Reviewer: Dewyeyed (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You're not getting any of this
HOLY MOLEY!!!!!!!! Schelz, oh man...this is- I'm thirsty for more. "If you must know. It's not about you boys this time. Me and Ellen are old friends." Ellen licked his cheek and stood up. .....WOW!!! I love how its not even about the boys but about Ellen...you are awesome!!! Get moving with that final chapter, I wanna see how this is going to go down..Who dies? You decide! ROCK ON!!
Author's Response: Thanks Dru-Baby Thank you for liking what I tried to do here. Making it about Bobby being hurt and about Ellen's past instead of the boys. I really appreciated Ellen and Bobby's addition to the show...I have done the final chappy and should have it posted this week. Ta for the stars hun. Schelz | |
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 5 - You're not getting any of this
Such an awesome twist Schelz, and even better the second time around. Your imagination knows no bounds...hehe Beautifully written as ever with spot on banter and dialogue, just what I've come to expect from you and your stories. And you've cranked up the tension even more... Fantastic story, wonderfully written...great work Schelz :) X Louy
Author's Response: Thanks SO much, I always look forward to your reviews, makes my day. I'm so glad you think it was beautifully written and that I was spot on with the banter and dialogue. Cranked up the tension?? Thank you!!! Saying that my imagination knows no bounds has got to be the greatest compliment yet!!! Thanks for the wonderful stars xxx Schelz | |
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 5 - You're not getting any of this
A deathfic??? Who'll be dead??? Not one of the boys!!!! Is it Jo?? Ellen?? Ash????????? OMG........ It's always Dean who gets hurt, and Sam's the one the demons always want...can't the boys catch a break???
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 5 - You're not getting any of this
A deathfic??? Who'll be dead??? Not one of the boys!!!! Is it Jo?? Ellen?? Ash????????? OMG........ It's always Dean who gets hurt, and Sam's the one the demons always want...can't the boys catch a break???
Author's Response: Lyn Calm down hun *breath* Yes...a death fic...sorta! Not the boys, the demon wasn't after them for a change, it's after Ellen. Hun you know it's not like me to give the boys a hard time, I think you are getting me confused with gawjus beloved Bev...She hurts Dean (only when possessed) Thanks for the wonderful stars. | |
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You're not getting any of this
Schelz, Bad girl, leaving me hanging like this. Wonderful chapter, can't wait for the rest. Crys
Author's Response: Crys Sorry hun, next chap will be up soon. Glad you liked it!!! Schelz | |
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You're not getting any of this
Getting the feeling that listening to Sam or Dean isn't going to be high on Jo's list. Definitely didn't see the Ellen/demon connection coming, well done. - Angela
Author's Response: Not when her mom is involved ;) glad you didn't see my twist coming and even more glad you liked it. Thanks Angela;) Schelz | |
Reviewer: Roguehunter (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 2- Brain Damage!?!
Man, things aren't looking really good for Bobby at the moment. And it wasn't caused by something supernatural, you have my interest. Am wondering why another hunter would set his sights on Bobby. Looking forward to finding out. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Hi Rogue So glad to have caught your interest, hope you like what's to come. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. | |
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Like a game of cluedo
I didn't see THAT coming!!! Ellen!!!?? I never never NEVER see that coming!!! OMG..... Maybe Jo is possessed too??? And Ash?? And is it safe for Bobby to be alone in the hospital??? Man...questions...hope you get the answers....
