Reviewer: okedoke (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 11:32 AM · On: Epilogue
I loved this ! Made me laugh and cry. Keep writing , your great!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I was quite stunned when this won the People's Choice awards. I had no idea it would grab so many people so strongly. Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: akumabarai (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
Damn, that was awesome. Really well done. That line "you never gave him back" - just killed me.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for that. I actually added that line in one of the final checks before I posted the chapter. I just felt that scene needed something. And it has just grabbed so many people - I'm a little awed, actually. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.....Jules
Reviewer: gidgetgal9 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 01:38 PM · On: Epilogue
This was wonderful. I had guessed Sam in the beginning but you kept changing things up enough that I started to have doubt. Edge of the seat story- and I had to read it all in a day!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad I kept you guessing - that was my evil plan - lol. But well done for guessing right the first time. There is a prequel, called Fractured, which has been posted on this site as well. Thanks for the review - I'm thrilled that it kept you enthralled....Jules
Reviewer: Sensue (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 06:53 PM · On: Epilogue
FYI - Your story has been nominated at Supernatural Fanfiction Awards - People's Choice Awards. Feel Free to Pick up a "vote for me" button and link back to the voting page to increase your votes. Congratulations.
Sensue http://sensue.net/snfa/
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that. This was a surprise. I will be sending you an email regarding this....Jules
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 07:02 PM · On: Epilogue
Great!!!!! So glad that Dean foung his baby brother and brought him back from the brink.
Author's Response: Thank you for that. And thanks for tracking this one down and reading it. And yes, Dean found Sam in the end - I do have to have my happy endings....Jules
Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 01:50 PM · On: Epilogue
Excellent story. Took me a while to catch on to the Sam persona until the hair curling and elongated face came up, but happy to have it confirmed in the end. Look forward to more of your writing. - CW
Author's Response: Thank you very much for that - I'm glad you enjoyed it. And good for you figuring out it was Sam - I tried to keep it vague until the very end, but there were clues there -well, little ones - lol....Jules
Reviewer: downbythebay (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 04:18 PM · On: Epilogue
Well, you see, I spent the rest of the story thinking that the doctor was a man... Anyway, nice little resolution, I was a little thrown by the doctor's statement that "the first personality was usually the true one." Good work.
Author's Response: Ahh, I see. Sorry about that. And I was keeping my fingers crossed throughout, hoping there weren't too many holes in my research. Thanks for the review....Jules
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 09:43 PM · On: Epilogue
Jules that story was awesome, I love the way Kayla thought the brothers were like two sides of the same coin, the same but very different. Thanks for another entertaining read, looking forward to your next story. Silvertayl
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that. And thanks for the reviews. Glad you liked it....Jules
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 14/01/08 04:38 PM · On: Epilogue
OK .... this was beyond AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You took me out totally with this one. I read it over and over- crying each time. OUTSTANDING JOB- my video mind still isn't settled. Dean carring Sam to the car- loving-heartbreaking-so much the big brother -the protector-the parent- You are the master!!!!!!!!!! BRAVO!!!!!!! IF I could I'd give you a 20+ for this one.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that. I'm a little speechless after that awesome review. Glad you loved it so much. It gave me a few bad moments, hoping the research was right with the information on the mental condition. Thank you again...Jules
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 07:24 PM · On: Epilogue
What a wonderful story! Thank you for writing and sharing it!
Author's Response: Thank you for the awesome reviews - I'm glad you enjoyed it so much...Jules
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 5
I'm so intrigued by your story that I really don't want it to end. I hope Dean gets better, but that means an end. Your writing is so emotional, so descriptive and heart-touching. The mannerisms of Bobby and the Dean pesonas are spot on! I'm awed by how perfectly you've captured the characters! I also admire the way your fictional characters (Kayla, Jim and Myra) seem to live and have developed such an affection for Dean Doe. It's amazing! I'm a devoted fan for life!
Author's Response: Wow - thank you so much for that. I must admit, when I started writing SN fanfiction, I really studied the boys - their mannerisms, their facial expressions, what they didn't say as well as what they did say. I'm glad all my "research" paid off. As for the story, well, the subject matter didn't really lend itself to a long one, like In Dreams (goodness, it'll be a long time before I do a marathon one like that again...). I'm glad you could come along for the ride...Jules
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 04:15 PM · On: Epilogue
awesome story. kept me guessing right till the end loved it.would you think about maybe doing a sequel with kayla in that would be great thanks for the read.
