Reviewer: lovinDean1979 (Signed) · Date: 22/12/07 04:39 PM · On: Prologue-Or Is It An Introduction?
I like it!! Really good place to end the chapter, going to get Dean's soul back...... and the freckles thing, how cute!!! Looking forward to the next update! S xx
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 07:12 AM · On: Prologue-Or Is It An Introduction?
the title, your pen name and the synopsis are all outstanding! You will probably get lots of hits. Be careful, the first person POV, leading with an OC and not including the main characters in the first chap. can lose readers. You were smart though, you kept the chap. short and you are a good writer. Bring the boys in soon. The story has a lot of angst potential! Curious as to which one she falls in love with. Sounds like Dean, but I'm hoping for Sam because it would make a great storyline.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 11:54 PM · On: Prologue-Or Is It An Introduction?
cool, start I like the premise - Kel
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 11:29 PM · On: Prologue-Or Is It An Introduction?
Very interesting start. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes and what brought this character into the boys lives. Love that you're writing this from her perspective! Keep t coming! Gen
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