Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 3
knew it was coming.....but I still really like it. You worked the details well with the varied hair lengths, alternating heights and eye color. I'm guessing its really Sam since 'Dean' seems a bit to emo to be the real Dean.....but I like not knowing for sure yet. You said it nots a death fic so does that mean both boys are going to be ok in the end? It does, right? Right?!
Author's Response: Well, we won't know for sure until the epilogue, so I hope you can hang around for it. And yes, it's definitely not a death fic - I don't write those. I want my happy endings. Call me naive, but I want both boys to walk away after the war, together, as they should be...Jules
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 3
Amazing! Getting the personalities to talk---that should be interesting since they couldn't talk when they were three separate people. I can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Absolutely - it's going to be a formidable task for our Aussie doc - let's see if she's up to the challenge...Jules
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 2
Whew! For a minute I thought you'd broken your pattern and written a death fic. *Big sigh of relief!* Excellent story! I love your descriptions and the perceptions you explain! This is a delight to read (well, so I delight in Dean's pain)!
Author's Response: Ooh, heavens, no. I would seriously like someone to shoot me if I ever do - apologies to those writers who do it, but I hate death fics. No, both brothers are alive - well, one is in dire trouble, but the other one is getting closer, trust me...Jules
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 3
Jules - Thank you for the wonderful update and have the very merriest of Chirstmas. Now that I know the power of the puppy eyes I promise to only use them for the good of mankind (or to wrestle reluctant writers to post) That being said, you enjoy your holiday and know that I"m waiting patiently...well, I mean you know pretty patiently...I mean i only have to wait till Friday right and today's Sunday so like that's not too bad....*taps finger* yeah I mean I can do five days...yeah, yeah, of course I can...*looks around the room*...Well, Uh, I guess I'll take off...five days huh. I can do it, no problem.. I think I can ;)
Author's Response: Hi, Kel - I have been assured that the power of my puppy dog eyes will no longer work against my beta (heavy sigh)... might have to borrow Sam for a wee while - that will work on her, she's a Sammy girl. LOL - well, the wait's over - here's the update....Jules
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 3
Yep, I'm still sticking around and I'm glad I am. This was a great update. Thanks for the early holiday present. Merry Christmas!
Author's Response: Thanks Vanessa. Hope you like the next one just as much. A little more information is revealed...and I hope you had a good Christmas...Jules
Reviewer: Taliena (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great story! I'm loving the twists - keeping me on the edge of my seat. As a fellow Aussie, I am also enjoying the translations, my favourite so far being the elevator/lift paragraph. Looking forward to your next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks for that - it's nice to write in my own language, as it were, for a change. To say lift instead of elevator, biscuit instead of cookie, and a hundred other things that translate a little differently across the oceans. Speaking of oceans - I just have to indulge in a tiny shout of Queenslander! as Wild Oats XI just won the Sydney to Hobart (not gloating, honest). Hope you like the next chappy - and thanks for reading...Jules
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oh......ok, this twist is interesting.... So who does the body belong to???????? Dean or Sam??? I assume it can't be John cuz he's dead, but your story is twisted so i guess anything is possible..... :)
Author's Response: LOL - thank you for that. I'm glad I am successfully playing with your mind. So, you haven't picked up on the clues, eh? Well, see how you go with chapter 4...and thanks so much for reading...Jules
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 3
Blimey! Roll on 4! DIx
Author's Response: Thank you, Dix - sorry I got your name wrong in my first reply. Glad you're sticking with it. A couple more twists coming up before the finale...Jules
Reviewer: catchme21 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 2
So, I'm on dial-up. Do you know how long it took for me to get here? I don't think you do...it was FOREVER...lol. But so freakin' worth it! So she broke through to him just a bit, only to have John come through. You know, I imitate my mom a lot, but this takes it to a whole 'nother level. I knew it had to be because Dean thought Sam was dead. But I knew you didn't do death fics, so there lies my confusion. I'm anxious to hear what happened, and how the psychiatrist is going to get it out of him. I loved the addition Jules! No wonder you have so many reviews already! Pure genius! Loves hun,
Kris
Author's Response: Hullo, gorgeous! So you braved the slow-as-a-wet-week dial up, eh? Glad I have confused you, hon. And I intend to confuse you a hell of a lot more before the epilogue - *laughs evilly*. As for the reviews - I'm a bit surprised actually. It's such a little fic... Anyway, hope you can brave the dial-up again, hon, as I am about to post chapter 3...take care. *hugs* Jules
Reviewer: supernaturaldh (Signed) · Date: 22/12/07 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 2
Love this story. Can't wait to see what happened to Sam. superanaturaldh
Author's Response: Thank you for that. I must say, I printed out your Struggling Just To Breathe, and it reduces me to tears every time I read it - such powerful stuff. Glad you love this one so much. As for Sam, well, he's not far away....Jules
Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 22/12/07 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 2
Yep, I like the twist, Dean and John. Can't wait for more. Merry christmas to you.
Author's Response: And Merry Christmas to you too, hon. Well, if you like that twist, you'll love the next one...Jules
Reviewer: deansdreamingangel (Signed) · Date: 22/12/07 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 2
man, you made me cry and laugh in a matter of three seconds. Dean with DID, if it IS really that, or something else. and then that author's note. XD P.S. sorry it took me a while to review the site won't let me put you as a favorite and on story alert.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks for that - sorry I made you cry. I have had that happen too, with the site not letting me put an author as a favourite - but with me being a techie nightmare, I think it might have been something I did, or didn't do... More will be revealed in upcoming chapters...Jules
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 2
Right..... Dean has a split personality???? OMG. That's freakier than i thought it would be....
