Reviewer: jennie81 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/10 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 9
good story clap clap
Reviewer: badaiwind (Signed) · Date: 06/08/09 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 9
It's wonderful and the aspects that made Dean and Sam is there. It's really great and some changes can be made at chapter 5 where the scene change pace to fast hospital by putting some break there. Overall I love it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I work very hard at characterization. As for breaks. I didn't use them at all at that point in my writing (I consider them very overused in fanfiction writing) and only use them now when it feels necessary. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. lostatc
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 08/02/09 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 9
What a beautiful and fitting end. Kate dead, Dean free and willing to be saved and I love his comment "not altering irreparably." Well done on a great story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your review and the time you spent reading my story.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 08/02/09 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 8
Finally Sam is behaving as a rational loving brother putting Dean's wants and desires first, instead of being an irrational, self centered idiot. Personal opinion there, but I always thought Sam's desperate desire to keep Dean alive at any cost was selfish and inconsiderate. By the way I'm loving this story, and whilst abhorant of vampires, the idea of having Dean chained to a bed all to myself has a certain appeal!
Author's Response: Not one to usually defend Sam, but Dean's deal was the exact same thing, selfish and inconsiderate. But I have to say that Sam's obsession with saving Dean struck me as "off" whereas Dean's desperate deal was just that - desperate. Who doesn't love the idea of Dean changed to a bed? Thanks for reading. I love the review, makes me happy that someone enjoyed it.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 03/11/08 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
Awesome! You know, I always wondered if they ever would write an episode where Kate came gunning for a new mate in Dean. She seemed to have the hots for him when Luthor was still in the picture! I was reading this with my nails digging into my palms in anxious anticipation! lol. You're like the queen of suspense. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. I wish they would do a story with Kate coming back also but it won't happen. They've moved too far from season one for that to happen. The joys of fanfiction, we get to write the story we want as well as watch the show they want to give us. I am really glad you liked this story. I really enjoyed writing it. And I finally have a crown...queen of anything is wonderful!
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 9
That was great. Poor Dean. I never even considered the possible that he could become a vampire. I just rewatched that episode a couple of days ago. I'm glad I found this story. Thanks so much for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading. They covered something similar to this in show with the Dr. stealing bodies, same basic theme. I wrote this after rewatching that episode and reading an interview with the actress that played Kate. I'd love it if they'd bring her back for a little revenge. Maybe we'll get lucky in season 4. Again, thanks for reading and for leaving a review. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 9
Wonderful story! The strange mix of compelling emotions was delightful! I can't wait for your next story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate all the time and effort you put into my story. I know how hard it is to review after every chapter so I am grateful. You make me feel successful as a writer and that is wonderful for me!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 8
Dean's explanation of his feelings toward Kate was great! It held the loathing and fear that I would have guessed he felt toward his tormentor. What I hadn't considered is how Sam wanting Kate to make him her mate for eternity would be it's own torture. what a clever twist!
Author's Response: Thank you. This was all obviously written before the majority of season 3 was televised but I got enough to know that Sam would try just about anything to save Dean. This seems a viable solution to Dean's little problem although one I don't think Dean would ever take. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 7
I didn't expect the passionate kiss between Kate and Dean, especially after what she's done to him. Then he turned on her completely at the table. Poor Dean, he's more messed up than ever.
Author's Response: I am a hugefan of Bran Stoker's Dracula and one of the underlying emotions that is clearly represented in his tale is that the attraction between a vicitm and the vampire is almost impossible to resist. It is something that I wanted to come across here. I wanted it very clear that Kate's gotten under Dean's skin but he doesn't necessarily want her there. So, yes, Dean's one messed up little puppy. Sam isn't helping much either. Thanks for reading and the reviews. I love confirmation that what I'm trying to convey is getting across.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 6
Whew! for a moment I was afraid Dean's wound would be completely healed because he'd been turned and didn't know it. You also had me wondering if he was looking out the window because he could see or sense Kate was following them. Hunting her is a big relief.
Author's Response: You have me wondering if I dropped a wound....now I have to go back and read. I try very hard to keep track of injuries and mention them again before moving on.....I'm busy with something else, I read it all again later. Thanks.....this is going to bug me. I'll be reading this before the night is through. By the way, I don't think you were trying to ridicule, it's just been long enough since I read this that I'm worried about it. I like to keep my stories fairly tight and when I loose something in a story it drives me crazy.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 5
So emotional and the male rape was sensitively explained. I like how you brought out all the possibilities that could stem from Dean's trauma. An incredible chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I tried for sensitive and subtle although there can only be so much of that with this type of subject. So glad that you like the chapter. It was planned from the beginning but I was afraid readers would think it all was a bit gratuitous (sp? - I don't feel like looking the word up). Thanks again. I really appreciate you readining my stories and leaving me all these great reviews.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 4
Tastefully written. Luther or Dean? Hmmmm....Dean! No contest! Yahoo! The rescue! Now Dean can recover and help kill some vampires! Unless you have more tricks up your sleeve.
