Reviewer: troutface (Signed) · Date: 23/03/08 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 15 - False Teeth And An Angst Fest
The whole story was great and this chapter finished it off perfectly. with Dean getting the nurses phone numbers and the petty squabbles that show the affection the boys have for each other. I hope you write more i shall be pleased to read more from you. thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, ur reviews r awesome! Thanx again, Ducky xx
Reviewer: troutface (Signed) · Date: 23/03/08 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Holidays In Hades Are Not Recommended
Don't do that to me Deans heart stopped mine stopped as well. very good chapter, I'm still hooked
Author's Response: Hehe, glad ur still enjoying it, I guess I've don my job lol :)
Reviewer: troutface (Signed) · Date: 23/03/08 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Crucifixion Is A Flesh Wound
Deans green eyes filling with tears, i had a lump in my throat and tears streaming down my face. a cracking chapter. Don't give in dean.
Author's Response: Ah, don't worry I'm nice really :)
Reviewer: troutface (Signed) · Date: 23/03/08 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 10 - A Demonic Revelation
Great demon and well written you capture dean and Sam's characters so well I'm jealous.
Author's Response: Lol, thanx, I love my demon!
Reviewer: troutface (Signed) · Date: 23/03/08 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Some Kind Of Truth
Those rats yuk, their tiny bones breaking under Deans feet double yuk. if they were near me i think i would do the same. you have a weird mind phoenix i like it very much . lol.
Author's Response: Glad u liked!! Weird? That's an understatement lol
Reviewer: troutface (Signed) · Date: 23/03/08 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Two Plastic Butts And One Nasty Surprise
Please keep Sam safe!!!
Author's Response: Okay, if u insist ;)
Reviewer: troutface (Signed) · Date: 23/03/08 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Worst Nightmares?
Poor April she must have been terrified. whats the link ? i cant wait . Sammy doing a runner with the book hes turning so naughty. lol loving it thanks!
Author's Response: Like you don't already know, lol :)
Reviewer: troutface (Signed) · Date: 23/03/08 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Grrr Is For...Gross
John Travolta in a tutu exelent idea but now i'm going to have nightmares. lol. I loved the hotel room and Dean saying shoot me.
Reviewer: troutface (Signed) · Date: 23/03/08 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Grrr Is For...Gross
John Travolta in a tutu exelent idea but now i'm going to have nightmares. lol. I loved the hotel room and Dean saying shoot me.
Author's Response: It gave me nightmares, haha!!
Reviewer: troutface (Signed) · Date: 23/03/08 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 5 - A Distraction
Dean is such a pervert that's why we luv him. so funny. ta
Author's Response: Lol, thanks!
Reviewer: troutface (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Fear of Falling
Dean worried about going bold as it wouldn't suit him classic. keep writing and ill keep reading thanks
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Reviewer: troutface (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Fear of Falling
I'm hooked on this story all ready, Sam is a princess (you get their characters just right)i hope it is only a dream I'll keep reading .thanks .
Author's Response: Thank you loverly person, lol. Ur 2 kind :)
Reviewer: troutface (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Working Man
You had me fooled i thought it was the most terrifying demon that Dean was facing ,then realized i was right .Big hairy bikers terrify me .Great twist and very promising start tot he story will definitely be reading more.
