Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed)
21/12/07 08:17 AM · On:
ahhhh! you're evil! please update soon! awesome awesome chapter!
Author's Response: I am? Good grief - someone get the holy water....lol! Well, if you mean those tiny little cliffies, well, yes, I am evil *hangs head*. And there are a couple more of them up my sleeve before we reach the end. Hope you can hang around - and the next update is very soon...Jules
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed)
21/12/07 07:22 AM · On:
I have to admit I was a little unsure about reading this one. I don't do well with amnesia/mental health/psych stories--they bother me for some reason. But I've really enjoyed what you've written so far.
Author's Response: I agree - some stories I am not sure of either. But this one got into my head and rattled around in there banging away until I sat down and began to type away. I hope you can stick around till the epilogue, when all will be revealed....and thanks so much for reading, and for reviewing...Jules
Reviewer: Little_angel_666 (Signed)
21/12/07 06:21 AM · On:
i thinks i'm gonna like this one!! Great 1st and 2nd chapter. Poor Dean losing his marbles, bless him.
Keep up the good work and i can't wait for the next update!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much - and welcome. I'm chuffed that you like this one - and the next update is loads earlier than planned, thanks to Fredo, Lam and Kwater begging me complete with puppy dog eyes, and then me begging my beta with Sam pics..lol....Jules
Reviewer: Danni87 (Signed)
21/12/07 05:23 AM · On:
Wow, I'm really liking this story. As a fellow Aussie I love the little Aussie idisyncrasies that you give the Dr. Any time you want a hand with the psyc stuff let me know, just finished my psyc degree. Loving the work, cant wait for the next chapter. (And I'd like to see John try to go up against Aussie ANZAC blood.)
Author's Response: Thank you, Danni - there is an email on its way to you. I had a whale of a time with my beta (who's a Pom) on this one - I had to keep reminding her that Kayla is an Aussie, and she really would say this as opposed to that. She's so used to making sure I say things the American way, like asphalt instead of bitumen, and stuff like that. It was nice to have a character that talks like I do - sort of like a little holiday. Glad you liked it, and congrats on your degree...Jules (and John goes up against that ANZAC blood in the next chapter - let's see how far he gets...lol)
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed)
21/12/07 05:12 AM · On:
Wow, just wow Jules! What an amazing story so far, touching, emotional, very well written! You make me want to reach out for Dean so bad. OMG, what happened to Sam that Dean believes he is dead and became so desperate and completely shut down? I love the sensitive way you portray the doctor, I liked her instantly. There are so many lines I'd love to quote - just spot on. I am really looking forward to more. Thank you and Happy Holidays!
P.S.: Happy "Birthday" - one year of writer's perfection :)
Author's Response: Awww, thank you for my 'birthday' wishes - lol. Merry Christmas to you, too, and I hope you like the little twist to chapter 3. As for where Sam is, that will be revealed in a later chapter - a few twists and turns to go before then, but rest assured, he's not far....Jules
Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed)
21/12/07 02:30 AM · On:
This story's so sad - just makes me cry
Look forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you - sorry I made you sad - I'd better make sure of my usual happy ending, then, eh? Next chapter is on its way - and there's a new twist...Jules
Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed)
21/12/07 01:30 AM · On:
i love the way that its from the doctors POV rather than Deans or Sams or even Johns. well done!
Author's Response: Thank you, Rosilee - and welcome. I'm glad you love it. Another twist comes in chapter 3...Jules
Reviewer: SupernaturalGeek (Signed)
18/12/07 06:11 AM · On:
Wow, this is getting really interesting! I don't know why but I guessed it was Dean, although you did a good job of making it difficult to tell till the end. There was just something about the way you described him moving and the look in his eyes that said 'Dean' to me though, so kudos for getting him in character even from such an unusual perspective! I really like the doctor and I hope she can help him soon. I'm really curious as to what's happened, and where the heck Sam is. I can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Michaela! Glad I could keep you guessing. As for where Sam is - well, all I can say is...all will be revealed - hope you like chapter 2...Jules
Reviewer: meh (Signed)
17/12/07 01:58 PM · On:
Great beginning - with your talent, this can only be the start of a fantastic story. I'm really looking forward to finding out what happened to poor Dean.
