I have to admit I was a little unsure about reading this one.  I don't do well with amnesia/mental health/psych stories--they bother me for some reason.  But I've really enjoyed what you've written so far.

Author's Response: I agree - some stories I am not sure of either. But this one got into my head and rattled around in there banging away until I sat down and began to type away. I hope you can stick around till the epilogue, when all will be revealed....and thanks so much for reading, and for reviewing...Jules

Wow, I'm really liking this story. As a fellow Aussie I love the little Aussie idisyncrasies that you give the Dr. Any time you want a hand with the psyc stuff let me know, just finished my psyc degree. Loving the work, cant wait for the next chapter. (And I'd like to see John try to go up against Aussie ANZAC blood.)

Author's Response: Thank you, Danni - there is an email on its way to you. I had a whale of a time with my beta (who's a Pom) on this one - I had to keep reminding her that Kayla is an Aussie, and she really would say this as opposed to that. She's so used to making sure I say things the American way, like asphalt instead of bitumen, and stuff like that. It was nice to have a character that talks like I do - sort of like a little holiday. Glad you liked it, and congrats on your degree...Jules (and John goes up against that ANZAC blood in the next chapter - let's see how far he gets...lol)

This story's so sad - just makes me cry

Look forward to the next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you - sorry I made you sad - I'd better make sure of my usual happy ending, then, eh? Next chapter is on its way - and there's a new twist...Jules

Wow, this is getting really interesting! I don't know why but I guessed it was Dean, although you did a good job of making it difficult to tell till the end. There was just something about the way you described him moving and the look in his eyes that said 'Dean' to me though, so kudos for getting him in character even from such an unusual perspective! I really like the doctor and I hope she can help him soon. I'm really curious as to what's happened, and where the heck Sam is. I can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Michaela! Glad I could keep you guessing. As for where Sam is - well, all I can say is...all will be revealed - hope you like chapter 2...Jules

One flew over the coo coo's nest?  A great start!  Looking forward to more - Angela

Author's Response: Thanks Angela. I finally made it over to your My Name Is Jessica, and I loved it! Thanks for reviewing this one. More on the way...Jules

OMG! Dean, what happened to you?! Wow. You just made my heart break. XD

Author's Response: What happened to Dean will be revealed slowly over the next few chapters - hope you can stick around - and thank you so much for all the pretty stars!...Jules

Im liking it.  I hope you plan to write Sammy in soon.  Dying to know what happened to Dean.

Author's Response: Dean's story comes out in bits and pieces - hang around, things get interesting very soon....Jules - ooh, and thank you for the review and the stars - I love stars....

Fredo recced this story. Telling it from the doctor's POV is interesting. I'm curious to see more and what you do with it. 

Author's Response: I am honoured. Thank you for that. More is coming very soon - hope you like the next chapter...Jules

wow great start can't wait for the nexy part

Lorraine

Author's Response: Thanks Lorraine - glad you could come along for the ride. Chapter two will be up on Friday night my time, and it will have a surprising twist....Jules

Happy Anniversary, Jules, hard to believe, huh. 

 Great start to the story, must be nice to write an Aussie heroine, let's you be a little more you..lol.  I cannot wait to see what's going on with Dean, and I'm almost afraid to find out where Sam is... -As always i look forward to more - K

 

Author's Response: Thanks, Kelly - yes, it is hard to believe that a year ago, I was a nervous wreck as I posted my first story on sn.tv, and anxiously waiting for the replies. I find it hilariously funny that the very first review was from a girl calling herself Arielmarie - and now I am beta-ing her first story. She's a great kid - er, young woman. And yes, it's nice to write as me - well, as me if I was a doctor. I actually had to keep reminding my beta when she suggested changing Kayla's dialogue, that Kayla is an Aussie, and she really would talk like that - LOL. As for Dean and Sam - well, let's just say that it will be an interesting ride, with a few twists and turns along the way....Jules

LOL. This is great....And you are right to set it in the future...i dun think the story would have worked well in the present day....

Can't wait for the next chapter. :) 

Author's Response: Thank you for that, and no, you're right, the storyline wouldn't have worked in present day. Only trouble is, with Dean's year rapidly running out, in a few months of real time this story will be in the present - LOL. Glad you're enjoying this, and hope you can stick around for the twists coming up...Jules

WOW!!! This is AWESOME!!!! I love how you are telling it from the Doctor's pov, so we only learn things as he does - this is just soooo well written.... You totally had me going at first - loved you playing with the height thing - is it Sam? is it Dean? hair half short, half long..... you TEASE!!!! I gasped out loud when he wanted to call him John, because I forgot for a secong that, of course, that would be logical as he was admitted as John Doe. I can't wait to find out how Dean got here.... I'm thinking it might have something to do with going to hell... that would probably unsettle you a tad.... So I do need an explanation for sparrow fart - I'm thinking this is an expression that Canadians need to start using..... 

Author's Response: Hi, Lisa! Long time no hear - guess real life has taken you out as well. Yes, I am really playing with your minds with this one. Is it Dean or is it Sam - or someone else? I've never done a fist person pov story before, and of course, I just had to make my doctor an Aussie. And yes, we will discover what happens as Kayla keeps digging into her mystery patient's past - and there are a few surprises. As for sparrow fart - well, it actually means really, really early in the morning. In the wee hours - sparrows are little birds, which means they have little wee farts - so sparrow fart is in the wee hours of the day. I could start using Aussie slang - hmm, that would really confuse everyone....lol. Thanks for the awesome review, hon...Jules