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Reviewer: Eternity12 (Signed) · Date: 20/12/07 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

your not thrilled with this? you should be far from disappointed my friend, that was beautifully written and it almost made me cry.
well. friggen. done. That is all there is to say!

Author's Response: teeeeeeee Thank you!

Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 19/12/07 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

that was very compelling! well done!

Author's Response: Thank you, Rosilee! *bg*

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nicely done! That sucks about the whole laptop eating the sequel. That's not fair! But this is a great story! I really enjoyed reading it!
~Kayla

Author's Response: Hi Kayla! Thank you! *bhg*

Reviewer: Danni87 (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, I really loved this one. You said everything that was captured in one look from Dean. Absolutely heart breaking. Well done.

Author's Response: *bhg* Thank you!

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

good job!

Author's Response:
Thank you! *g*

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow that was pretty deep. Loved it! it was the perfect missing scene for the end of heart

Author's Response: *bhg* Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: soapsuds4 (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow, that was so sad. i feel so bad for sam i really liked it

Author's Response: *bg* Thank you!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

this was beautiful, painful, tender, and poignant.You did an AWESOME job!!!!!!!!!!
I will watch the Heart episode , and still cry for Sam. This was the finishing piece for that episode.
You are an outstanding writer- your words paint vivid pictures-
OUTSTANDING JOB!!!!!!!!
BRAVO!!!!!!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! *bhg* *dances*

Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh please fix the laptop!
Brilliant writing..

Dix

Author's Response: lol It is fixed, I just lost everything. Thank you again! *hugs*

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

That last scene in Heart is an amazing piece of drama and acting. It stands alone as one of the best scenes in season two, for me. The fact that you could take such a firm favorite and embelish upon it , making it more vivid if anything shows your amazing skill as a writer. Your images are powerful and the emotions you convey is right on the money! Excellent work.

Author's Response:
*bhg* Thank you so much! I know, I was a goner when "Silent Lucidity" started playing. lol

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

i honestly have to say that when i first saw this i was like ugh, i am so done with Heart tags, BUT, i really really loved this one!!! it was perfect!!! beautiful job capturing the emotions of both Sam and Dean!! thanks so much for sharing and breaking my heart!! bambers;)

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for giving it a chance! I'm so glad you liked it! *bhg*

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

Easing them gently to the floor, he held his sobbing younger half, fighting his damnest not to break down with him.
His aim was true, he didn’t miss, but the bullet had ended up lodged impossibly deep in his own chest and he couldn’t breathe.

“Breathe, Sammy,” he urged, and not even realizing it, started rocking him like he was once again that five year old that Dean could save from anything.

Hey great job, lots of really good lines here, though these are my favs. Thanks for the read

Author's Response: Hi! *bhg* Thank you! Teee!

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nice job, this is really good. I liked it, especially the thought of 'watch us' just great!

Author's Response:
*bg* Thank you!

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