading

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 4 - The Blame Game

Awh, that was sweet and Bobby being their 'Dad' lovely!
Now how the heck is Bob gonna get them outta this one? Write some more Hun need to know!
Bev xx

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Deciphering Dreams

Ooowee, don't ya just love Bobby? He's so wise and smart and funny and he loves those boys! And he can so call Dean smartarse as pull him up in his trackes like no one else!
So how's it Dean's fault? Gotta know!
Reading on
Bev x

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Fear of Falling

OMG! Gotta know what's happeneing? Is this a vision? Is it gonna happen? How'd Dean get his arm broken? Will he survive the fall?
Yehaa this is a rollercoaster ride!
Reading on!
Bev xx

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Working Man

That's lovely, so funny and who could blame a big hairy ass biker from chasing something as gorgeous as Dean!! heehee!
Reading on!
Bev x

Author's Response: Haha! I know what ya mean, lol ;)

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 4 - The Blame Game

keep going its a good storie

Author's Response: Thank u! Will do my best :)

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