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Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 4

Fantastiv update and no I'm not confused at all, just very keen to read next chapter...And how did I know John was going to be a jerk about this!

Can't wait to see how you get them all talking and what the deal is with Sam and John...are they alive? dead? all in there together in one mass family posession? Now that would be kinda cool...

No more second guessing, I'm just going to be patient and wait for next friday...

Still absolutely loving this!



Author's Response: So, you've figured out who it is, eh? Good for you. Thanks for the review...Jules

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 4

Dynamite and matches---what a wonderfule analogy!  Thanks for throwing in the chalk and cheese and other Australian bits.  I appreciate the education about your culture as well as DID.

Well, we all knew John would be the difficult one, but I didn't imagine he was the one who caused Dean's mental trauma.

Please post again soon!  I can't get enough of this marvelous, intriguing story!



Author's Response: That's quite all right - we use chalk & cheese quite a lot when describing things that don't mix. And yes, it was inevitable that John would throw a spanner into the works....Jules

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 4

i can't believe we'll have to wait till next year to get another chapter. That's cruel Jules... Anyway, this,  "That line was rather familiar. Just Sam - brother to Just Dean, and son of That's Not Important John. What a family.", i just loved this line, so sad. and this,  "I tried another analogy. "Oil and water."

"Try dynamite and matches," he muttered softly.",  excellent. And so John won't help, can't wait to learn more. And where the hell is the second real brother, a whole month?! Yeah yeah, answers next year right...



Author's Response: Yep, you do have to wait till next year - which is only a few days away, actually. The second real brother is getting closer, but our patient has a bit of a rough road ahead...Jules

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 4

So you meant to say that anyone who has DID will see themselves in the mirror? That's interesting...i always thought that you can see the other person in the mirror then you can know that you are nuts...LOL

Your warning is duly noted. Waiting in trepidation...... 



Author's Response: Well, is it really DID... Actually, I'm not sure who the person with DID would see in the mirror, but for the purpose of my exercise, I took poetic licence and made the boys see themselves. The reason will be revealed in the epilogue - stick with me....Jules

Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 4

Yeah, this is really getting very interesring.  Can't wait to see where it's going.  Great idea for a story.

Author's Response: Thank you for that. A scary twist coming up....Jules

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 4

When you say "Things take a bad turn from here on in..." I'm assuming you mean the next chapter and then we will start to see Dean getting better? or real Sammy to the rescue???? Wow - just wow. This is just a tour de force! I love this story - your characterizations are awesome - you still have me doubting that it is really Dean... Loved that they each saw themselves in the mirror. Trust John to be a stubborn ass to the end, though. I am definitely thinking it is Dean though - due to all your clues - Kayla does believe it is Dean because he was the first to manifest and of course Dean would withdraw and become non-reponsive as a first response to trauma as he did when Mary died.... Are you off for the holidays? Maybe a chapter before next Friday??? Puppy eyes..... ;)



Author's Response: I am off for the holidays, but I have a ton of stuff to do around the house before I go back to work next week, sorry. Thanks for the review - I'm glad you love this so much. And when I say things take a turn for the worse, I mean that our patient has quite a rough ride ahead of him...and the other brother is getting closer....Jules

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 2

Fabulous update, oh good a next button. Many thanks Lorraine

Author's Response: Thanks, Lorraine - glad you could come along for the ride...Jules

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 4

The perspective that Sam taking his coffee with cream and sugar made him a rebel was too cool! You would think that a black coffee drinker would be a rebel--but not in the Winchester family. Sam really is the blonde chick from the Adams Family:) 

I know you said you aren't a medical expert but just as an FYI.... DID is NOT the same thing as schizophrenia.



Author's Response: Thanks for that - and I think that line about schizophrenia didn't come across as clearly as it should have. I know there is a vast difference from the research I did, but I also discovered that what most people label schizophrenia, is actually DID. Schizophrenia is something entirely different to what we think it is. Sorry the line in chapter 4 was a bit vague on that point. And yes, Sam really is like the blonde girl from the Addams Family - lol.....Jules

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 4

Just Sam - brother to Just Dean, and son of That's Not Important John. What a family - LOVED this line... You're just drawing this out and I love ya for it...lol.  Great story and I eagerly await next Friday

Author's Response: Thanks for that - next chapter will be a bit nail-biting - and we see another familiar face, but a real person this time, not a manifestation - let's see if you can pick who it is...Jules

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh, boy, I can't wait to see what happens next.  A bad turn, eh?  Yikes.

Author's Response: A bad turn, yes - our patient has a rough time ahead of him as Kayla tries to make them all talk....Jules

Reviewer: SupernaturalGeek (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 4

Ok, either I am really dense or you are REALLY good. And I am going with the second one (and not just cos it's better for my ego that way..) I seriously have NO idea still what is going on but I am totally 100% hooked! You are doing a brilliant job of making all three personalities distinct and in character - looking forward to the next one with baited breath! :)

Author's Response: No, you're not dense - I'm just good at twisting things around. And when it's all revealed, the clues will stand out like dog's ...um...proverbials *blush*... So you're not even going to guess at who it is? Hmm, I have got you twisted around, haven't I?...Jules

Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 4

please keep it up!

Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 4

please keep it up!

Author's Response: I will, I will! Thanks for that. Next chapter coming soon....Jules

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 4

It's Friday and the promised update came early - yes, yes! ** Grins happily ** Jules, another piece of awesome, sensitive, touching and heartwrenching writing. I love this story. You are doing a wonderful job! I am so looking forward to the next chapter, like TOMORROW... uuhh, ahem... I know... but SOON please, ok? Otherwise no chocolate cookies for you - lol!

