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Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 03/09/08 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 8-Burying Ghosts

Wow, I really really liked it.  What a great story.  I am not good at reviewing, I just write how much I like a story.  Dean was so much the way I see him.  I really thank you for the story.

Reviewer: gapdragon (Signed) · Date: 20/03/08 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 7-Carry on My Wayward Son

cool

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ellen42 (Signed) · Date: 17/03/08 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 8-Burying Ghosts

Really liked your story a lot.  You gonna have a part II?



Author's Response: Yep, I think so.  Just finishing up some other stuff but I already have a plot for it.  Watch this space!

Reviewer: Supernatural24 (Signed) · Date: 27/02/08 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 8-Burying Ghosts

Wow ! Amazing story !

 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/02/08 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 8-Burying Ghosts

Love everything about it!  Very clever of Missouri to bring Dean back and the bit with the Reaper is marvelous!  I'm just sad that Sam is going to die soon. 

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 8-Burying Ghosts

nice ending, liked the reaper, and the rest... wow, hot!

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 8-Burying Ghosts

last chapter? Oh no! That was amazing, a great story. But that last line, that scary little question is such an evil way to end it! Almost sounds like a set up for a sequel?

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 23/02/08 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 8-Burying Ghosts

Wow....i can't believe they slept together!! Well, actually i can believe that...and i think this last chapter is great.......

Hopefully you'll write more soon... :)

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 23/02/08 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 8-Burying Ghosts

So let me get this right Jenni, you had BOTH Winchesters, sorry, I mean your character had BOTH Winchesters...how lucky can one woman get????lol

Great finish to a fantastic story, very well written and very original, enjoyed every chapter and will be looking out for your next project. Thanks for the read! X Louy



Author's Response: LOL!  Actually I wanted people to kind of live THROUGH Juno but yeah, I guess I did a bit of that myself! 

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 23/02/08 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 8-Burying Ghosts

very cool finish, Juno's heartfelt talk with her sister was beautiful, and I loved the reaper at the end.  And the sex scene....WOW...hm...speachless ;)

Thanks for the great read - Kel

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 23/02/08 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 8-Burying Ghosts

I'm a little sad this story is over, too, I've really enjoyed it.  Part of this chapter was a good romp, but the overall effect was bittersweet, very nicely done!  - Angela

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 8-Burying Ghosts

WOW! Ok I was jealpus before that Juno got to kiss Dean...not I am much more jealous!  What a lucky girl...both Winchesters!

This was a great story! I really liked the 1st person pov and Juno was nice and real!

I can't wait to read your next story and I have to say I am also sad to see this one end...

gen;oP

 

Reviewer: aussiescorpio (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 8-Burying Ghosts

Such a great story! Please tell me: will be a sequel? I hope so!

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 8-Burying Ghosts

WOW-WEE!!!! What a story, this chapter was brilliant, so well written with just the right emotion. Beliveable emotion from Dean too. My heart broke for Juno when she was at Hera's grave:( and that song 'burning for you' love it!! Great choice there. Liked the bit between her and the well dressed reaper;)

Fantastic first story, I am soo gobsmacked and pleased. Well done!

Schelz

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 8-Burying Ghosts

wow,wow.wow.that was fantastic.i really enjoyed reading that story. well done.

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 7-Carry on My Wayward Son

PLEASE tell me the story hasnt ended...who's watching the house, is juno in danger, will she see her sister somehow before its all over?!?

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 7-Carry on My Wayward Son

I kinda know what Sam means, fantastic seems too small to describe what I think of this chapter but it really was great.

Loved the conversation between Dean and Juno, her telling him he was a hero, like batman with a better car...hehehe

Juno kissing Dean, and bedding Sam. She's a lucky girl and yes we do want to bag both boys. LOL

Brilliant!!! And I love that song "carry on..'

Hope you're feeling better hun.

Schelz xx

 

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 6-For Whom The Bells Toll

Superb!!!  Very heart felt chapter, I felt Dean's pain when he grabbed Juno by the neck. Really felt the loss of Hera as Juno spoke about loving every little thing about her. Loved this chapter a lot!!!

Yes...Dean's back in his body!

Well done!

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 5-Comfort and confession

Great love scene, done very elegantly, made me feel their pain and desperation to blot it out.

Horror!!! Cringe moment with Missouri at the end of the bed. I love the dialogue, you write Missouri very well.

Juno loves Dean.?!? Who wouldn't eh.

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 4-The Last One Standing

Great dialogue!!! I can hear Missouri ...hehehe I really like the understanding you've created between juno and sam.

And poor Juno, losing Hera like that, especially a twin! I like the guitar tie-in.

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 2-Knockin' on Heavens Door

WOW!! A great chapter, such strong description, swimming in glue, forcing her to move her sluggish limbs. Good stuff. Juno walking amongst the dead, being stopped by lost souls, very well written!!

I liked the dialogue between Dean and Juno;)

Nooo!!! Poor Dean, I hope Juno can change his mind? Soo it's hard to guess which one she'll love seen as they're both a great catch! Hehehe

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 1-The Fallen Soldier

I am totally into this story, really growing to like Juno. Love the description of Sam and Dean, so on point!

I especially liked the description of Juno reparing Dean -little cells dancing into life, the flesh growing,  regenerating...fusing, muscles and tissues knitting together beneath my touch. .... Amazing stuff here!!

Love how Missouri is in this;)

And a good cliffe!

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 10:56 AM · On: Prologue-Or Is It An Introduction?

First of all, your name rocks!!!
 

And I am absolutely hooked not only to the unique style of your story telling but to the actual story.

Which one brother will she love? I can't wait to find out... The fact that she's a necromancer and her name is Juno and she's...well I like the sound of her already!!!

 

I will read the whole thing...I am kinda glad the chappies are short coz then I can just wizz through em' and catch up;)

Computer Demon is screwing with me, so defo read and review the rest soon.

Great start.

Schelz

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 7-Carry on My Wayward Son

Wonderful job.  This is seriously one of my favs...thanks for the read - Kel

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 7-Carry on My Wayward Son

I'm kinda sad that this story ended....i want to know what the screaming match is all about, and who was watching Missouri's house...will you have like a sequel to explain it all???



Author's Response: LOL!  Don't worry hun, the story isn't over quite yet!

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