Author's Response: Why thank you! Hope you like all the twists and turns...Jules
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed)
16/12/07 11:03 PM · On:
One flew over the coo coo's nest? A great start! Looking forward to more - Angela
Author's Response: Thanks Angela. I finally made it over to your My Name Is Jessica, and I loved it! Thanks for reviewing this one. More on the way...Jules
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed)
16/12/07 09:31 AM · On:
good job keep them coming please
congrates on the annivsery
Author's Response: Thanks for that. And as ordered, here's chapter 2 for you - hope you like...Jules
Reviewer: deansdreamingangel (Signed)
15/12/07 07:57 PM · On:
OMG! Dean, what happened to you?! Wow. You just made my heart break. XD
Author's Response: What happened to Dean will be revealed slowly over the next few chapters - hope you can stick around - and thank you so much for all the pretty stars!...Jules
Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed)
15/12/07 05:20 AM · On:
i'm intrigued! more please!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL - more as ordered. Glad you're enjoying it - hope you like the next chapter too...Jules
Reviewer: DeeUnNatural (Signed)
15/12/07 12:53 AM · On:
Im liking it. I hope you plan to write Sammy in soon. Dying to know what happened to Dean.
Author's Response: Dean's story comes out in bits and pieces - hang around, things get interesting very soon....Jules - ooh, and thank you for the review and the stars - I love stars....
Reviewer: SUPERNATANGEL67 (Signed)
14/12/07 11:38 PM · On:
Love it so far!!!! Can't wait till update.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you love it - and hope you like the next chapter...Jules
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed)
14/12/07 08:34 PM · On:
Fredo recced this story. Telling it from the doctor's POV is interesting. I'm curious to see more and what you do with it.
Author's Response: I am honoured. Thank you for that. More is coming very soon - hope you like the next chapter...Jules
Reviewer: fredo (Signed)
14/12/07 05:23 PM · On:
awesome start Jules! Past midnight here but just couldn't resist. Can't wait to read more. Thank god i know you're not doing death fics, cause Dean being that bad, could imagine Sam's death did that. But Sam's somewhere right?.. And too cool to write an aussie heroine, you can just be yourself and use all this funny slang. Oh and by the way, happy birthday, let me tell you that you show amazing writing skills for a one year old!!
Author's Response: Thank you hon - and thanks for those beautiful bribes you sent through. And no, I could never do a death fic - I want both boys to live. Dean's trauma will be revealed over the next few chapters, but there will be a few twists. Oh thanks - yes, I'm quite an advanced one year old - LOL. Thanks for recommending this, hon. You're awesome...Jules
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed)
14/12/07 02:23 PM · On:
wow great start can't wait for the nexy part
Author's Response: Thanks Lorraine - glad you could come along for the ride. Chapter two will be up on Friday night my time, and it will have a surprising twist....Jules
Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed)
14/12/07 02:19 PM · On:
Hey this is great - looking forward to the next instalment
Author's Response: Thank you, Rachel, and welcome to the craziness that is one of my stories. And this one is certainly going to be crazy - well, twisty. I'm chuffed that you enjoyed it, and I hope you can hang around for the finale - which is a few weeks away yet.....Jules
Reviewer: kwater (Signed)
14/12/07 12:57 PM · On:
Happy Anniversary, Jules, hard to believe, huh.