Author's Response: Considering Luthor is dead, dead not just vamp dead....no contest. He was damn sexy though! But for me, not contest either. Tricks? Me? I'd never do anything like that. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 3
The background on Luther and Kate was very interesting! One of the things the show doesn't have time to do is flesh-out all their characters. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I waatched the episode with Luthor and Kate a couple of times. He really gave me an old west feel but completely comfortable in any era. She gave me the biker babe feel and not quite old enough to have become comfortable in any era. It all involved reading up on the times that I pictured them in and then figuring out how an old west vampie would meet up with a biker babe. I reall liked these two characters in show and would really love to see Kate come back.....one can always hope even if I doubt it will ever happen. Thanks for reading and for all the reviews!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 2
Geez, food frenzy! Poor Dean. He's not going to be in any shape to kick vampire ass by the time he's rescued. I hope Sam and Bobby get to him quickly!
Author's Response: Poor Dean is right but I liked the idea of older vamps teaching newer ones. And like animals in the wild that would require food to learn off of. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
Erotically gruesome! Bobby's thoughts about his graying and thinning hair and the comparison between his relationship with John and that of the boys is too funny!
Author's Response: I love how erotic vampires are so there in lies the purpose behind this story. That and a bit of angst. Thanks for reading this one also! Love the reviews, they make me happy and smile.
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 9
Brought a lump to my throat and a tear to my eye when Sam watching Dean walk back to the motel door said to himself 'God, I'm gonna miss you.' And Dean with the baby girl was lovely and her mom putting her hand to his healing neck, very touching. Thanks for an entertaining and great read, how about a sequel when Dean's deal is sorted out. Ten stars for you, well done. Silvertayl
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I don't know about a sequel seems kind of pointless without the protagonist (sp? - don't feel like looking it up). One never knows though. Again, thanks a lot for the great review and for reading my story.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 9
Cool, story and gee only took me a month to read... man I suck. Seriously though, great story. I enjoyed having Lenore back and you did a great job with Dean. Loved the way he was tormented by Kate even though he knew it was something he didn't want. - Look forward to starting your next story - Kel
Author's Response: Hope its okay that I respond at all at once. Thank you so much for reading, doesn't matter how long it takes. I'm so happy that you liked the story and bothered to read at all. I loved the characters of Kate and Lenore and it was great fun to contrast them against each other. It just goes to show that nothing is ever what it seems. I also loved playing with Dean and Sam's emotions in this one. I think it Sam would think long and hard with this as a possibilty and I don't think Dean would give it a second thought - when he's in his right mind. It really was just a fun story to write. Again thanks so much for all your support and great reviews. I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 8
Loved the brothers tracking down the Kate's family, and the image of Dean and the baby was beautiful. - Kel
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 7
Very cool, gotta say I loved your take on Lenore, great job. - Kel
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 6
Cooooool......very nice. Love that Dean's now tracking Kate. Great job handling Sam's anger and frustration. - Kel
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 5
cool twist to keep us hanging as to what Dean's feelings are. Great chapter - Kel
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 4
Crap, well that's so not good. So Dean's got help but Kate's still at large..hm... moving on
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 3
Even subconsciously he was always trying to save the victims; never acknowledging that he was one of the victims himself. - Great line....I'm enjoying this one :)
Author's Response: Glad you're liking it. I was surprised to see another review for this story. Still trying to catch up on your reading? I guess I'm lucky I have plenty of time at work to read all I want. Again, thanks. I liked that line myself and thought that it really portrayed Dean since he can't even see that he was a victim of his childhood.
Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 9
I liked it. I could actually see and hear the boys in the word and actions. Watch for spelling errors, tho.
Author's Response: Sorry about the spelling errors. I read these stories so often as I write them that it makes it hard to find the errors when I proofread. Thanks for the review. I really appreciate the time it takes.
Reviewer: aggie rose (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 9
hey great read. It is so nice to read a completed story and not have to wait months and months for a chapter to be added.
Author's Response: I don't take a lot of time with my stories. Once they're in my head they eat at me until I can get them on paper. This one actually took me a lot longer than I had planned to - work and life got in the way. I'm glad you have enjoy reading my story and I really appreciate the time taken to review. Thanks!
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