Author's Response: Thanks loads for the stars Lyn;) Glad you didn't see that coming, maybe Jo is possessed...maybe not! Ash?? Don't worry Bobby is safe now...I hope my answers are to you readers liking. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Anybody out there (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Like a game of cluedo
Wow, Schelz, in case I wasn't hooked on your story before, I am now. Guess that leaves me... double hooked..? Anyway, this is a great update. And yup, your turn of events, I'm surprised. There's gonna be two more great chapters, right? Looking forward to it:) ~Anita~
Author's Response: Aww thanks Anita, glad you're hooked and I hope I can keep you readers happy. Glad you were surprised, yup I will have two more chapters...great?? I'll try. Schelz
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Like a game of cluedo
SOOO I'm gobsmacked, my mouth is so wide its catching flies. You have a wicked imagination!!! The things you come up with, your mind seems to work so differently from everyone elses. (outside the box writer) you work and develop stories from the smallest deatails... Pretzels???? Ash's watch??? Brilliant. I have read a lot but your work forces me to review, I just always have to tell you how brilliant your twists are, every time, every story. Keep it coming because I don't know how long I can wait! I need to see that Dean is ok. Hurry Sam!!!! Kitten xxx
Author's Response: Close you mouth woman, you know what flies land on don't you? Lol Thank you for saying I have a wicked imagination, means loads. outside the box writer?? I'm scared now, do you really think so? Yeah I guess I do work on small details. After they made it point to show us Ash's watch.. I just had a feeling he could come back and then had this weird feeling that Ellen was possessed. Forced to review?? Is that a good thing? ;) Thanks anyways. I'll post as soon as, thanks4review Schelz
Author's Response: Thanks for the stars kit
Reviewer: Dewyeyed (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Like a game of cluedo
FREAKING HECK SCHELZ!!! YOU'RE REALLY KILLING ME WITH STORY. I LOVE HOW YOU BROUGHT ASH BACK, VERY PLAUSIBLE COME BACK. I MEAN A WATCH AINT ENOUGH TO PROVE DEATH ANYNWAYS. OH AND LOVED BOBBY CONVERSATION WITH THE DOC EVEN THOUGH FLOYD DIDN'T KNOW. HEHEHE I LIKE HOW YOU PRESENTED CONFUSION IN THIS CHAPTER, FIRST BRINGING ASH BACK, THEN MAKING BOBBY REMEMBER WHO ATTACKED HIM. AND THEN GOING BACK AND ASH IS TELLING A STORY AND THEN HERE COMES ELLEN !!! TOTALLY BELIEVEABLE TOO, I DIDN'T TRUST HER WHEN SHE FIRST CAME BACK BECAUSE OF THAT PRETZEL EXCUSE. GLAD YOU REMINDED US HOW JOHN PASSED THE HOLY WATER TEST EVEN THOUGH POSSESSED.. ROCKS BIG TIME, PLEASE GIVE US MORE SOON. DRU-BABY
Author's Response: DRU-BABY Thanks for this great review, I agree and I hope that they somehow bring Ash back. Very glad you liked being confused. Lol Thank you for finding it believable. This idea actually came to me while watching AHBL2...I thought 'pretzelz??' really? Thanks for the review. Schelz
Author's Response: Thank you for the stars hunny
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Like a game of cluedo
Whoa! I didn't see that coming, and now I'm loving this story a whole lot more. Love how Ash is alive, very clever way to bring him back into the picture. This is a totally believeable scenario, I did think that was a lame excuse. Pretzels??? Well done on this chapter!!! Suga
Author's Response: Heya Suga Glad you are loving this story so much. Very happy that you like Ash's return. overjoyed that you found it clever and believeable. Thanks a lot
Author's Response: Thank you for the stars
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Like a game of cluedo
Holy Moley Bebg! Didn't see that coming! Ash is alive?? I love Ash but is it really him? And Ellen's gone dark side? Really? - Daemon? just plain wicked? Loved the Bobby coming too scene - so snarky and sweet! And now Ellen's gone and clobbered Dean! what's she gonna do to him? You gonna hurt him? Oh go on Bebg Hurt him a bit!!  Your Aba xx
Author's Response: HA! Glad you didn't see it coming Aba. Yup Ash is alive, I would answer all your questions but the next chapter will do that. So, I guess you'll have to wait for the next post. Glad you liked the Bobby scene, I don't know about hurting Dean, not as good at it as you. Lol I'll see what I can do you for you Aba. Your Bebg.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 3- He moved!