Author's Response: LOL - well, I am ahead of you all, so my Friday night is your early Friday morning, if you are in America. I'm eight hours ahead of France, and about ten hours ahead of England. Twelve to sixteen hours ahead of America, depending on which part you live in. No chocolate cookies??? *gasp*... I'm glad you are enjoying the ride - next chapter gets angsty, and a familiar face pops up...Jules

Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 4

please please please update soon - can hardly wait to see what happens next.

 

Rachel 



Author's Response: Thank you for that. The next chapter is a bit nail-biting....Jules

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 27/12/07 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 3

About to get interesting? Are you kidding...? this is one of the most interesting and original stories out there at the moment...I am absolutely loving this...

And the arrival of Sam, now that's raised the bar right up there, great update and roll on friday!!!!

I need to know what's going on big time...



Author's Response: LOL - well, you might be even more confused after chapter 4. Now Kayla has to get all three talking, so she can heal her patient - not going to be easy....Jules

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 27/12/07 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 2

Got to give you huge credit here Julie - this is fantastic writing. I wasn't expecting the twist with John turning up AT ALL and I'm not sure I would have known where to start if I'd been writing this...

Its very compulsive, and the doctor is such a great character that you really feel her need to do her job and protect Dean at the same time.

Awesome - moving on...



Author's Response: Thanks for that - glad you are enjoying it. There are a couple more twists to go before the end. And of course, John is going to make things interesting....Jules

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 24/12/07 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 3

Awesome! This is very well written! What an interesting turn - Sam as the third personality breaking though and each one of the brothers thinks of the other one as being dead and blames himself. I am soooo looking forward to the next chapter! Thank you and    MERRY CHRISTMAS!

Author's Response: And Merry Christmas to you too. Hope you had a good one. The next chapter has a tiny twist in it too. Hope you like...Jules

Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

I  am really enjoying this story. Like the first person commentary. And that beard shaving scene was nicely done, throwing in cleft chin, and sensuous lips and all. Nice touch. And DID John was an unexpected surprise. Can’t wait for more updates.



Author's Response: Thank you for that - and thanks for taking the time to review. John makes more appearances in chapter 4, much to Kayla's disgust...Jules

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 3

absolutely awesome! And Sammy joined the party... Great character this Kayla doc, fascinating the psychological aspect. And amazed by the power of the puppy dog eyes. Though i won't exagerate with it, i promise. This time i'll wait patiently till friday. I mean, with Christmas, family, gifts, digestion process, i should be able to wait. Till friday. OMG, friday?! There's gonna be an update friday, right? RIGHT? Zen fredo, zen... Anyway, i wish you a good holiday, and well, see you friday. Right?

Author's Response: Yes, yes, yes - stop nagging me - there's a Friday night update. But that's it until next Friday - no more mid-week updates - my puppy dog eyes have reached their expiry date. And yep, the Sam personality has joined the little group in Dean's head - let's see how well Kayla does with the whole family....Jules

Reviewer: supernaturaldh (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 3

Excellent.  I am wrapped up totally in this little story.  Keep it coming.

supernaturaldh



Author's Response: Thank you for that. I'm chuffed that I can entertain. And it was such an easy one to write, too - apart from the research, which gave me a headache...lol...Jules

Reviewer: SupernaturalGeek (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 3

So now Sam has joined the party - I am going to hold my hands up and admit I have absolutely no idea what on earth is going on here, but boy do you have me hooked! You are really teasing us with the little bits of info that are coming out and it is so well written, but then that is par for the course with your stories :) I love how John is winning friends as usual but my heart is breaking for Dean/Sam - I cannot wait to find out what the hell has happened to our boys?? Just on a side note it is great to see things with their 'proper' names and spellings! At least as far as us Brits & Aussies are concerned, right? *g* 

Author's Response:

Hehehe - sorry... Glad you haven't figured it out - not that I would tell you if you did. And I agree with you re the proper names for things - at least in our neck of the woods. But there are subtle clues as to which brother it really is - have you found them?....Jules

Reviewer: SupernaturalGeek (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 2

OMG! You totally threw me by having John show up, and 'in' Dean! What the hell?? I am so glad I only caught the update today as I can now go to chapter 3 *rushes off*

Author's Response: Hey, Michaela. Glad I could throw you - means I've hit my mark. Things are about to get tense...Jules

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 3

Bless you woman! This was just an awesome Christmassy surprise! I think that I love everything about this story!!! Kayla is a fabulous character - got some lovin goin for Jim and Mara too... This is just a wonderful piece of writing - great the way you have John through Dean - I did figure the third personality had to be Sam. This is the perfect way, after all, for Dean to once and for all keep his family together and "safe".... at his own expense - as always! So - you did promise that this wasn't a death fic, right? So at some point, Sammy is coming to the rescue???? Have an absolutely fabulous Christmas!!! Hope the pond is looking good - maybe Santa can take his flip flops off long enough to cool off a bit after he stuffs oodles of presents under your tree!!! Thanks again for such a great early xmas gift!

Author's Response: Thank you, Lisa. And Jim and Myra play a big part in the finale. And yes, I most certainly promise you won't see a death fic from me. And Sam is very close, now. Pond is looking much better now that the filter is on - my fishies are very happy now...lol...Jules

Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 3

Gads, you got me and that doesn't happen very often.  Can't wait to see how this one works out.

Author's Response: Ooh, did I? *pats self on head*. Thanks for that - and thanks for reading. Hope you like the next chapter - it's got a wee twist too...Jules

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