Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 17/12/07 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nope not sick of S1 at all. Nice job.


Author's Response: Thanks very much! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 17/12/07 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

I can honestly say i'm not tired at all of the first season tags you've been writing.. It's great to rehash the season and your take on the different episodes is great - thanks for the read - K

Author's Response: The relief! ;) thanks for the review, i'm so glad you liked this one.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 17/12/07 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

Who could possibly be tired of season 1...? great litle add on and I enjoyed it a lot...thanks for the read!

Author's Response: Yeah, good point. Glad you liked it, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Such an insightful little piece irnan, you really nail the one shot. Thanks so much for this little gem.


Author's Response: So nice of you to say so! And really, thank YOU for reviewing.

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

*let breath out* thought provoking because you took the boys parting from John that step further...

Loved how Dean honestly and matter-of-factly stated it -"Dad might be the one running around making a nuisance of himself, but you're the one they're after" Can't run from that one - big moment. This can only be told from Sam's pov and you did it with precision. 

Silent treatment analogy perfect, Sam has Dean figured out. Loved it!

You portrayed Sam's dogged determination with succinct clarity "can't keep it burning over the long haul...we'll see about that" Very cool! And I can just hear Sammy saying "charming little get togethers"

Dean's snark always matched by Sam's dry witty sarcasm "in a vague, unspecifed, you're-not-allowed-to-get-invilved kinda way" You did a great job of this, I smirked a bit here!

and yeah, my fav line that classic Dean smarta$$ "you mean...before we got him attacked by the freaky pre-Biblical demonic pitbulls your girlfriend was controllin"? Very funny, very clever.

Might only be a 888 word fic but it told an epic tale. Awesome!



Author's Response:

Oh, I concur about the POV. Season 1 is all about Sam in some pretty big ways, and "Shadow" is a bit of a turning point for him - when he realises for the first time that the Demon is hunting him back...

Glad you enjoyed the story, thanks!

Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

In my head, I could see this conversation taking place between them.  Loved the lines: “You mean… before we got him attacked by the freaky pre-Biblical demonic pitbulls your girlfriend was controllin’?” Dean quips. 

You gave a perfect snarky Dean.  Well done!!

Crystal

 



Author's Response: Snarky Dean must be the most fun thing to write since... well, Gutenberg. Glad you enjoyed this one!

Reviewer: meh (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love these short missing scenes you write. And this one is every bit as good as the others. I have a fondness for season one - still watch the DVDs regularly - and your writing gives them so much more depth. Thanks.

Author's Response: You're welcome! I just love to imagine missing scenes, and SN is the perfect show for them... glad you enjoyed this one as well.

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