Great start to the story, must be nice to write an Aussie heroine, let's you be a little more you..lol. I cannot wait to see what's going on with Dean, and I'm almost afraid to find out where Sam is... -As always i look forward to more - K
Author's Response: Thanks, Kelly - yes, it is hard to believe that a year ago, I was a nervous wreck as I posted my first story on sn.tv, and anxiously waiting for the replies. I find it hilariously funny that the very first review was from a girl calling herself Arielmarie - and now I am beta-ing her first story. She's a great kid - er, young woman. And yes, it's nice to write as me - well, as me if I was a doctor. I actually had to keep reminding my beta when she suggested changing Kayla's dialogue, that Kayla is an Aussie, and she really would talk like that - LOL. As for Dean and Sam - well, let's just say that it will be an interesting ride, with a few twists and turns along the way....Jules
Reviewer: mtee (Signed)
14/12/07 11:57 AM · On:
Wow, this is interesting.
Can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Why, thank you. It gets even more interesting in chapter 2. Someone new is added to the mix....Jules
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed)
14/12/07 10:53 AM · On:
LOL. This is great....And you are right to set it in the future...i dun think the story would have worked well in the present day....
Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for that, and no, you're right, the storyline wouldn't have worked in present day. Only trouble is, with Dean's year rapidly running out, in a few months of real time this story will be in the present - LOL. Glad you're enjoying this, and hope you can stick around for the twists coming up...Jules
Reviewer: catchme21 (Signed)
14/12/07 09:28 AM · On:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! You started a new one!!! Sweet!
Okay, so I found out I could get to this site from work, so this is gonna be a short review.
Lol is it sad that when 'John Doe' got tasered, I was thinkin' "don't tase me bro!" and laughing? (Lol if you're not sure check that out on YouTube)
Where's Sam? Ooooooooo...the only thing saving you right now is "I don't do death fics".
Update soon hun!
Kris!!! How are you, hon? I will have to check out that on YouTube. I actually did a bit of taser research for Resort Breagadoir, before I had the frisky sauna gal taser Dean. Got to love research. And I found a video of three young blokes getting tasered by some cops as a training thing. It was rather funny, seeing the boys' reactions. And we find out where Sam is in later chapters...or do we? *evil laugh*.
Actually when you quoted one of my golden rules, you forgot the one that applies to this story - I like to play with your minds....Jules
Reviewer: lam (Signed)
14/12/07 09:10 AM · On:
WOW!!! This is AWESOME!!!! I love how you are telling it from the Doctor's pov, so we only learn things as he does - this is just soooo well written.... You totally had me going at first - loved you playing with the height thing - is it Sam? is it Dean? hair half short, half long..... you TEASE!!!! I gasped out loud when he wanted to call him John, because I forgot for a secong that, of course, that would be logical as he was admitted as John Doe. I can't wait to find out how Dean got here.... I'm thinking it might have something to do with going to hell... that would probably unsettle you a tad.... So I do need an explanation for sparrow fart - I'm thinking this is an expression that Canadians need to start using.....
Author's Response: Hi, Lisa! Long time no hear - guess real life has taken you out as well. Yes, I am really playing with your minds with this one. Is it Dean or is it Sam - or someone else? I've never done a fist person pov story before, and of course, I just had to make my doctor an Aussie. And yes, we will discover what happens as Kayla keeps digging into her mystery patient's past - and there are a few surprises. As for sparrow fart - well, it actually means really, really early in the morning. In the wee hours - sparrows are little birds, which means they have little wee farts - so sparrow fart is in the wee hours of the day. I could start using Aussie slang - hmm, that would really confuse everyone....lol. Thanks for the awesome review, hon...Jules
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed)
14/12/07 09:06 AM · On:
Okay so..you got me, hook, line, sinker and copy of angling times!
I am desperate for the update to this mizpah, almost tempted to cancel my holiday (no internet) so I don't miss your next update...
Awesome read so far...
Author's Response: Oh, hon - don't cancel your holidays!! I'll be sticking to my regular Friday night (Aussie time) updates, as work is a little busy in the lead up to Christmas. Hook, line and sinker - AND a copy of angling times?? LOL - I love that. Glad you loved it so much - and there are a few more twists coming up before we get to the end.....Jules