:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: danny (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 5

Hurry up with the nxy chapter please! This is really getting gud so enjoying the story.
Poor sam though i bet your going to but him threw hell!!!

Author's Response:
put him threw hell, yep, for sure!!! but don't stress he and Dean will both be fine!! so glad ur loving it so far!!! might be a while before an update just started back at school and am a little bit busy!!!

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 3

a litle confusing. If Sam was i a net/trap he would either have had to go up or down. Good choice in choosing down by the way---much more interesting. So why is Dean walking so far away to check the other buildings???? It would have made more sense if Dean figured out where Sam was but couldn't find a way to open the trap door so he went to find another entrance.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

good start.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 27/12/07 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 5

oh man! Great story! Must you end it here?! I hope that Sammy is okay!
~Kayla

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! i will update soon and Sam will be fine......eventually!

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 27/12/07 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 5

I am not liking that little spirit girl. What did she mean that Sammy would be with them forever??? What are you up to missy. Great story, want more soon PLEASE. :)

Author's Response:
Well i'm afraid that i can't tell you what the spirit girl meant because that would give away the punch line!
i will update soon!
Thanks again!
Rosilee

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 27/12/07 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 5

I liked this chapter. It was fast paced. You had me going with the dripping. I thought it was water too. I look forward to the next chapter just watch your spelling.

Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! i think that i had most poeple going with the dripping! (at least i hope i did!) i will update soon!
Sorry about the spelling! I was a little rushed with this chapter! Will definitly do a betterjob of it next time!
Rosilee

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 27/12/07 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 5

OK...this is really great!!!!!
Sam never catches a break.Hurt again, and Dean following the sounds of his baby brother's blood dripping.....incredible work!!!
Everything is just building up the suspense-who ,what, when, where, why?????? GREAT JOB!
I like your style- you capture your readers with vivid words.
OUTSTANDING!!!
BRAVO!!

Author's Response:
Thanks so much!!! I'm really glad that you liked it! I will try to keep the other chappy's just as good!
Thanks for reviewing!
Rosilee

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 26/12/07 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 4

This chapter is fine. It flowed well.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 26/12/07 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is a good start to what seems like an interesting story.

Author's Response:
Thanks so much! i hope that my writing will keep you interested!
Thanks!
Rosilee

Reviewer: soapsuds4 (Signed) · Date: 22/12/07 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 4

i liked the chapter

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is a really good start to the story. Can't wait to read more. I hope Sammy is ok.

Author's Response:
Don't worry i love Sam so he will be fine...in the end!
Thanks for reviewing!
Rosilee

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

interesting start, look forward to seeing where the story leads. love the idea that it is set in a labyrinth. bambers;)

Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing! i don't know if the other chapters will be as good as the first couple but i will try!
Rosilee

Reviewer: sandy (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

more more more, please!!!

Author's Response:
glad you liked it! :-p
i will be posting chapter 3 soon so keep an eye out!
thanks! Rosilee

Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

Okay you have me intrigued!... Basically hooked from the moment Sam disappeared but Dean being able to hear is voice was a good twist to story... and of course can't wait for an Update!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! i can't take all the credit, i wouldn't have been able to do this without Queen of Bad! and Dean being able to hear Sam's voice was her idea so thank her! any way i'm glad you like it and chapter 2 and 3 will be up soon!

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