Author's Response: Right...lol. Oh, stick around - it gets freakier. More on its way...Jules
Reviewer: JennieC (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 2
Really good stuff. I am anxious for another chapter - I want to know what happened!! More, please! hugs jen
Author's Response: Hullo, Jen! I haven't spoken to you in ages! Thanks for that - glad you are enjoying it. More twists planned, as well as more information revealed as Kayla chips away at her broken, withdrawn patient. Chapter 3 on its way...Jules
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow! I love this story! It's refreshing to read a story written in the first person. I have tons of questions, but I'm sure they'll all be answered in future chapters.
Author's Response: Well, you just ask away, hon. I can't promise I will answer all of them, especially if it gives away the plot, but I promise I will be annoyingly vague - LOL. Thank you for that - I'm pleased you are enjoying it so much. This one was a quick one to write, and it was fun having a character that talks like me....Jules
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 2
right
Author's Response: Right - LOL! Oh, dear - well, stick around, all will be revealed. We discover what happened to the Winchesters over the next few chapters...Jules
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 2
This is awesome, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you for that - here's an early update, just because it's Christmas - hope you enjoy...Jules
Reviewer: PNutMnM (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 2
great story so far, really lovin it! so much angst. glad to know sam isn't dead too
Author's Response: No, Sam isn't dead - I want both boys to walk away unharmed at the end of the series - I don't want either of them to die, or to turn evil. I need a happy ending. Call me Pollyanna... Thanks for the review - stick around, things get a little freakier....Jules
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 2
There's lots of mind playing going on. Bringing John in - hmmmm. It was fun to feel something going on when the scruffy beard brought on a smile -- I thought Dean was thinking of his father - but for John to appear -- you also say Dean is 6'2" if he's an inch -- that's taller than Dean - not as tall as Sam. Daddy W is taller than Dean. Now I'm getting confused. Sensuous lips are definitely Dean as well as the green eyes. No matter - I love this!
Author's Response: Thank you for that - yes, I do love to play with people's minds, and I am having a ball with this one. Hope you can stay tuned till the epilogue. We have a few more little twists to go before then...Jules
Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 2
I'm still not entirely sure it's Dean in the nuthouse, I'm thinking it may just be Sam, but that's just me. Update soon, please!
Author's Response: So, you think it's Sam, eh? Well, it could be, or it could be Dean, or it could be someone else entirely. Time will tell...lol...Jules
Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
Amazing story. I'm really glad I caught it in the most recent or I never would have even known it was there. Now that it's favorited though, I will be anxiously waiting for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you for that! I tend to fly under the radar for the most part - just post and shoot through again. Glad you caught it. And more is on the way. Hope you like the new twist...Jules
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 2
This was totally awesome! Once the writers are back, could you please apply to Kripke? Can you just imagine how Jensen would knock this out of the park??? You could play yourself.... ;) I am totally LOVING this story... Perfect that John would be the first personality to jump out... Poor George! Loved him too... So - I'm thinking that Sam has to be a personality at some point - what better way to bring back those you think you've killed???? Is he also going to channel Mary? That would be pretty cool too.... I am on tenterhooks of course, but I know you wouldn't kill Sam, so.... Where the hell is he???? I shall join all the others in encouraging you to post at least a little closer to xmas than Friday....(I know, I know, people who live in glass houses.....) Have a VERY Merry Christmas - and don't let people fool ya - a white Christmas ain't all it's cracked up to be....
Author's Response: And here's my third puppy dog eyes person - lol. Thanks, Lisa - glad you are loving it. Yes, Dean is on an interesting ride. No, Mary won't make an appearance, but there is a third personality coming soon. And no, I would never kill Sam, or Dean - not without a very good backup plan to bring them right back to life again. Sam's not far away, trust me...Jules
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 2
Jules Jules Jules, you're an evil player! OMG WTH is going on here??!! So we're waiting of at least one more personality huh... A chance to see Sammy in the next chapter then... Next chapter coming tomorrow right?... Crap, next friday, really? I'm not know around here to be the most patient person you know. Okay okay, next friday then. Have a nice hot and sunny Christmas, and if you see Santa in his flip flops, take a pic and send it my way!
Author's Response: Fredo, Fredo, Fredo - no I'm not - I'm just twisted... Next chapter coming Sunday night, my time, thanks to your begging and pleading. And I know your patience has its limits. So here is your reward for bombarding me with drool-worthy Dean pics - ahh, you know my weakness, hon. And I will keep a lookout for Santa in a pair of stubbies and thongs, just for you....Jules
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 2
Love it! I love anything that looks into the pysche of the brothers! Sam had better be out there looking for his brother! Great story. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you for that, and welcome. Rest assured, Sam is not far away....Jules
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 2
Jules I totally and completely respect your decision to post only once a week.. That being said you can ignore this next bit of ranting, I just couldn't contain it.... WTF is going on, OH MY GOD, I want more and I want it now!!!!!!! I'm thumping my heels on the floor like my Two year old.. I'm telling you chick, I'm gonna hold my breath until you post..... There, so sorry I just had to get it out of my system, I hope you enjoy your christmas with Santa in his flip flops, I guess I'll go back to chapter one and re-read to help pass the time till next Friday. Have the very Merriest of Christmas - Kel
Author's Response: Kelly, I totally respect the fact that you totally respect my decision, and I appreciate that you couldn't help but use the puppy eyes on me the other morning. But you know what a softie I am...so I went surfing JP sites, grabbed some hot pics, and bribed my beta, so here is chapter 3, as begged for - I mean, as ordered - wished - oh, hell, you know what I mean. Stop thumping your heels. And stop holding your breath - although after you read chapter 3, you might just start thumping the walls - LOL.....Jules
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