Bebg. Yeah Ellen here! And Dean's trying to look after her too he's such a wonderful Daddy to everyone and that's after he's just puked everywhere after cleaning his baby up! "Is that a threat Dean?" Sam smiled. "Only, if you don't go bed willingly." Dean winked at his baby brother" Heehee Cheeky Girl! Yeah Bobbster's coming round! More!!! Aba xx
Author's Response: Ahh my wonderful Aba! So glad your still enjoying it. I know, don't you just love Dean??? *slaps head* Dumb question. hehehe
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Like a game of cluedo
Loving this story SO much Schelz, It's so original. Love the Bobby banter, you've got his voice down whether it's inside his head or speaking out loud... And bringing it all round to the fire in the Roadhouse is a great bit of plot construction. Loved this story the first time you showed it to me and still loving it now!!!! XLouy
Author's Response: Lou thanks so much for this review, first word had me smiling. really thrilled that you find it original, and glad you liked the Bobby banter. Thanks for convincing me it was a good plot to work with. I was worried to post this but ur words of encouragement changed my mind, so I'm glad you're still enjoying as much as you did when I first sent it your way. Schelz xx
Author's Response: Thanks for the stars too, they shine extra bright from you.
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Like a game of cluedo
Schelz, Oh no!!! Caught me by surprise, very cool. Love Bobby’s conversation. Don’t make us wait too long for your next chapter. Crys
Author's Response: Crys. Glad you were caught by surprise, and glad you liked it. Thrilled Bobby's little convo was loved. I will post again as soon as poss. Schelz
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Like a game of cluedo
Oh no, Dean's in trouble, again. Update soon, please. Silvertayl
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Silvertayl, greatly appreciated. More coming very soon. Schelz
Author's Response: Thank you for the stars too.
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 3- He moved!
I don't find the pace slow at all fantasy, its only 3 chapters in. Yes!!! Bobby is awake. This is a good chapter and I will be waiting for next one. Suga
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 3- He moved!
I don't find the pace slow at all fantasy, its only 3 chapters in. Yes!!! Bobby is awake. This is a good chapter and I will be waiting for next one. Suga
Author's Response: Ahh, tar suga you're very sweet. Lol yay! Bobby is awake but for how long? Nah, I'm only joking he's safe. Post as soon as I can. Schelz | |
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 3- He moved!
Schelz.....great job! Can't wait for the rest of the chapters........... I sense Dean and Ellen in danger...... hmm...
Author's Response: | Tar very much Lyn;) for the stars and review...yep, I sense danger too. | |
Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 3- He moved!
really intriuging but a little to slow moving but really good!
Author's Response: | It is a lil slow, I admit. Lol I will bare that mind for future projects. Thanks alot for your review hun. | |
Reviewer: Ilex (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 3- He moved!
Great job; really enjoying this!
Author's Response: | Thanks a lot for the reading and reviewing hun. Glad you're enjoying it! | |
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 3- He moved!
So, are we allowed to like the beginning too - lol- I'll be happy to enjoy the rest whenever it comes!
Author's Response: | Yeah course you're allowed hun. Lol sometimes I just get worried because I want so much to entertain you guys!! Thanks alot for liking it all hun and for reviewing. | |
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 3- He moved!
Really dying to see who that person watching Dean is. And does Ellen know who already? Loving this story more and more, got me all excited now, if the three chapters so far are just the build up. Keep up the good work!!! Kitten
Author's Response: Ellen thinks she knows who it is but you'll have to wait and see. hehehhe. Thanks a lot for the review kitten. | |
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 3- He moved!
Hey Schelz! Great update! See you added in a part after my beta-ing. Does this affect the rest of what you sent me? Has anyofit changed? And to all those who were impatiently waiting for an update, sorry, it was my fault this one was late. Unfortunately the holidays with 2 kids is not the easiest time to get anything done! Not to mention that my laptop decided to have a nervous breakdown right after Xmas! We should be back to an update a week now tho!
Author's Response: | Thanks gen;) nope it doesn't affect the rest, I just thought the chapter was slightly thin so I did my best to add something more. Sounds like you've had a visit from the Computer Demon gen, shall I send the boys over? Lol | |
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