Author's Response: U big coward! Thanks for the review ducky :)
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 15 - False Teeth And An Angst Fest
Phoenix. great last chapter, I could feel the camerarderie, humour and warmth coming off the pair of them. Loved the argument about going to hospital and the final quessence from dean. and then the nurses falling over to get to sign his cast! Of course it was much the same when I busted mine...hahahhahahha Triffic, thanks for sharing loved it bev xx
Author's Response: Thanks!! I just kinda made that bit up as I went along but it worked out real well so I kept it in, thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Holidays In Hades Are Not Recommended
Phoenix. Oh i loved the brothers looking after each other. Oww! I remember that throbbing busted arm pain yuck!! Stylish demon loving him! Bev xx
Author's Response: I loved writing my demon, he was so nasty, hehe. Luckily I haven't broken any bones, (touch wood) but at least I got the throbbing pain bit right!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Possession Is 9/10ths Of The Lore
Phoenix Gee, I love the short chapters as they tease and tantalise but now I'm getting a bit worried! Do you need someone to come and help suture? I'm very experianced? No no i't be no trouble - I'll be straight over! bev xx
Author's Response: I myself prefer to read short chapters so I write short chapters, which can be annoying I guess but hey, it seems to work! Suture all you want, hahaha! I know I would...lmao!!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Crucifixion Is A Flesh Wound
Phoenix i would like to invite you to join the Guild of Exquisite tortureres! Gosh that was very very sweet pain! I love your demon I'd like to invite it to tea with mine, Mikey (The Fallen) he's a fun guy too! Likes knives and orthopaedic injuries too! Brother demons!! Bev xx
Author's Response: I humbly accept your invitation. I had to stop myself cos torturing is quite addictive, lol! I'm gonna have to go read your story now, and I'll make sure my demon is available for tea, although I think he'd prefer a hot cup of steaming blood and gore :)
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Vision
Phoenix. i like this the whole disorientation that the crashing storm brings it makes the nightmare so much more frightening. And I am a sucker for Dean in pain and having spectacularly broken my wrist not long back I can feel that 'gonna puke on my shoes' sensation! Very evocative liking it! bev xx
Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry about your wrist, hope it's all good now? 'Evocative' - thanks, my writing's never been called that before!! :)
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 10 - A Demonic Revelation
Phoenix. this is one scary demon, I love him. And glad you have brought bobby to help. I like the stacatto nature of the chapters it sorta enhances the urgency of the action. Edgy, pacy, like it. bev xx
Author's Response: Thank you again bev! I couldn't leave Bobby out, he's ace. Glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Some Kind Of Truth
Phoenix Hoowee! Vermin kebabs and big baddabooms! Funky action hun and poor Sammy with his BooBoo nose! What fun Reading on Bev xx
Author's Response: I so wouldn't wanna be one of those rats, hehe! I didn't wanna hurt loverly Sam but I couldn't resist ;)
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Two Plastic Butts And One Nasty Surprise
Phoenix The banter betwen the boys is funny and Sam's bust nose and Dean saying he's still better looking! heehee bev x
Author's Response: Lol, thanks! It's fun (in a strange but not unpleasant way) to think like a Winchester :)
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Worst Nightmares?
Oh hell Phoenix what's the link hunny? I need to know! And I have some ant killing powder here if ya'd like me to go help Dean with his unconfrotable clothing! No Hun, it's no trouble at all! bev xx
Author's Response: Haha, I'm so mean...lol! That is definately one itch I wouldn't mind scratching ;), mwa-hahaha!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Grrr Is For...Gross
Phoenix Oh I like this as my reality is so attuned to freaky weird and you are like ...pushing the edgy, random button here! haha Travolta in a tutu, that is so hot! What? Does that make me a bad person? bev xx
Author's Response: HOT??? Okay, if you like that sort of thing...lmao! Thanks for the review, strange person hehe
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 5 - A Distraction
haha Phoenix , Dean the sex monkey that is just hysterical. I love Bonobo's saw some in africa and they have such sweet faces, like Dean! Love the get a room bante at the end freaking funny! Cool banner too! (that Lou - what a girl!) Bev x
Author's Response: They are very cute and nymphomaniacal (if that's a word...lol) just like Dean! Lou is awesome, the banner's brill :)
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 15 - False Teeth And An Angst Fest
Well what I think is, this is a fantastic story, well written and descriptive and If I'd read it earlier I would have nominated for Sam's list this month, I'm sorry I didn't. You have a lovely style to your descriptions, managing to conjure up some really powerful images especially with action...love your action chapters. This was great work Sammy and I'm sure as readers find it on the site you will be getting a lot more reviews.
Author's Response: Thanx! It's okay, just knowing you anfd others enjoyed it makes me feel fab! I thought my action sucked and I needed some more, but maybe not, lol! Imagery's always been the best thing about writing for me so it's awesome you thought the descriptions were good. Thanx for the reviews and everything!!
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