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Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 18/05/09 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed your story. I can see why Sam didn't want to celebrate Christmas with Dean, but in the end he did. My only complaint would be watch out for capitalization when needed. There were a whole lot of I's, Christmas, Dean, etc...that need to be capitalized. I found it distracting. Looking forwad to your next story!

Reviewer: phoenix222 (Signed) · Date: 26/02/08 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

Really cool story, great first go! Hope to read some more of your stuff in the future :)

Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

It was a good first fic. Keep writing away. You really need to check your spelling. It could turn some people off. Not too mushy, so it was like the boys - true to character.

Reviewer: Dewyeyed (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

First attempt rocks rosilee, keep it going. I dont write so I won't pick at this. Great story though, love the ending.
Dru

Author's Response:
Thanks so much! please check out my other story The Labrynth, i think its even better than this one.
Thanks so much for reveiwing!
Rosilee :0)

Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 19/12/07 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

totally rockin dude but the spelling mistakes are killing me from Lydia (not Rosilee)

Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 19/12/07 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi Honey, this is very sweet, and well done for your first fic...
I'd probably get it beta'd for spellings but with me that is pot kettle black!
"Dean loved it. he vowed that he would always keep it. however long always was." Love that line.
Well done
Dix

Author's Response:
Thanks so much! i also have to admit that my spelling sucked but when your writing at 1am who's doesn't! ;p I think that for my next fic i will check it and fix any and all mistakes! thanks so much for reviewing! it means so much to me!
p.s: i'm glad you liked that line! it took me a while to think of something that wasn't overly sentimenttal for Dean to think about it!
Thanks Again!
Rosilee

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 19/12/07 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well, i like the way you end your story, not overly sentimental, cuz that's not the way the boys really are.....
It's not off topic a lot, although a bit 'zig-zag-y', if you get my meaning, but i understand the story, so it's not bad really!!
Great job!

Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked the ending because i had a little trobule with it..... Anyway as for 'zig-zag-y' my mind was getting ahead of me when i wrote it but i'll try to slow it down next time!
Thanks so much ;p!
Rosilee

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