Author's Response: Thanks for that - a few people have asked for a sequel, and I have it on the back burner. Glad you liked this one....Jules
Reviewer: Sensue (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 12:11 PM · On: Epilogue
This was an amazing story! Wonderfully descriptive. I must admit, I thought it was Sam at first! I truly did. I Caught all the "clues" you wrote, but since you wrote that he was Dean. I thought that I was wrong. Tricky of you! Wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank you for that - and well done for spotting the clues, even though I almost got you to change your mind. Glad you enjoyed it...Jules
Reviewer: JennieC (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 09:40 AM · On: Epilogue
Quote: "I stood back from the bed, my eyes streaming as I watched my ailing patient come back from the brink. There sat the missing piece of the puzzle - the other half of himself - his big brother." This is just great. I loved it from beginning to end! I kept going back over to see wich one was actually there - and I did guess right most of the time, but a couple of times you seriously made me have my doubts! Great story - I look forward to more from you! So glad I stumbled on to here! hugs jen
Author's Response: Hi, Jen - thanks for that. Glad that I could twist you around so successfully. If you want me to email you a copy, just give me a shout - I think I still have your email address from when I sent you that copy of Remember Me. Thanks for the review - they're gold...Jules
Reviewer: SupernaturalGeek (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 12:36 PM · On: Epilogue
Perfect. I could sit here and write an essay on all the ways that was an amazing story but in the end I'm just going to go with that - total perfection, hon! I really didn't guess it was Sam but I could see it as soon as you had Dean talk about how Sam broke thinking the deal had been collected. I love btw that Dean is free & clear of that *jumps for joy* The reunion was so touching and had me welling up. After all that they so deserved one little chick-flick moment.. It's funny though, I've thought for a long time that they really are two sides of one coin and now you've gone and beat me to the punch by using it in your story.. Damn.. *winks* Kayla said it all when she realised Sam just needs Dean for everything to be ok, and vice versa of course. It was a nice touch having them meet up six months later too. I absolutely LOVED this one (in case you hadn't guessed) and it was great to read all the Aussie/Brit terms as well for a change! Amazing job.. Just amazing *bows to Jules awesomness* :)
Author's Response: Thank you Michaela - sorry I stole your thunder a little... I'm glad you loved it so much - and as for the deal, well you know I'm keeping everything crossed that two things happen - Dean gets out of the deal and Sam doesn't turn evil. Thanks for the awesome review...Jules
Reviewer: wolfsnight (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 09:21 AM · On: Epilogue
Wow, this story and this chapter are just amazing. The character study and the mystery of which brother was actually the one in the hospital was both intriguing and thrilling. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you for that, and thanks for reading - glad you enjoyed it...Jules
Reviewer: Danni87 (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 04:01 AM · On: Epilogue
Jules,
This was an amazing story, you did really well. Can't give you enough praise. I loved it, and I loved that it was Sam who was the broken one, not Dean.
AMAZING, AMAZING, AMAZING!!!!!
Reviewer: Danni87 (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 03:58 AM · On: Epilogue
Jules,
This was an amazing story, you did really well. Can't give you enough praise. I loved it, and I loved that it was Sam who was the broken one, not Dean.
AMAZING, AMAZING, AMAZING!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you Danni, and thanks again for your help. Glad you liked it so much....Jules
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 02:42 AM · On: Epilogue
I have just finished this and i was blown away... Your writing is brilliant, your characters spot on. "There sat the missing piece of the puzzle - the other half of himself - his big brother. " What else can i say - thank you! Dix
Author's Response: Wow - thank you so very much Dix. I'm glad you were so captivated. And I truly believe that one brother would not survive without the other - well, we saw that at the end of season 2, with Dean. And I am sure that Sam would shatter if he lost his big brother. Thanks for the awesome review...Jules
Reviewer: deansdreamingangel (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 10:23 PM · On: Epilogue
Wonderful story! I didn't even see the hints at all. I thought it was Dean. Loved your character, Kayla. One of the best non-SPN character I've read! XDFavorite story of course!
Author's Response: Oh my goodness! Thank you! I'm thrilled that you loved it so much. It's certainly quite different from anything I've written before, and I'l glad I could keep everyone guessing with all the twists - thanks so much...Jules
Reviewer: supernaturaldh (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 09:28 PM · On: Epilogue
Awesome story, and wonderful ending. Thank you for a great ride!!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. Glad you could come along for it. And thanks so much for the reviews - they are gold...Jules
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 5
Oh wow - "you never gave him back" - I hope YOU never really give them back either - what you do with the boys is astounding original and true to the characters at the same time. Take a bow!
Author's Response: There's that line again - I'm really thrilled that everyone loved that line - and amazed, as it was added at the last minute. Lol - I would love to keep the boys, but I think Kripke would object...and thank you - coming from a fellow author, that means so much to me....Jules
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 07:35 PM · On: Epilogue
THat was great!!! What a twist! (I liked your review of the clues!!) I really was hooked. I'm gonna send a link to your story to a coworker.....she's a nurse and will love reading it, too!!! Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you - thought I'd threw the clues in and see how many got them - but I missed the ones about the eyes being hazel - my beta picked that up. Oh - wow, thank you for that - hope she forgives any errors I've made in the medical bits - I'm just a humble bookkeeper. Thanks for reading...Jules
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 06:32 PM · On: Epilogue
AAAHHHH! OH.MY.GOD! how could i have been sooo blind? well one thing is for certain... you did an awesome, awesome job!
Author's Response: Aww, don't worry - I played with everyone's minds on this one. Even had my beta fooled... Thank you so much, and thanks for the review ....Jules
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 05:07 PM · On: Epilogue
I just finished this story and I want you to know that this is probably my favorite of your stories and I have read many, since your stories are some of my favorites. You had me guessing right to the end and just when I thought I had it figured out you would throw a curve in there. That was great. You also nailed the brothers and there relationship. That was great, too. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. I enjoy your work.
Author's Response: Hello, hon! You're over here too! Aww, thank you so very much for that - that means a lot. And dont' worry, I'll keep writing - there are about 12 works in progress in my folder, so I won't run out in a hurry - LOL. Thanks for reading - I'm thrilled it grabbed your attention so much...Jules
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